NO GRAPHIC FEBRUARY TEXT TOURNAMENT RD 1: Deon vs Richter

[Silentt L]

THE NO GRAPHIC FEBUARY TOURNAMENT!!!!!!



The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.

Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.

All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. If a line limit is not agreed on by both battlers, the second battler to post must match the # of lines posted by the first battler. You can post less but never more.

You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.

No, biting, recycling, or feed. Being gay will result in a DQ, so some of you have no chance at all.

[I'm Deon]

12-16

[Richter]

i'm here.

[I'm Deon]

yoo




I'll embarass this fraud, they should'nt compare us at all,
I'm significant, your's show's the only Heir you could be is Los Angeles smog.
I fuck dime pieces while this weirdo clown's into some mules,
every bitch on Richter scale even makes the ground quiver & move.
..but as far as your mother, I must admit that she's my type,
everytime I see that box, score is what I do w/ plenty of highlights.
Kid'll get riders. I'm telling you punks are shook when I write,
It's not coz I have a string, s'coz it's tied around ya neck & i'm pulling it tight.
so I know this cat'll fled then run since he's never said shit tough,
but he'd bring my verse down fast..with a no show, cuz open threads get upped.
if there was a cash prize involved i'd stomp this dummy's moves,
to show that i'm the entertainer clowning you for the love of money 2.

g'luck

[Richter]

http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-c...cher-vote.html

IAR Final and RBL special? what a night for the judge panel
how the fuck you lose to the same person twice off one battle?
It's sad yo. you can trust it'll come to a closure quick
either way. you winning is like getting Oneduh to post a pic
You ain't a champ. no reason for cats to de-throne this head
you lack in all Criteria. you should be batteling Tbone instead
A punch'll lay em on his back. man this dudes a hoe fighting
you'll be seeing mysterious lights in the sky. like a UFO sighting
You beating Richter? well. lets see if that fiction sells
i'll walk on the set and shine on the scene. you'd get yelled at by Christian Bale
Bitch ass. heard it's been years since you layed with a bitch
i guess going out with dignity. is the only date you can get

I'll embarass this fraud, they should'nt compare us at all,
I'm significant, your's show's the only Heir you could be is Los Angeles smog.
-- good idea, but the wording was kinda brutal
I fuck dime pieces while this weirdo clown's into some mules,
every bitch on Richter scale even makes the ground quiver & move.
-- nice lil name play here...set up was wierd but non the less I liked this.
..but as far as your mother, I must admit that she's my type,
everytime I see that box, score is what I do w/ plenty of highlights.
-- this wasnt too hard hitting, but it was aight
Kid'll get riders. I'm telling you punks are shook when I write,
It's not coz I have a string, s'coz it's tied around ya neck & i'm pulling it tight.
-- nice lil imagery here
so I know this cat'll fled then run since he's never said shit tough,
but he'd bring my verse down fast..with a no show, cuz open threads get upped.
-- your set up was terrible on grammer but I liked the punch alot
if there was a cash prize involved i'd stomp this dummy's moves,
to show that i'm the entertainer clowning you for the love of money 2.
-- aight lil close...I've seen love of money punches before but this was coo

vs.

IAR Final and RBL special? what a night for the judge panel
how the fuck you lose to the same person twice off one battle?
-- nice hit here
It's sad yo. you can trust it'll come to a closure quick
either way. you winning is like getting Oneduh to post a pic
-- I've seen this punch done before a couple of times
You ain't a champ. no reason for cats to de-throne this head
you lack in all Criteria. you should be batteling Tbone instead
-- coo...minus the grammer
A punch'll lay em on his back. man this dudes a hoe fighting
you'll be seeing mysterious lights in the sky. like a UFO sighting
-- this was nice...coo lil imagery here
You beating Richter? well. lets see if that fiction sells
i'll walk on the set and shine on the scene. you'd get yelled at by Christian Bale
-- I saw a christian bale line last week, so it had no impact with me...and I dont think it was that hard hitting either way
Bitch ass. heard it's been years since you layed with a bitch
i guess going out with dignity. is the only date you can get
-- this was aight, but again I dont think it was hard hitting.

well it seemed like Deon rushed it a lil cuz his wording is usually on point...but in this battle the structure seemed to be off a lil, but the creativity was still their. Richter had a nice opener which was probably the most effective punch in the battle but other than that nothing was too hard hitting. Richter was more crisp with wording but Deon was more crisp with punches...so yeah, I got Deon

Vote = Deon

[Tristan.]

I fuck dime pieces while this weirdo clown's into some mules,
every bitch on Richter scale even makes the ground quiver & move.

not like your usual, but it was decent. sometimes the wording was a bit iffy.

IAR Final and RBL special? what a night for the judge panel
how the fuck you lose to the same person twice off one battle?
A punch'll lay em on his back. man this dudes a hoe fighting
you'll be seeing mysterious lights in the sky. like a UFO sighting

just a little more polished than deon with wording. this verse was decent as well, it also had less flaws.

vote-richter

[Servical]

V/Richter

Lol, is this the same Deon?

You should've taken your time here, your wording at times wasn't as on point like it usually is.

Richter's punches were more crisper, and the opener was lotb to me.

[Ovea]

i'm not even saying i think i won

but

i dont get how the opener was lotb when i actually beat nick fletcher twice in one battle

i had the votes over him in 3 threads total actually on 3 different sites & won 400 bucks, so not only is it false but reversed of what actually took place

buuuut, if you guys like it i love it

g'head and close it up & let the homie handle bidness next week

g'luck richter

[Silentt L]

Richter wins.