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Old 06-20-2005, 07:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Llama Tamer takes it up the butt!
peep this and tell me how your feelin it

yo, ill smash a ****** just for saying i won't do it,
potato cannon with a scope, raise it up and look through it,
blast an idaho through your breast plate and tie a note to it,
it says, "My styles old school, so dont try to renew it",
and im a cold tony, potato jammings my hobby,
ill smash your momma up in the hotel lobby,
and like my man cosby, i wear a fly sweater,
made of spun llama fur, there aint no gettin any better,
ill chop your ass off and nail it to your face so it stays on,
send it to your family like im working avon,
im the llama tamer, i roll with 8 llamas on my side,
pack em all up in a 4 runner whenever i wanna ride,
my llamas killed so many, its hard to keep track
they like creep in like ninjas, sneek up then attack,
leave you to wallow in your own blood with hoof prints up your back....
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Old 06-21-2005, 09:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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GammoN takes it up the butt!
Is this an alias?..
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Old 06-22-2005, 01:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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DawnOfaDynasty takes it up the butt!
wierd name, but it's aight. Scale of 1-10 (1 being 50 cent, 10 being Nas) 7.5: good flow and aight rappin
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Old 07-15-2005, 03:41 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Llama Tamer takes it up the butt!
uppin for criticism
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Old 08-27-2005, 01:02 AM   #5 (permalink)
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DawnOfaDynasty takes it up the butt!
if you gonna get serious though dude, get a new fuckin alias, new persona, no one will take ya serious with a name like Llama Tamer, no one.
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Old 11-15-2005, 12:54 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 11-22-2005, 10:47 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Lmao llama tamer, ohhhhh the things you do when you're drunk. *Sigh*

All in all good verse man, you had some sloppy moments and somethings were like, "Eh?" ... but you also had a few aiight lines, Keep working on your shit here my friend and you'll get good

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Old 11-23-2005, 05:46 AM   #8 (permalink)
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lol llama tamer. thats a funny name.. .
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Old 11-23-2005, 10:16 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 11-26-2005, 04:10 AM   #10 (permalink)
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kuine takes it up the butt!
lmao at ya name for real....whats wit the potatoes dude?

im tired of yall wack emcees..........


like ye said

WE DONT WANNA HEAR THAT WEAK SHIT NO MORE!!!
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lmaooo.
alright, alright.
enough feeding the wild life...
this zoo is closed kiddies.
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