2 More Covers (hoodfellas / Paradise Lost)

Ear: Complex · 10-27-2005, 01:42 PM

any comments, or input would be helpful. thanks.

- Teck

dade county · 10-27-2005, 11:51 PM

yeah the young jeezy picture on the first one the way u outline his shirt fuck up the whole shit but other than that tight

KingLeo3 - 3WE · 10-28-2005, 10:07 AM

^^ yea i agree ... should of fixed the levels on young jeezy .. besides that .. its all good.

JA.3 · 10-29-2005, 02:21 PM

On the first one.. There are way too many blood brushes.. Maybe go in there and erase some. Also, the game is too close to mike.. The perspective is off. You get me?? Shrink him down to about the size Jeezy is at.. On Young Jeezy's shirt.. That black outline is bad.. Take that out, and mask the "Get It" text, so that the chain is on top, make it more realistic. The Good Fellas text, try and make it a little more vibrant, just so it stands out a little more. Now on your bottom text, take off the outer glow, and make it a stroke, if it looks bad that way, just lower the opacity on the stroke a bit.. Oh, and one last thing, try and get the color of the background to match with the color of the red that is on everything else.

Now on the second cover.. Everything looks fine. Only thing I would think needed to be changed is the color in the purplish font in the tracklist. Strains the eye just a tad bit.. maybe a different glow or small stroke. Whatever you think'll look better. But it doesn't look like a major problem and could probably be pulled off the way it is.

Aside from all that, these have great potential. Just fix as much as you want from what I said, and they're straight.

Santa · 10-31-2005, 09:37 PM

Jeezy shirt and "Hosted by Jay-Z'' bubbles look whack, besides that, flyness

Ear: Complex · 11-01-2005, 08:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JA.3

On the first one.. There are way too many blood brushes.. Maybe go in there and erase some. Also, the game is too close to mike.. The perspective is off. You get me?? Shrink him down to about the size Jeezy is at.. On Young Jeezy's shirt.. That black outline is bad.. Take that out, and mask the "Get It" text, so that the chain is on top, make it more realistic. The Good Fellas text, try and make it a little more vibrant, just so it stands out a little more. Now on your bottom text, take off the outer glow, and make it a stroke, if it looks bad that way, just lower the opacity on the stroke a bit.. Oh, and one last thing, try and get the color of the background to match with the color of the red that is on everything else.

Now on the second cover.. Everything looks fine. Only thing I would think needed to be changed is the color in the purplish font in the tracklist. Strains the eye just a tad bit.. maybe a different glow or small stroke. Whatever you think'll look better. But it doesn't look like a major problem and could probably be pulled off the way it is.

Aside from all that, these have great potential. Just fix as much as you want from what I said, and they're straight.

i know theres things i need to work on, and i was going to take all of your advice until i seen the bolded text up there ... *shakes head* ... Mike ? WHO? Mike ? WHO? ... thats styles p doggie ...

- Teck

JA.3 · 11-01-2005, 09:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ear: Complex

i know theres things i need to work on, and i was going to take all of your advice until i seen the bolded text up there ... *shakes head* ... Mike ? WHO? Mike ? WHO? ... thats styles p doggie ...

- Teck

lol.. That's my mistake.. stupid one at that.

But it's all good. I was just giving you my professional opinion. It's what I would have wanted if I was posting covers for feed.

Ear: Complex · 11-01-2005, 04:15 PM

^^yea it is what i want. im just tryin to progress to the next level with the designs i do, i found out why i didnt notice the black around the letters on jeezys shirt so soon, cuz my gfx card on my computers brightness was turned down, so it all looked black to me ...

- Teck

JA.3 · 11-02-2005, 01:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Ear: Complex

^^yea it is what i want. im just tryin to progress to the next level with the designs i do, i found out why i didnt notice the black around the letters on jeezys shirt so soon, cuz my gfx card on my computers brightness was turned down, so it all looked black to me ...

- Teck

my old computer was like that..

i look at my past work.. and think wtf?

10-27-2005, 01:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ear: Complex what the fuck? Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Downriver Michigan Posts: 1,916	2 More Covers (hoodfellas / Paradise Lost) any comments, or input would be helpful. thanks. - Teck

10-27-2005, 11:51 PM	#2 (permalink)
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10-29-2005, 02:21 PM	#4 (permalink)
JA.3 Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 547	On the first one.. There are way too many blood brushes.. Maybe go in there and erase some. Also, the game is too close to mike.. The perspective is off. You get me?? Shrink him down to about the size Jeezy is at.. On Young Jeezy's shirt.. That black outline is bad.. Take that out, and mask the "Get It" text, so that the chain is on top, make it more realistic. The Good Fellas text, try and make it a little more vibrant, just so it stands out a little more. Now on your bottom text, take off the outer glow, and make it a stroke, if it looks bad that way, just lower the opacity on the stroke a bit.. Oh, and one last thing, try and get the color of the background to match with the color of the red that is on everything else. Now on the second cover.. Everything looks fine. Only thing I would think needed to be changed is the color in the purplish font in the tracklist. Strains the eye just a tad bit.. maybe a different glow or small stroke. Whatever you think'll look better. But it doesn't look like a major problem and could probably be pulled off the way it is. Aside from all that, these have great potential. Just fix as much as you want from what I said, and they're straight.

11-01-2005, 04:15 PM	#8 (permalink)
Ear: Complex what the fuck? Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Downriver Michigan Posts: 1,916	^^yea it is what i want. im just tryin to progress to the next level with the designs i do, i found out why i didnt notice the black around the letters on jeezys shirt so soon, cuz my gfx card on my computers brightness was turned down, so it all looked black to me ... - Teck

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