No preparation H

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Old 06-04-2003, 04:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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No preparation H

I just threw the H in so more peeps would check it....... This is all off the top of the head, just want to keep writing, some feedback would be nice

this is to "we gon make it"


fuck what you might try to say to the mak//
becsuse ill leave your spine out of place like n sync on a brutha lynch track//
I might just decide to hit you with a pack//
bitch not crack, black cats and burn the shirt off your back//
my brain is lacking all types of chemical fluids//
I stay mumbling wearing hoodies like I was a chanting druid//
I listened to your shit and Im glad
It was funny, not haha fuinny but comically sad//
your lyrics are comin straight from the street//
not the pjs, but the sewer line running right underneath//
Your voice sounds like fingernails on chalkboards//
spitting prewrittens in online freestyle rap wars//
Your voice is wack, your flow is off when you spit//
I'd much rather hear stephen hawkins rhyming your shit//

I dunno, I guess I was feeling a little punchline heavy then
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Old 06-04-2003, 08:29 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 06-05-2003, 02:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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lol...at adding H for views

You got potential....you just need more practice....keep writing...
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Pretty good drop kid

was feelin alot of that..good flow an content
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