RWE: Training Camp #2 Story Telling

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Old 07-24-2005, 06:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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RWE: Training Camp #2 Story Telling

Telling a compelling story is what the RWE is all about. The contenders want to be involved and you must sell them on the week. Vizz, you will take Monday Night Revenge and Ragu you will take Thursday Night Hostility.

I want both of you to come up with the first ever SHOW of the season. How are you going to hype it up? What is the show going to be about? I want to see your creativity.

Now, it's ironic that today is Sunday because usually, this is when the threads go up. So you need to come up with a show tonight. I want a storyline board...in the next 3 hours. If it doesn't take that long..fine. But time is of the essence. let's see what you come up with. Good luck.

Wrestlers on Revenge:
Jook, Faceless, Oz, Super, Resin, and Cormageddon. No tag teams yet.

Wrestlers on Hostility:
Courtesy, 6 Ft Deep, DamoSport, Mac Flow, THE DESTROYERS (Roc-C and Turbo) and the UNIFIERS (Butler and John Hensley)

Get to it...your time starts now.
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Old 07-24-2005, 07:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Thursday Night Hostility comes live from Boston, Massachusetts for the first ever edition of the show.

Music errupts throughout the building. Rob Zombie "Feel So Numb" starts while the intro video plays.

The fireworks set off, as Michael Cole welcomes you to another edition of Thursday Night Hostility. Tazz welcomes you to the first ever edition of Thursday Night Hostility, and he's sure the show will start off with a bang. All of a sudden Shai Hulud errupts through the loudspeakers. Here comes Commisioner Revanon. He slowly makes his way to the ring, stopping every few steps, and gazing into the crowd. He has a sack with him, which looks to have a title belt in it. He walks up to ring side, rips the mic out of Lillian Garcia's hands, and tells them "To cut the music"

Revanon: You know something Boston I dont know what is better the fact that we are blessing you with our presents this week, or the second I get to leave this terrible, terrible city, *The crowd begins to boo* Onto why I am out here right now. This is my show, and I call the shots. Anyone who has a problelm with that, has a problem with me. And let me tell you right now whoever has a problem with me, definitly has big problems. Now I want to start R.W.E. Hostility out with a bang, so heres the deal. Tonight we are going all out, things will get started with a bang. Courtesy Vs DamoSport in a NO DQ MATCH!

INFLAMES BLASTS Through the loudspeakers, OMG It's Courtesy! He does not look happy, he begins to slowly walk to the ring, and gets up onto it, and just looks at Revanon. He yanks the mic from Revanon.

Courtesy: Revanon my man you are starting out on the wrong foot. Stepping on toes, making me a very, very mad man. You know I've had a long hatred for DamoSport, yet you put me in a match with him. You know what though? I do what I want, when I want to. No one tells me what to do, and thats my word. You will cancel this match, and go back to your little office.

He continues to look at Revanon. Revanon yanks the mic back from Courtesy.

Revanon: You are sort of right Courtesy I am starting off stepping on some shoes, but guess what? You havent seen nothin YET! You want to come out here, and demend things. NO FUCKING WAY, NO FUCKING HOW! *The Crowd goes nuts* Not only have you pissed me off, you've painted yourself into a corner. Now instead of a no dq match, we will be having a *Pause* LumberJack Match. Damosports gets to bring two of his buddies down to ring side, and if things aren't going his way, I'm sure his friends can take matters into their own hands. And more thing in case anyone's wondering whats in the bag, too bad. I'll keep you wondering.

Courtesy looks stunned. His eyes are wide open, he is PISSED!

Revanon's music plays, Courtesy is left in the ring. arms wresting on the ropes, looking right in Revanons direction.

We're back from break time for our first contest.

THE DESTROYERS (Roc-C and Turbo) VS the UNIFIERS (Butler and John Hensley)

The Destroyers are a very interesting team. Never one to back down from a challenge, they always seem to be pissed off. While The Unifiers are pure heart. They give there all, and always wear their emotions on their sleeve. We will head back to the lockeroom. Mene Gene has secured a prematch interview with The Destroyers.

Mene Gene: What is that in your hand Roc-C? Is that a bat?

Roc-C: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you know something Mene Gene, this is so a bat. You are very much so correct

Mene Gene: Well ok

Turbo: Enough about the fucking chicken, lets get down to business. The Unifiers are going to be our buffet for the day. We are gona eat those motherfuckers alive. Do you know what happens to people who want to go against us Mene Gene?

Mene Gene: uh uh what?

Turbo: Roc-C show them

Mene Gene: OMG he just bit the head off a live bat. I'm out of here. Back to you Michael Cole

Well that was certainly umm interesting, it's time to start this bout. Lets head down to Lillian Garcia

Reigning from Los Vegas Nevada, weighing in at 450 pounds combined. They are The Unifiers!!

Lynard Skyard's Freebird begins to play, that can only mean one thing

*The Crowd goes nuts, they love the Unifiers here in Boston. *

The Unifiers make their way down to the ring, and slide under the ropes for their intro.

And reigning from parts unknown, at a combined weight of 530 pounds. They are The Destroyers!

Black Sabbath begins to plays, the crowd starts to boo.

They make their way down to ringside. Roc-C still has blood on his face from the bat.




MATCH



We head backstage Trish Stratus is in the back with Damosport.

Trish: Now Damosport you have to be happy with the way your luck has turned tonight?

Damosport: I am more than happy. I....

Trish: Ya thats great anyways, whats up with your haircut you look like a tool.

Damosport: Well the ladies seem to think...

Trish: Yeah ladies sure, back to you Michael Cole

Damosport looks a little baffled by what has happened. Tazz says well you know Trish is a very in control type of women, and I love that. Michael Cole replies with I'm sure you do Tazz you filthy basterd. Well it's now time for our second bout of the evening. I'm certainly excited about this one. 6 Ft Deep Vs Mac Flow.

Tazz: Wow Cole this is main event type action.

Michael Cole: You are right Tazz only on Hostility can you get these awsome matchups. Both 6 ft Deep & Mac Flow have had excellent careers in other federations, but who knows if they can handle The R.W.E.

Tazz: We will soon find out, I'm sure 6ft deep is excited about the chance to prove himself. Same with Mac Flow.

Michael Cole: You are right Tazz this will shape up to be a great bout. Lets go down to ringside

Lillian Garcia: The following contest is a standard R.W.E. match. Introducing first from New York, York weighing 215 pounds he is The Only Flow you know Mac Flow.

*The crowd goes bananas*

Mac Flow comes down to ringside, and enters the ring

And coming out second from England. The one and only 6Ft Deep!

*The crowd has thunderous boos*


MATCH


Our Main event is up next Cole I bet you are wetting yourself over theree

Real funny Tazz real funny. Courtesy is back in Revanon's office.

Courtesy: Come on Revanon you cant do this to me

Revanon: Get out of my office

Courtesy: So its like that?

Revanon: Oh ya its like that


Tazz: Well Cole I guess he just got bitch slapped.

Michael Cole: Well it wasnt exactly something easy to watch.

Damosport is already in the ring. I wonder where Courtesy is ....

OMG he's right behind Damosport

WATCH OUT!


MATCH


Well Tazz there you have it after our first show, we are both still alive

You are right Cole we survived. Be sure to check in next week. Same time, same channel.

And remember This Is R.W.E. This Is The EVOLUTION!
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Old 07-24-2005, 07:40 PM   #3 (permalink)
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**Where Boys Become Men... Where Men Become Fighters... Where Fighters Become Legends... **

*cue theme music*

ITS R.W.E..... MONDAY NIGHT RevENGE!!!!

**intro package**

((battle and promo highlights of events leading up to scheduled matches will go here, for now tho, heres a generic overview of what you'll see))

JOOK: Im here for the belt!

OZ: First, you gota get by me!

RESIN: Theres no telling who I might smoke to get that title...

CORMAGEDDON: You 3 Jabronis arent even in my league!

FACELESS: *stares grimly*

SUPER: Theres not a contender in this league of my caliber... Im the show starter, the show stopper, Mr Monday Night himself... How are you? IT DOESNT MATTER HOW YOU ARE, Cause im just Super

*end theme music*


VIZZ: ...Welcome everyone to the highly anticipated debut of....

MONDAY NIGHT REVENGE!!

Im Vizz, accompanied by my broad cast colleague, Switch Blade, and this is where the iLL guys play... the R.W.E.!!!!!

SWITCH BLADE: Thats right Vizz, here on Revenge, we've got some of the most feared competitors from our battle boards.. We've got fresh faces like Oz and Jook and legends in the form of Cormageddon and Resin... Old meets new in a contrast of styles you have to see to believe

VIZZ: I agree with you 100% Blade, but we also have SUPERstars, like the biggest man, and mouth, ever to step inside a ring.... the show starting, show stopping, Mr Monday Night himself, SUPER!

SWITCH BLADE: Dont forget the always cold, always calculated, technical mastermind, Faceless! With all this... [is interrupted by the sudden theme music that fills the arena] Well, looks like we've got our first suprise of the night Vizz, as here comes Super himself to the ring...

[super slowly strolls down the entrance ramp, sending rude gestures towards the crowd. the fans arent too fond of his vain and conceited tirades]

*super motions for a microphone*

SUPER: Ladies.. Ladies.. PLEASE! Contain yourselves... Theres obviously enough Super to go around

*audience groans and boos*

VIZZ: (to switch blade) Can you believe this guy? Absolutely unbelievable...

SUPER: Your wishes... have been granted.... The show starter is here to get this thing rolling with a little segment i call.... [suddenly super is interrupted, as a menacing tune comes pouring out of the loud speakers] What the hell? Who DARES interrupt Mr Monday Night!

SWITCH BLADE: Oh wow, someone call security, cause heres comes Cormageddon, and he doesnt look too amuzed with Super...

CORMAGEDDON: Who dares? WHO DARES?!?!?! Dont you mean, who DOES AS HE PLEASES, JABRONI!??! It is I, Corm-God, and I have no patience for children, so get out of the ring, thats a mans place of business.

SUPER: A mans place of business?!?!?!

VIZZ: Uh oh, i think Corm has really pushed a button here...

SUPER: Leme tell you a thing or two about business.... Why dont you bring your happy ass down to this ring, and i'll show you what bankruptcy is all about, in 16 bars or less, Corm-Slob

[without hesitation, Corm throws the mic behind him as he comes running to the ring. as he slides in, Super begins putting the boots to him, but to no avail, as Corm quickly mounts an offense, sending Super flying chest first into the turnbuckles, stunning him... he slips his arms up under Supers, and locks in the Katahajime]

VIZZ: Get some officials down here! These guys are out of control!

SWITCH BLADE: Corm is legitimately choking that man! Someone needs to do something about this!

[new music fills the arena, but no one comes out the entrance way...]

VIZZ: Now what??!?!

[suddenly Oz appears in the front row, hopping the gaurd rail... he slides into the ring and begins stomping a mudhole into corm]

SWITCH BLADE: Its oz!!! Oz is in the building! They may not be official partners, but its no secret, you can always find Oz and Super in the same place.

[the lights in the building cut out]

VIZZ: Oh my god, i cant see a thing? Its insanity in the arena and madness in the ring! What could possibly be next?

[the lights cut back on, and all 3 competitors are laid out in the ring. Faceless, steel chair in hand, stands in the center of the bodies, observing the destruction, with a blank expression]

SWITCH BLADE: Where in the world did Faceless come from? I didnt even know he was in the building???!!

VIZZ: ANYTHING can happen on Monday Night Revenge!
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Old 07-24-2005, 07:52 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Two different perspectives. Good job for such a time constrant. I think for limited resources, you both did an excellent job.

That will conclude today's training. Check in the PIT for when things will pick back up.

Good job so far.
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Old 07-24-2005, 11:37 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 07-29-2005, 06:04 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Dam this shit is dope, very creative! Keep up the work fellas.
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Old 07-29-2005, 03:40 PM   #7 (permalink)
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This was great, I was reading like "Shit I couldn't do that" lol..
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interesting....

this gon be a good season.
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Old 08-25-2005, 04:15 AM   #9 (permalink)
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