help improve my writing skills and flow...

[Thr0wbacK]

here's a verse i wrote and i need to know what i can improve on and shit...

who dares try to steal and covet my dope skills.
my flow is untouchable, my fans get full thrills.
from the beats and lyrics that come from.
plus when it comes to battles nobody wants to comfront me.
its crazy....when i spit its like "no way"
and my shit stomps bitches and shakes like earthquakes.
don't play, and don't wait for me to drop.
cuz 20 years from now i'll still be on top.
im ferocious, i drop beats and then i drop jaws.
god made me who i am and i got no flaws.
and i ain't never scared, so i just pop the trunk.
im so nasty when i spit i make these dudes throw up.
di²²²²able like daffy, fuck man, yur shook.
learn some more vocabulary froma picture book.
cuz im straight off the hook or off the chains.
im fukkin scary, i pull off magic like david blaine.
im drastic, clashin with dudes that can't get at me.
im classic, like throwbacks from the 1970s.
my lyrics are razor sharp, i slice through your whole crew.
im blazing hot in the summer like bad boys 2.
or hot like my girl thats gonna give me the love.
i'm droppin infinitely like hard rain from above.

tell me what u think. thats pretty basic so let me know..thanks. peace!

[krysto]

i dont see nothin wrong with it

i say write to a beat..an work on delivery