Quick rap..need criticism

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Old 06-28-2005, 05:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Phytogenic takes it up the butt!
Quick rap..need criticism

yo my game is so illusive, rhymes idrop exlcusive
yours are just repulsive rhymes scripted out in cursive
thinkin your games progressive, i just see regression
thats why you got that pent up agression
take an intermission//my rhymes are articular makin you weak
in the knees in particular rhymes flow auricular
cut ya in the jugular, just admit it that verse was spectacular
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