summer semi's: 07- insanity V 27- leeharveyoswald

Vern Acular · 07-20-2003, 04:39 PM

SEMI-FINALS

::TOPIC::

"describe your dislike and likes of each of the 4 seasons"

verses due wed. @ 11:59pm eastern
votes due sat. @ 11:59am eastern

20 bar min ... 40 bar max

good luck

Insanity · 07-20-2003, 05:00 PM

hey Demmy... good luck

checkin' in

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-23-2003, 12:34 AM

hooray for everything

Insanity · 07-23-2003, 06:23 PM

ahh!! running out of time. Got to work

keystyle for y'all

I’ll start with autumn; the setting is depressed and solemn
Leaves that have fallen, crunch beneath each step when walkin’
It’s a time for college parties, first semester is always neat when
You don’t go to school to think, just to drink on the weekends
Girls become freaks when, alcohol limits inhibitions
And it gives’em intuitions, that Ken’s equipped to hit’em
Not to mention my birthday, comes every October
Every year as I got older, I spent less time not sober
And in winter it got colder, snowy, and not a lively time
I had an apartment were I’d be fine, partying like ‘99
With no college party scene, winter grows old fast
Riches don’t last, and Christmas leaves me broke ass
My wallet’s busted, I haven’t nutted, winter ain’t great to me
So I aim to see, Springtime, shiverin as I wait patiently
Then comes Spring, the parties magically come back again
Girls once again have passion in, getting drunk and attractin’ men
Having spunk blast at them… god I love the spring time
Every girl wants to be loved… and I got the right words to feed dimes
Then the school year ends, and in summer your annoyed
You see all the high school kids, you’ve tried to avoid
All the past drama resurfaces, whole attitude is nervousness
All the women you’ve been twistin’ wonder where the pervert is
And why you never called, and why you don’t hang out
Like it’s ever your fault, things proceeded from when you made out
Into getting’ laid out and banged out, so I stay at my apartment
Waiting for a new school year, so I can get out these undergarments

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-23-2003, 10:28 PM

i hate this topic so much

its giving me a head ache

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-24-2003, 12:29 AM

Team Demik is on to the finals

Winter, the birth of a new year, plains covered in snow
Mother nature's time to rest, animals pick up and go
Some find winter saddening, failing to see the true beauty
One needs to see the whole picture to appreciate it truely
Because for seeds to be planted, winter comes first
On the coat tails of winter comes the melting to spring's birth

On to spring, better weather conditions and new things
Seeds, Babies and rain fall is what this season brings
Her peak of activity, because after spring, nature is spent
With things dieing all the time, spring replenishes them
My favourite season of them all, and this is the truth
Because if it stands for anything, spring stands for youth

Next is the month of June, and school kids know what that means
Last month of school and the longest of all months it seems
Not my favourite, but next in line for it's rest and relaxation
Wonders for my sex life, even eye candy for your bikini fixation
Then august, summer ends and the leaves turn their darkest
The start of the dark seasons growth, along with fall harvest

Pumpkin patches and Halloween couldnt lighten this dreary time
Showing death and dryness make it the least favourite of mine
Weather changes and school is back, near the end of the cycle
But a new end leads to a new beginning, for those to be insightful
However, the end leads to winter, the snow...and the it melts
On to Decmber, January and the cycle repeats itself

Hard Nipples

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-24-2003, 12:47 PM

damn the non-voters

Resilient. · 07-24-2003, 01:02 PM

Insanity - You verse I enjoyed alot. Had comedy, and alot of truths in it as well. Your flow was onpoint throughout, and you had some effective multies in there. The shit about Winter and Summer I liked especially because you added more comedic lines in there reflecting on truth. Nice Verse..

Demik - Although you had a nice verse with some great points and alot of truths ('cept your sex life part), you didn't follow up with the topic. You described the seasons, the topic was to tell how you liked and disliked them. But good verse nonetheless

Vote - Insanity

-Weez

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-24-2003, 01:05 PM

0-1

i cant help it

the topic was hard...it was such an oprah magazine type thing.....

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-24-2003, 08:43 PM

bakka wakka

vengeance · 07-24-2003, 08:54 PM

Insanity - Funny piece, you took it more laid back, kinda like a pop song, but honestly, the only season that was ill that you did was summer, the rest were straight.

Demik - More serious approach, more in depth, except summer, but whatever, topicals are usually about detail and being specific, and thats what you had over big Ken. And also why you took it.

Vote- Demik

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-24-2003, 09:07 PM

1-1

im sexier than big ken

yah...i said it

*runs off naked into sunset*

07-24-2003, 11:34 PM

Insanity-
A nice verse, had some great imagery at the beginning. Had a nice flow, and you took more of a 'description into how seasons affect your life' approach.

Demik-
Took a unique approach to the topic. Had everything organized and really described the seasons. Had the flow, imagery, and description needed to make the topic work.

Vote- Demik, I liked his approach to the topic more, and how he described the cycle of it all. Insanity took a different approach, and kinda ran off topic when talking about sex...lol

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-25-2003, 10:43 PM

2-1

big penis

Hard Nipples

Vern Acular · 07-26-2003, 01:23 PM

lol...team demik to the finals

im going for demik as well...both verses were aight, but i liked demiks more due to the fact each switch from season to season gave me more detail and imagery, insanity's was aight, but just not enough

Vern Acular · 07-26-2003, 01:49 PM

winner: demik

07-20-2003, 04:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: NC Posts: 5,027	summer semi's: 07- insanity V 27- leeharveyoswald SEMI-FINALS ::TOPIC:: "describe your dislike and likes of each of the 4 seasons" verses due wed. @ 11:59pm eastern votes due sat. @ 11:59am eastern 20 bar min ... 40 bar max good luck __________________ TH3 3LIT3 2005 NO ID TOURNEY WINNER 1x POET TREE CHAMP 12x RSTL CHAMP Yes...I've Beat You Before www.soundclick.com/eulogy www.myspace.com/eulogy46

07-20-2003, 05:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
Insanity Retro Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Who's the great of the Hoosier State? Posts: 5,977	hey Demmy... good luck checkin' in __________________ !ND !NC HOOSIER DADDY

07-23-2003, 12:34 AM	#3 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	hooray for everything __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-23-2003, 06:23 PM	#4 (permalink)
Insanity Retro Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Who's the great of the Hoosier State? Posts: 5,977	ahh!! running out of time. Got to work keystyle for y'all I’ll start with autumn; the setting is depressed and solemn Leaves that have fallen, crunch beneath each step when walkin’ It’s a time for college parties, first semester is always neat when You don’t go to school to think, just to drink on the weekends Girls become freaks when, alcohol limits inhibitions And it gives’em intuitions, that Ken’s equipped to hit’em Not to mention my birthday, comes every October Every year as I got older, I spent less time not sober And in winter it got colder, snowy, and not a lively time I had an apartment were I’d be fine, partying like ‘99 With no college party scene, winter grows old fast Riches don’t last, and Christmas leaves me broke ass My wallet’s busted, I haven’t nutted, winter ain’t great to me So I aim to see, Springtime, shiverin as I wait patiently Then comes Spring, the parties magically come back again Girls once again have passion in, getting drunk and attractin’ men Having spunk blast at them… god I love the spring time Every girl wants to be loved… and I got the right words to feed dimes Then the school year ends, and in summer your annoyed You see all the high school kids, you’ve tried to avoid All the past drama resurfaces, whole attitude is nervousness All the women you’ve been twistin’ wonder where the pervert is And why you never called, and why you don’t hang out Like it’s ever your fault, things proceeded from when you made out Into getting’ laid out and banged out, so I stay at my apartment Waiting for a new school year, so I can get out these undergarments __________________ !ND !NC HOOSIER DADDY

07-23-2003, 10:28 PM	#5 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	i hate this topic so much its giving me a head ache __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-24-2003, 12:29 AM	#6 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	Team Demik is on to the finals Winter, the birth of a new year, plains covered in snow Mother nature's time to rest, animals pick up and go Some find winter saddening, failing to see the true beauty One needs to see the whole picture to appreciate it truely Because for seeds to be planted, winter comes first On the coat tails of winter comes the melting to spring's birth On to spring, better weather conditions and new things Seeds, Babies and rain fall is what this season brings Her peak of activity, because after spring, nature is spent With things dieing all the time, spring replenishes them My favourite season of them all, and this is the truth Because if it stands for anything, spring stands for youth Next is the month of June, and school kids know what that means Last month of school and the longest of all months it seems Not my favourite, but next in line for it's rest and relaxation Wonders for my sex life, even eye candy for your bikini fixation Then august, summer ends and the leaves turn their darkest The start of the dark seasons growth, along with fall harvest Pumpkin patches and Halloween couldnt lighten this dreary time Showing death and dryness make it the least favourite of mine Weather changes and school is back, near the end of the cycle But a new end leads to a new beginning, for those to be insightful However, the end leads to winter, the snow...and the it melts On to Decmber, January and the cycle repeats itself Hard Nipples __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-24-2003, 12:47 PM	#7 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	damn the non-voters __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-24-2003, 01:02 PM	#8 (permalink)
Resilient. ILLWEEMAN Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: En-Why Sucka Posts: 23,774	Insanity - You verse I enjoyed alot. Had comedy, and alot of truths in it as well. Your flow was onpoint throughout, and you had some effective multies in there. The shit about Winter and Summer I liked especially because you added more comedic lines in there reflecting on truth. Nice Verse.. Demik - Although you had a nice verse with some great points and alot of truths ('cept your sex life part), you didn't follow up with the topic. You described the seasons, the topic was to tell how you liked and disliked them. But good verse nonetheless Vote - Insanity -Weez __________________ I'M JUST A H O O L I G A N OF CYBER RAP (What The Shit is a Textmaster?) ------------------------- iLLWeeZGoD Baby! My RBL Battle Vs. Linesman

07-24-2003, 01:05 PM	#9 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	0-1 i cant help it the topic was hard...it was such an oprah magazine type thing..... __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-24-2003, 08:43 PM	#10 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	bakka wakka __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-24-2003, 08:54 PM	#11 (permalink)
vengeance shockgod Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: militia Posts: 13,593	Insanity - Funny piece, you took it more laid back, kinda like a pop song, but honestly, the only season that was ill that you did was summer, the rest were straight. Demik - More serious approach, more in depth, except summer, but whatever, topicals are usually about detail and being specific, and thats what you had over big Ken. And also why you took it. Vote- Demik __________________ LA † Nasif † JohnDough † Aura † Defcon5 † † Phobia † WordSmith † Shock † UserNizzle † HA! † Pinnacle † Former Rstl Champ Future Rbl Champ

07-24-2003, 09:07 PM	#12 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	1-1 im sexier than big ken yah...i said it runs off naked into sunset __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-24-2003, 11:34 PM	#13 (permalink)
Macabre Guest Posts: n/a	Insanity- A nice verse, had some great imagery at the beginning. Had a nice flow, and you took more of a 'description into how seasons affect your life' approach. Demik- Took a unique approach to the topic. Had everything organized and really described the seasons. Had the flow, imagery, and description needed to make the topic work. Vote- Demik, I liked his approach to the topic more, and how he described the cycle of it all. Insanity took a different approach, and kinda ran off topic when talking about sex...lol

07-25-2003, 10:43 PM	#14 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	2-1 big penis Hard Nipples __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-26-2003, 01:23 PM	#15 (permalink)
Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: NC Posts: 5,027	lol...team demik to the finals im going for demik as well...both verses were aight, but i liked demiks more due to the fact each switch from season to season gave me more detail and imagery, insanity's was aight, but just not enough __________________ TH3 3LIT3 2005 NO ID TOURNEY WINNER 1x POET TREE CHAMP 12x RSTL CHAMP Yes...I've Beat You Before www.soundclick.com/eulogy www.myspace.com/eulogy46

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07-26-2003, 01:49 PM	#16 (permalink)
Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: NC Posts: 5,027	winner: demik __________________ TH3 3LIT3 2005 NO ID TOURNEY WINNER 1x POET TREE CHAMP 12x RSTL CHAMP Yes...I've Beat You Before www.soundclick.com/eulogy www.myspace.com/eulogy46

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