summer tourney: 06- LOJAK v 27- LEEHARVEYOSWALD

Vern Acular · 07-06-2003, 06:24 PM

WELCOME TO THE
VERN & LOJAK
SUMMER TOPICAL TOURNEY

verses are due THURSDAY @ 9pm eastern
votes are due SUNDAY @ 12pm eastern

each participant must vote on atleast 6 battles

:: TOPICS ::

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...hreadid=597721

good luck to all

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-07-2003, 02:16 PM

bitch motherfucker

_Lojak_ · 07-07-2003, 02:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LeeHarveyOswald

bitch motherfucker

blah

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-07-2003, 05:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _Lojak_

blah

im finnin to grill some grits up in this

whodi

_Lojak_ · 07-07-2003, 05:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LeeHarveyOswald

im finnin to grill some grits up in this

whodi

lol ok......grill grits eh?

_Lojak_ · 07-10-2003, 03:24 AM

EGOTISM.......

God forsake my mind couldn't relate, made phrenetic
face rejection, my face blemished,hate for my reflection
AID's infected, health neglected, self-eteem in depression
system in confection, a mix of marijuana and anti-depressants
I was always blessed with wholeness, mental, true and devine
lines I write are complex like enzymes,spew my views in ryhmes
im ten times that, of a poetical mastermind, einstien of "the verse"
bars i burp, lyrical warlord, turnin my way, is a turn for "the worse"
demented, mentioned as vicious and splendid in the same sentense
my existance glistens,17 years ive been livin, infected with wisdom
consider it ridiculous, to take a verse the distance, or to elaborate
rap is a mastered trait, i write at the rate Your Phobia masterbates
collaberate with none, im above their level on my own pedastool
and if i check you dudes in a thread, better believe my i-net respect is due
my protocol is to be known to yall as a self exclaimed know it all
my EGO is raw, post nonsense and got the dick ryders in complete awe
the veracious statements are awaitin the day my ego stands vagrant
immaturity ancient, the same day my skill is level is in proper placement
but face it, despite the hatred, my anus is still active in this rap ecosystem
and i see no quitin, im driven off this cyber life im livin, admist my own EGOTISM

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-10-2003, 01:28 PM

06- poor sportsmanship

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-10-2003, 11:27 PM

if i can get an extension till 11 i can make it

i just got back from work

if not, thats cool

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-10-2003, 11:50 PM

Writer's Block

Like a dark cloud, shrouded in myst, it sweeps and takes over
Your thoughts and feelings, ideas and expressions, it is their owner
Panic and frustration, your mind in it's own is in bedlam
You know your feelings, but have no the words to express them
Trying to meet deadlines but your mind is pushing you to stall
You bang on the invisible barrior but cant break through the wall
Finally the words like a trickle, bleed on to the paper
Your thoughts explored and your stories are now safer
Unlocked from the vault in your mind to share with everyone who reads it
An inspiration to some, a far fetched storie who dont beleive it
Bursting through the block in your head, reducing to shards
As your emotions and mind chalk to the paper straight from the heart
The world experiences what you have, they reflect on what youve wrote
Some may not beleive your thinking but to each his own
Thoughts woven in time, wordplay too intense to see what the riddles be
This piece of mastery lays your spoken word down in the halls of history
Knockoffs are all cheap, dont be bothered with how the biter's talk
This came from you, and it all started at the first signs of writer's block

07-11-2003, 01:25 AM

Hopefully it's counted
Too many no shows as it is

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-11-2003, 01:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Macaþre

Hopefully it's counted
Too many no shows as it is

i kno....

Vern Acular · 07-11-2003, 02:13 PM

this match'll continue cause atleast they showed

FortiFied Killa · 07-11-2003, 03:51 PM

nice battle

lojak- you came harder then I expected you to, very nice. although I found your verse to be more of a battle peice then a topical peice. Flow was on tap throughout and wordplay was creative, although, as stated before, battle like.

demik- Nice peice, although you could have came better. probably rushed this peice seeing how you did know if it would be excepted or not. Nice wordplay, flow kept up making reading easy.

vote=demik, both these peices were nice, but demiks was more of a topical then lojaks in my opinion.

LeeHarveyOswald · 07-11-2003, 06:57 PM

groovy 1-0

Vectore · 07-11-2003, 10:39 PM

uppin mufuckas

Vectore · 07-12-2003, 08:05 AM

cock penis

Negativity · 07-12-2003, 08:58 AM

vote: demik

neither were proper topicals really...both were really just open mics..i know alot of ppl wont understand that..but it makes sense..anyway..demik won this for me coz he wrote about sum sort of topic anyway..although it wasnt a story..or tacklin important issues..(which is what i class as a topical)..he sitll came better than lojak..who's verse could not pass a topical..it was merely braggin..atleast dmeiks could be used as an rstl verse..braggin verses are time wastin open mics..not topicals..dmeiks was better anyway..

pz

Vern Acular · 07-12-2003, 02:04 PM

agreed with shock...both were more on the open mic tip, umm, lol, naw they were topicals, a topical is an open mic, duh, anyway i did go with demik, i was feeling his structure more than lojaks, and that was the only area you 2 didn't match each other, props to lojak though, i never peeped you, and i did think you were just gonna be one of those cats that thinks you're god but you're not, keep working

_Lojak_ · 07-12-2003, 07:38 PM

word thanks lol...i know...nobody peeps me lol......good verse demik ......

Vectore · 07-12-2003, 11:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _Lojak_

word thanks lol...i know...nobody peeps me lol......good verse demik ......

back at cha man

07-06-2003, 06:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: NC Posts: 5,027	summer tourney: 06- LOJAK v 27- LEEHARVEYOSWALD WELCOME TO THE VERN & LOJAK SUMMER TOPICAL TOURNEY verses are due THURSDAY @ 9pm eastern votes are due SUNDAY @ 12pm eastern each participant must vote on atleast 6 battles :: TOPICS :: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...hreadid=597721 good luck to all __________________ TH3 3LIT3 2005 NO ID TOURNEY WINNER 1x POET TREE CHAMP 12x RSTL CHAMP Yes...I've Beat You Before www.soundclick.com/eulogy www.myspace.com/eulogy46

07-07-2003, 02:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	bitch motherfucker __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-10-2003, 03:24 AM	#6 (permalink)
_Lojak_ Dont Overlook Me Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Deep Within The Mind Posts: 634	EGOTISM....... God forsake my mind couldn't relate, made phrenetic face rejection, my face blemished,hate for my reflection AID's infected, health neglected, self-eteem in depression system in confection, a mix of marijuana and anti-depressants I was always blessed with wholeness, mental, true and devine lines I write are complex like enzymes,spew my views in ryhmes im ten times that, of a poetical mastermind, einstien of "the verse" bars i burp, lyrical warlord, turnin my way, is a turn for "the worse" demented, mentioned as vicious and splendid in the same sentense my existance glistens,17 years ive been livin, infected with wisdom consider it ridiculous, to take a verse the distance, or to elaborate rap is a mastered trait, i write at the rate Your Phobia masterbates collaberate with none, im above their level on my own pedastool and if i check you dudes in a thread, better believe my i-net respect is due my protocol is to be known to yall as a self exclaimed know it all my EGO is raw, post nonsense and got the dick ryders in complete awe the veracious statements are awaitin the day my ego stands vagrant immaturity ancient, the same day my skill is level is in proper placement but face it, despite the hatred, my anus is still active in this rap ecosystem and i see no quitin, im driven off this cyber life im livin, admist my own EGOTISM __________________ The Second Coming .....LOJAK...... AUDIOS

07-10-2003, 01:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	06- poor sportsmanship __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-10-2003, 11:27 PM	#8 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	if i can get an extension till 11 i can make it i just got back from work if not, thats cool __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-10-2003, 11:50 PM	#9 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	Writer's Block Like a dark cloud, shrouded in myst, it sweeps and takes over Your thoughts and feelings, ideas and expressions, it is their owner Panic and frustration, your mind in it's own is in bedlam You know your feelings, but have no the words to express them Trying to meet deadlines but your mind is pushing you to stall You bang on the invisible barrior but cant break through the wall Finally the words like a trickle, bleed on to the paper Your thoughts explored and your stories are now safer Unlocked from the vault in your mind to share with everyone who reads it An inspiration to some, a far fetched storie who dont beleive it Bursting through the block in your head, reducing to shards As your emotions and mind chalk to the paper straight from the heart The world experiences what you have, they reflect on what youve wrote Some may not beleive your thinking but to each his own Thoughts woven in time, wordplay too intense to see what the riddles be This piece of mastery lays your spoken word down in the halls of history Knockoffs are all cheap, dont be bothered with how the biter's talk This came from you, and it all started at the first signs of writer's block __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-11-2003, 01:25 AM	#10 (permalink)
Macabre Guest Posts: n/a	Hopefully it's counted Too many no shows as it is

07-11-2003, 02:13 PM	#12 (permalink)
Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: NC Posts: 5,027	this match'll continue cause atleast they showed __________________ TH3 3LIT3 2005 NO ID TOURNEY WINNER 1x POET TREE CHAMP 12x RSTL CHAMP Yes...I've Beat You Before www.soundclick.com/eulogy www.myspace.com/eulogy46

07-11-2003, 03:51 PM	#13 (permalink)
FortiFied Killa Registered User Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Toronto Posts: 6,615	nice battle lojak- you came harder then I expected you to, very nice. although I found your verse to be more of a battle peice then a topical peice. Flow was on tap throughout and wordplay was creative, although, as stated before, battle like. demik- Nice peice, although you could have came better. probably rushed this peice seeing how you did know if it would be excepted or not. Nice wordplay, flow kept up making reading easy. vote=demik, both these peices were nice, but demiks was more of a topical then lojaks in my opinion. __________________ Prepare for a moon spanking

07-11-2003, 06:57 PM	#14 (permalink)
LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 10,107	groovy 1-0 __________________ Winner Of Vern Acular's Summer Topical Tourny Hit 10K On 08-10-2003 MIC

07-11-2003, 10:39 PM	#15 (permalink)
Vectore dialectsthis&dialectsthat Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 11,804	uppin mufuckas

07-12-2003, 08:05 AM	#16 (permalink)
Vectore dialectsthis&dialectsthat Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 11,804	cock penis

07-12-2003, 08:58 AM	#17 (permalink)
Negativity shush Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: 1x Rstl Champ Posts: 1,614	vote: demik neither were proper topicals really...both were really just open mics..i know alot of ppl wont understand that..but it makes sense..anyway..demik won this for me coz he wrote about sum sort of topic anyway..although it wasnt a story..or tacklin important issues..(which is what i class as a topical)..he sitll came better than lojak..who's verse could not pass a topical..it was merely braggin..atleast dmeiks could be used as an rstl verse..braggin verses are time wastin open mics..not topicals..dmeiks was better anyway.. pz __________________ WonderFlow Shock - Trax - Ninth Wonder - Werz Perfekt - Blazin' Idi Admin - Pharoehe Def - Barz Victorious - WarLoKK - worst Attitude The End Of Verbs RM LifeSpan

07-12-2003, 02:04 PM	#18 (permalink)
Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: NC Posts: 5,027	agreed with shock...both were more on the open mic tip, umm, lol, naw they were topicals, a topical is an open mic, duh, anyway i did go with demik, i was feeling his structure more than lojaks, and that was the only area you 2 didn't match each other, props to lojak though, i never peeped you, and i did think you were just gonna be one of those cats that thinks you're god but you're not, keep working __________________ TH3 3LIT3 2005 NO ID TOURNEY WINNER 1x POET TREE CHAMP 12x RSTL CHAMP Yes...I've Beat You Before www.soundclick.com/eulogy www.myspace.com/eulogy46

07-12-2003, 07:38 PM	#19 (permalink)
_Lojak_ Dont Overlook Me Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Deep Within The Mind Posts: 634	word thanks lol...i know...nobody peeps me lol......good verse demik ...... __________________ The Second Coming .....LOJAK...... AUDIOS

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