Risens RD1: OZ VS God Extensions

RiSeN · 03-28-2004, 07:49 PM

Ok,

10 Lines
first to four votes, no KO
Due by wednesday

Its is a sudden death, so if you lose this round- you WONT progress

ok, OZ and Trap.. Lets see what your made off

-Oz- · 03-28-2004, 08:16 PM

We no showing or what?

TRAP. · 03-28-2004, 11:48 PM

whats the use? dude bitched so much about the PBA,
i thought my AIM convos would turn into domestic abuse.
every line is forced - i ain't extending a dap or pound,
fucking clown - just go down, and let gravity take it's course.
stick with Writers Block - you might as well, it suits you dude,
i ain't talking about the crew - just the excuse you use for every L.
i'm the brains of this shit, essentially the wizard of oz,
you've got gay tendancies and flaws, follow the yellow brick road to every dick.
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ .. it's easy.
i'll just sleep through your verse and catch some extra Z's.

minimal effort. fuck around kiddo.

Self-Krysis · 03-29-2004, 02:14 AM

-Oz- · 03-29-2004, 02:16 AM

You must really believe im terrible. Haha Ill post tonight...

-Oz- · 03-29-2004, 08:59 AM

Whoa!
Damn this man's gar-bage, so if Oz doesn't slam his bod,
I'll pull Wool over his eyes, then Stab the Lamb Of God,
Crying "damnit Oz", cause he's the commishoner, so what?
Your just stating the reason why them bitches never show up,
Ya flow sucks, & you claim to be a "god" among us men?
So now even Kanye doesn't wanna see Jesus Walk again
Quit talking man, Oz is about, to kill this squeeling man,
I'll open ya mouth, & put 5 blades in ya roof like a ceiling fan
We aint feelin ya, old vet who fell off, but stinks of hope,
I think ya hit ya head when ya fell off, cause you think your dope

Minimal Effort

stick_swanson · 03-29-2004, 04:53 PM

lol i dont think your terrible i just don't like writing battle verses.

Synthesis · 03-29-2004, 07:05 PM

vote - oz

just killed it, trap, really, i hated ur verse, scheme, punches...come on man...

oz had a better verse all around

RiSeN · 03-29-2004, 07:45 PM

Vote: OZ

Trap, you struggled in areas of your verse, with a bad flow and not very witty punches, at all. The rhyme schem was off and it could have been worded 5 times better in most areas. I really doubt you tried, or atleast, i hope that wasnt your best shot : )

OZ, you just came with a better verse all round. Although it was better, i'd advise you to get stronger next round, as the competition is going be harder. Overall, decent verse though man, it was surely enough to take my vote for this one

Well done Fullaz,

TRAP. · 03-31-2004, 10:39 PM

eh oh well.
i can catch the flow perfect.

-Oz- · 03-31-2004, 11:48 PM

I caught it, its a lil shaky, but everyone is biased to their own flow, gotta realize its text, and people arent stoppin when you stop...and so on...

Super. · 04-02-2004, 12:45 AM

v/Trap

03-28-2004, 07:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
RiSeN Who, me? Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 835	Risens RD1: OZ VS God Extensions Ok, 10 Lines first to four votes, no KO Due by wednesday Its is a sudden death, so if you lose this round- you WONT progress ok, OZ and Trap.. Lets see what your made off

03-28-2004, 11:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
TRAP. i'm soo old school. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: middle east. Posts: 25,545	whats the use? dude bitched so much about the PBA, i thought my AIM convos would turn into domestic abuse. every line is forced - i ain't extending a dap or pound, fucking clown - just go down, and let gravity take it's course. stick with Writers Block - you might as well, it suits you dude, i ain't talking about the crew - just the excuse you use for every L. i'm the brains of this shit, essentially the wizard of oz, you've got gay tendancies and flaws, follow the yellow brick road to every dick. ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ .. it's easy. i'll just sleep through your verse and catch some extra Z's. minimal effort. fuck around kiddo. __________________ whyfebeater #1.

03-29-2004, 02:14 AM	#4 (permalink)
Self-Krysis Banned Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,836	.... __________________ TheSupaNatural: xero copy's our groupie DeceptioNX47X: FU in your stupid ass TheSupaNatural: If FU means Freaky Underagebitches, then yes DeceptioNX47X: so freaky underagebitches be in your ass? DeceptioNX47X: you must have a big asshole

03-29-2004, 04:53 PM	#7 (permalink)
stick_swanson fun fun fun. Join Date: May 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 100	lol i dont think your terrible i just don't like writing battle verses. __________________ hi.

03-29-2004, 07:05 PM	#8 (permalink)
Synthesis applied Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 7,451	vote - oz just killed it, trap, really, i hated ur verse, scheme, punches...come on man... oz had a better verse all around __________________ .

03-28-2004, 08:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,596	We no showing or what?

03-29-2004, 02:16 AM	#5 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,596	You must really believe im terrible. Haha Ill post tonight...

03-29-2004, 08:59 AM	#6 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,596	Whoa! Damn this man's gar-bage, so if Oz doesn't slam his bod, I'll pull Wool over his eyes, then Stab the Lamb Of God, Crying "damnit Oz", cause he's the commishoner, so what? Your just stating the reason why them bitches never show up, Ya flow sucks, & you claim to be a "god" among us men? So now even Kanye doesn't wanna see Jesus Walk again Quit talking man, Oz is about, to kill this squeeling man, I'll open ya mouth, & put 5 blades in ya roof like a ceiling fan We aint feelin ya, old vet who fell off, but stinks of hope, I think ya hit ya head when ya fell off, cause you think your dope Minimal Effort

03-29-2004, 07:45 PM	#9 (permalink)
RiSeN Who, me? Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 835	Vote: OZ Trap, you struggled in areas of your verse, with a bad flow and not very witty punches, at all. The rhyme schem was off and it could have been worded 5 times better in most areas. I really doubt you tried, or atleast, i hope that wasnt your best shot : ) OZ, you just came with a better verse all round. Although it was better, i'd advise you to get stronger next round, as the competition is going be harder. Overall, decent verse though man, it was surely enough to take my vote for this one Well done Fullaz,

03-31-2004, 10:39 PM	#10 (permalink)
TRAP. i'm soo old school. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: middle east. Posts: 25,545	eh oh well. i can catch the flow perfect. __________________ whyfebeater #1.

03-31-2004, 11:48 PM	#11 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,596	I caught it, its a lil shaky, but everyone is biased to their own flow, gotta realize its text, and people arent stoppin when you stop...and so on...

04-02-2004, 12:45 AM	#12 (permalink)
Super. Lovin' it Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: California Posts: 25,518	v/Trap

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