Rwe Ref Eval (final Phase)

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Old 08-21-2005, 10:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Rwe Ref Eval (final Phase)
Every one who Comepleted Phase 1 & 2 Report here..





Here in this thread you will post your Completed task from Phase 2.
It will also count as your check-in to phase three.











Afterward I willl PM you Phase three's Questions.

You Will PM Back your answers & Await the results of your Evaluation Which Should Arrive between: 12am EST(Sunday night) - 12am EST (Monday night)

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Old 08-21-2005, 07:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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This shit was rediculous - in a good way. I did not expect to read something so thought provoking comin from a cat I've seen rip battles. It was on some personal ish, and oddly I could relate to the theme of regret. I liked how the piece didn't need to rhyme line after line to get the message across. Venom showed some real versatility with this piece. The content of the poem was original and unique. I felt he did an really good job at twisting together a poem from the picture. And the idea he came up with is something totally opposite of what I saw when I seen the picture. But after readin the poem, I saw what he saw. Excellent imagery. Jeff needs to ban Russell Simmons I.P. so he don't take E.V. from us. -haha

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The whole Garden of Eden idea is pretty played out - not gonna lie. Considering, it's still a decently written piece about a played out bible story. In the first part, cat wasn't usin rhyme, then decided to in the 2nd part. I was feelin the first part a bit more than the 2nd, the forced rhymes took away from the overall message. The poetry fit the picture well. To be honest, Eden was the first thing I thought of after seeing the picture. But I feel the poet could/should have turned away from that idea, and came up with something a bit more original. This was basically the same thing I read in Sunday school as a young man - just in your words.

Venom did a much better job than his competitor. This wasn't even close in my eyes.

Vote=E.V.
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Old 08-21-2005, 11:25 PM   #3 (permalink)
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u painted the kinda picture where in a cartoon..he woulda had a devil on one shoulder and an angel on another..like the man was in a civil war with himself..i could picture every thought in his head..the wrds came to life and played in my mind like a movie..the pushin the pullin shoulda shouldnt i..u made it vivid without bein too dramatic and over doin it like most poets do in my opinon//and i was feelin the fact that it didnt rhyme..some people focus too much on makin shit rhyme it takes away from the content..good job

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garden of eden is way too easy..although u had good discriptions i was bored cause the concept was played out..not takin nething from u as a writer..but the topic is worn out dawg..u coulda put a better twist on the picture..since its a beautiful type settin'..u could have did a "all that glitters aint gold" type of thing..half of it rhymed and half didnt ehhh i think you should stick with one or the other..it has more of an effect when its read..not bad though

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ufo has some skills but i feel he got out classed
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Old 08-22-2005, 09:27 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Yo what's up with all the tests anyways?

It's not like 100 people signed up lmao.

I mean what is it gonna be like ONE ref per show?
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Old 08-22-2005, 05:55 PM   #7 (permalink)
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EV came with some off the top rope type shit... It was a moving piece that was just waaaaay too strong in comparison to his opponents... It seemed like he was speaking from the point of someone that had killed or raped someone.... You could literally "see" the emotions as he describe them... "Her whispers hit my ear like a butta spread on pancakes"< ~ that shit was funny right there loool... but i digress from my point... E's piece pretty much whiped it's ass with his opponents....

Not to take anything from UFO's piece, but it was pretty much unoriginal and lacked creativity... I mean really, I could pick up any bible and find that story.... or any story about the Garden of Eden... I mean it was good and all but REAAAAAALLY now... You shoulda picked a topic that you could add some creativity to...

the verdict: Ex Venom
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Yo what's up with all the tests anyways?

It's not like 100 people signed up lmao.

I mean what is it gonna be like ONE ref per show?
yea i was thinkin that
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