Fall Topical Tourney:: mr. rstl \/ headless versman

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Old 11-08-2003, 02:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Fall Topical Tourney:: mr. rstl \/ headless versman

verses due 11:59pm eastern Tuesday
votes due 11:59am Saturday

Rd 1 is open mic week, create your own open mic, it can be about anything, just make sure it's good enough to impress your voter

::line limit::

20 bars min :: 40 bars max

no more no less

there will be no extensions, bitching, or bull shit tolerated

if you want to win and think you can win, show up on time, follw the rules, and post a quotable verse

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Old 11-08-2003, 11:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Cheating Wives...The diary

(Chapter 1..Regret)
I've Lost It All-Only Thing Left...Is A Desire To Kill
No Will-They Took Even THAT Away...And It's Too Late To Rebuild
I've Filled...The Void With Vengence...Awaiting Retribution...
Executioned...Those Who've Ruined My Life...How Could I Be So Stupid?
No Sudden Improvement...Like I Thought There'd Be...Just No One Left To Hate...
No More Revenge To Taste...I'm Left...To Look My SiNs In The Face
Hatred Of Grim Reflections...Left With Conflicting Imperfections...
I've Learned My Lesson And Watched Friends Turn Into Victims In Seconds
Let It Infect My Thoughts...Til I Chose To Resolve My Problems With Weapons
Pain And Strife Reflected...Now I'm Burying The Cross...Of Anyone Wearing The Necklace
Restless...These Few Nights...With Demons Sharing My Bed...How Am I Supposed to Sleep?
How Am I Supposed To Dream...When Dried Blood...And Fresh Tear Drops...Soak The Sheets?
I Want The World Deceased...Been Stalking The Night...When I Lost The Will To Write
Looking For UnFaithFul Wives Like Mine...With Knives Welded To My Hand Like It Was Built To Slice

(Chapter 2...Anger)
I Finally See A Tryst...I See A Ring On His Finger...And None On Hers...
And No One CARES!...Are These People Blind!?! The Solution Was Laid Bare
Something In Me Teared...Something That Wanted To See Something Tear In Them
I Walked There To Give...Them A Release From Their Sins...Now Blood Covers My Limbs...
Now She Can't Ask Him To Forgive...The Dumbest Question..But I Feel My Need Is Repetitive
And The Hunger Is Festering...I Over Hear A Man Ask His Girl To Calm Down...Well I Hold The Strongest Sedative...

(Chapter 3...Retribution)
I Sent Seven Of Them...To The House That Heaven Built
Severed The Gift...And Dared Them What Seemed Like Forever To Live...
If It Was Up To Me...Forever They'd Feel...Pain-Quick To Slash A Lover
And Leave Steel Blades Engraved In Their Temples...Like Acupuncture...
The Cat Who Touched Her...His Face Appears As Every Male Casulty...
With Glares Challenging...Daring Me...To Impale His Anatomy...
Send Him To Death And He's...MisPlaced By Anothers Wrenched Face...
Who Met His Singe'd Fate...With Hands Still OutReached To Meet His Clenched Mate's
DisGrace...With Hidden Rings...He Couldn't Die With Honor...RePaid For His Deeds
Now I Savor His Screams...Acting The Angel Of Death Rebursing Him For His Greed...

(Chapter 4...Conclusion)
And Suddenly The Demons Out Of Me...The Hunger Withers
And I Gasp And Shiver As I See The Wounds Of My Victim In My Own Mirror
Killer And Victim One In The Same...Find The Master As Just One Of The Slaves...
WithOut A Way Of Avoiding The Grave...I Find A Jagged Blade Twisted And EnGraved...
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Old 11-09-2003, 01:34 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i think u recycled this verse

and thats gay
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Old 11-09-2003, 05:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Winless takes it up the butt!
How do u figure?

Headless always bitches
now thats gay

stop swaying shit nothing here is recycled
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Old 11-09-2003, 05:55 PM   #5 (permalink)
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ok, just wondering....

just figured since he posted so quick he recycled....ima post tomorow

no bitching about it
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Old 11-09-2003, 08:41 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Trap and someone else posted before i did....we must all recylced...but take ya time
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Old 11-10-2003, 10:30 PM   #7 (permalink)
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As a judge ive never seen that verse in my life...

so it counts in my book...
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Old 11-11-2003, 09:19 PM   #8 (permalink)
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not writing, u win
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Old 11-11-2003, 09:28 PM   #9 (permalink)
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headless got scurred
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Old 11-11-2003, 10:05 PM   #10 (permalink)
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ill be the man of us both here an edit this..

dont wanna sway like u did in my match.
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My flows are explosive, known as the opus, posted to roast kids,
shown as corrosive to foes since my motive’s focused on boasting/
Though it’s openly noticed…my syllables spill, killing for thrills,
since my weapon’s this intricate skill, mixed with ink and the quill/
Yet belligerence fills…voids within life, since toiling through strife,
shows the whole point of a cyph as annoyed kids avoiding the mic/
Joining to fight, within struggles of wits, where rebuttals are spit,
I’m coming equipped, uttering scripts to leave kids’ jugular’s split/
As they’re punished with quips, due to the fact I’m brutal with raps,
dissing these bitches spitting with writtens as the proof that they lack/
Any musical tact, I’m repping to curse you, wrecking with words to,
prove if you step in the circle I won’t need weapons to merck you/
Since I’ll hurt you & assault you quick, cut you then throw salt in it,
destroy your starting five, & then proceed to crush your alternates/
Kids falter since, we’ll spit evidence of, what this rhetoric does,
and show me and Headless the best since we rip forever because/

The high is better than drugs, our team is dirty were kareem an worthy
Till the opponent receives our comedic surgery and needs to plead for mercy
Speak till the slug leaks the lungs, till ya spirit flies by where ur weakness was
Verbal assaults sling our peak of shoves till we stain ya jeans an lugz
Stand before ya maker, seek repentance or flee ur sentence
Then be found years from now underneath the streets of Venice
in the catacombs cuz my gat has clones
that can put out enough lead to turn ur matter into that of stones
I bet ur wondering why I even mention a gun
Cuz u kids look at me and see heat like the predator does
The absolute pinnacle, im the most hated, the most wasted
U kids take me out of context like seeing moses in a boat, racing
Parting the sea with the wake, pardon me ima take
2, ur like leaves, when u fall I have a black bag to put u in after I rake u
slithering like a harry potter wing or moving how a snake do
here’s analogy practice, balth’s hair an these verses…..ya, they fake doo
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every keep it shut

why would i be scared of that boring ass verse he posted


its not entertaining if i fall afuckinsleep while trying to read through the bullshit


l dogg, stick to rm bcuz you SUCK at writing
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Old 11-11-2003, 10:47 PM   #13 (permalink)
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haha ^ come kiss me on my dick u little girl..

atleast u took enough offense to post somthing..
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Old 11-11-2003, 11:06 PM   #14 (permalink)
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actually, its a collab i did


i have about 3 more to do

i could give a fuck about topicals, none of them are ever worth reading

not in the sense that u write

so, dont take too much credit

this was copy an paste
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Old 11-12-2003, 01:01 PM   #15 (permalink)
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thank you both for posting, upping for votes...
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Old 11-13-2003, 10:20 PM   #16 (permalink)
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trapezoidal. takes it up the butt!
balth ripped that, so did you headless.
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Old 11-15-2003, 12:14 AM   #18 (permalink)
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well since this is a TOPICAL tourney...my vote goes to mr.rstl...he had a well constructed verse..nice flw n multi's..good imagery but the emotion he portrayed stuck out most in my mind..n they got him my vote...headless came wit a dope ass open mic tho.spittin heat wit tha multi's n flow...had sum good meta's...but on tha topical tip ...rstl got this....pz
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Old 11-15-2003, 12:57 AM   #19 (permalink)
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^that was a bullshit vote, you cant vote for some1 just cus its "topical", headless had a topic to-sayin hes iller than you and killin people, everything has a topic

Mr.RSTL- beginning bored the fuck outta me, but the second verse had me becoming interested, really switched up too sudden tho, youre sad, then right away in next verse youre mad, then you do kill in next verse, kinda too sudden, didnt just gradually lead into the next emotion
All the same, end was nice, the Actually ENDING i wasnt feeling, "look and see the wounds of the victim in my own mirror" wasnt feelin that at all, been done way too many times kinda, simple, and jus seemed like it was ended that way cus you were rushing

Headless-first 8 lines, not bad, had a chance to win, but the Same old ass long flow with the multi-sylables in the same spots just became repetitive, and alot of your lines made no sense:

"Since I’ll hurt you & assault you quick, cut you then throw salt in it,"

throw salt in what^ i mean really...so,

Vote-Mr. RSTL, headless didnt really make much of a match in this 'battle', one-sided
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Old 11-15-2003, 01:09 AM   #20 (permalink)
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the cut u idiot

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