Some FeedBack PLZ....

ChronicleWrap · 05-18-2005, 11:08 PM

um..plz let me know if i did something wrong if so what i did wrong..
or if this is a tyte drop..

times money..moneys lovley i killed you guys in a battle and iam still on your list of buddys..
suddenly this gangsta ish sticks out like boobs on chest...
cuz iam comming out..like the food i digest.
like 106 n park we can go face to face to clash head on..
this isnt school but you can be the paper witch ima put the led on..
It's smooth nef..waiting like who's next..
you'll be suprized to see how my flow effects..
anyways ive gone fishing for the soul you own..
talking bout battling with guns...when you sista stole your chrome..
with these punches...i show you how i can hold your dome..
oh my this keystyle is straight out meh mouth..from meh brain
let it be know..iam jumping on *****s like bumbs on trains...

kuine · 05-24-2005, 08:51 AM

it was aight at first..but you really didnt hold thru to the end..keep writin..

DracOne · 06-06-2005, 08:02 PM

you had a killer opener line..and dome ok punches thru
tha one about the flow effects
and fishin for the soul
were ok..your seein the light just keep goin towards it

Kost · 06-19-2005, 06:38 PM

Nah yo

Bad like whoa.

Elevate like a mofo

05-18-2005, 11:08 PM	#1 (permalink)
ChronicleWrap STReeT WaRz Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 51	Some FeedBack PLZ.... um..plz let me know if i did something wrong if so what i did wrong.. or if this is a tyte drop.. times money..moneys lovley i killed you guys in a battle and iam still on your list of buddys.. suddenly this gangsta ish sticks out like boobs on chest... cuz iam comming out..like the food i digest. like 106 n park we can go face to face to clash head on.. this isnt school but you can be the paper witch ima put the led on.. It's smooth nef..waiting like who's next.. you'll be suprized to see how my flow effects.. anyways ive gone fishing for the soul you own.. talking bout battling with guns...when you sista stole your chrome.. with these punches...i show you how i can hold your dome.. oh my this keystyle is straight out meh mouth..from meh brain let it be know..iam jumping on *****s like bumbs on trains... __________________ You can say you smoke "Chronic" but i smoke more "Chronic" than you... my hookd on "Phoniix" got more "Eboniix" than you-Me

05-24-2005, 08:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
kuine if u want it u can get it Join Date: May 2005 Location: @lanta Posts: 704	it was aight at first..but you really didnt hold thru to the end..keep writin.. __________________ Im into dealin now...catch me movin packs from coast to coast// i do it big man...i got more sticky than post it notes!!!

06-19-2005, 06:38 PM	#4 (permalink)
Kost Soon to be legendary Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Strong Island Posts: 118	Nah yo Bad like whoa. Elevate like a mofo __________________ Soon to be legendary Hustle And Flow y0

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06-06-2005, 08:02 PM	#3 (permalink)
DracOne Engineer Dat Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: tHa DIrty DIseaSe Posts: 27	you had a killer opener line..and dome ok punches thru tha one about the flow effects and fishin for the soul were ok..your seein the light just keep goin towards it

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