MuSick vs Ambassador

MuSick · 10-17-2004, 08:31 PM

This battle has been copy and pasted so both verses are up now

Topic:

Ur leaving the court house after losing custody of ur kids. Ur ex-wife lied and claimed u were an alcoholic, this was what ultimately lost u the case. As u get in ur car u see ur two kids with ur ex-wife hand-in-hand with her younger richer new boyfriend and potential new father of ur kids, crossing the road to his brand new Merc, what do u do? what are u feeling? etc

MUSICK'S VERSE

‘This is BULLSHIT’
My wife turns her head hearing the familiar voice
The courts made their decision but that bitch affected their choice
I start walking towards that fucker I don’t give a…
She calls out with that smug face, ‘Hows yu liver’
Im runnin at her but the bitch is getting in the car
They speed of but she don’t live far

Outside her house that used to be our home
My aim to reach my destination turns to a desire to roam
What happens next? I say to myself without an answer
Im vexed but my anger towards her seems to have had a transfer
Looking at the door I fade into obscurity
Bought back to reality when I see the rich kids security
Im madder at myself for bein on business when I knew we would suffer
Not knowing that what the kids missed she’d replace with another

Im not scared of his heavies but fightin thems a gamble
I may win may lose, but whatever way Im not settin an example
The legal system says the kids belong with their mother full stop
Im not seen to love my kids like a father does, Im just a cock
A cock to impregnate women, with no feelings just a sperm holder
This is just another piece of paper in a ‘case closed’ folder

Not capable of love, Men have given fathers a bad name
Men aint saints, but equality says men and woman are just the same
Maybe one day this prejudice will go away
Until then, this will happen again and again and again…

MuSick · 10-17-2004, 08:32 PM

AMBASSADORS VERSE

yo yo
mistakes made, face changed
mindless rage like a furious gage
my actions like a pistol impregnated trigga page
buss like seamons the expediential trigga rage

mission in life just classed down, when the judge frowned
and smacked down, the stick of fury, judge and jury
tried to end my life in a hurry, crutial point of my past present future
my kids look into my eyes hands in hand with the man blinging like Madonna in spot lights kissing Britney with love deep down where it lies,
dry cries like sizzla, no more
I quote the raven, never more
Heart melted and poured over the pavement
My ex wife’s smile crushed my soul with blood dripping down the sewage hole
Cold like my skin exposed to the winter breeze, on my bended kness with my winter plead, Like the boy asking santa for jackfrost to breath,
I’m asking God for one more chance to redeem
My life appeal, to eat mcdonalds happy meal with my daughter Ceceal
Johnius becoming strong like G strings and thongs
Remembering the time during offspring he kicked his mother
Birth control never mattered, shattered records with the screams in the hospitals
Broke through metals, he was a happy little fello, hello
~~~~~z get down and write poems to touch babie girl’s frown
She my sunshine when the stormy weathers appear in town
My rain when the heat rays tortures my very smile
Like a fist to your man, I’m taking you back by my heart force
Distorted family ain’t what you living for
Got remarried quiker than Maurice green running for gold
Changed in everyway, God’s name in every memory lane,
My love for you shouting louder than a choo choo train,
Ever since I got my wife back, my kids got their smile back
Relax with two jobs giving my girl a massage of riches and riches I never lack
Once was a divorce now jus a phase in the past

Curse WordZ · 10-17-2004, 09:01 PM

shit this was pretty obvious ......... Musick stayed on topic in the beginning ... ambassador's flowed really well but he never really got to the point

I felt tension and emotion from both sides this was a really cool battle

But i have to give my vote to MuSick

10-19-2004, 08:59 PM

This was long and drawn out topical battles=gay Musick won
Cause he was more on topic gay topic gay battle though if I dont read anything about somebody's moma or shootin a nicca i get bored

MuSick · 10-19-2004, 09:05 PM

haha
ye thanks man, appreciated

10-17-2004, 08:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
MuSick Pride of the South Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: none of ur fuckin business Posts: 551	MuSick vs Ambassador This battle has been copy and pasted so both verses are up now Topic: Ur leaving the court house after losing custody of ur kids. Ur ex-wife lied and claimed u were an alcoholic, this was what ultimately lost u the case. As u get in ur car u see ur two kids with ur ex-wife hand-in-hand with her younger richer new boyfriend and potential new father of ur kids, crossing the road to his brand new Merc, what do u do? what are u feeling? etc MUSICK'S VERSE ‘This is BULLSHIT’ My wife turns her head hearing the familiar voice The courts made their decision but that bitch affected their choice I start walking towards that fucker I don’t give a… She calls out with that smug face, ‘Hows yu liver’ Im runnin at her but the bitch is getting in the car They speed of but she don’t live far Outside her house that used to be our home My aim to reach my destination turns to a desire to roam What happens next? I say to myself without an answer Im vexed but my anger towards her seems to have had a transfer Looking at the door I fade into obscurity Bought back to reality when I see the rich kids security Im madder at myself for bein on business when I knew we would suffer Not knowing that what the kids missed she’d replace with another Im not scared of his heavies but fightin thems a gamble I may win may lose, but whatever way Im not settin an example The legal system says the kids belong with their mother full stop Im not seen to love my kids like a father does, Im just a cock A cock to impregnate women, with no feelings just a sperm holder This is just another piece of paper in a ‘case closed’ folder Not capable of love, Men have given fathers a bad name Men aint saints, but equality says men and woman are just the same Maybe one day this prejudice will go away Until then, this will happen again and again and again… __________________ Me an U, its like one on two in relation to rap Im so good I'll make ur 'hairs' stand up to 'clap' Last edited by MuSick; 10-17-2004 at 08:33 PM. Reason: .....................

10-17-2004, 08:32 PM	#2 (permalink)
MuSick Pride of the South Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: none of ur fuckin business Posts: 551	AMBASSADORS VERSE yo yo mistakes made, face changed mindless rage like a furious gage my actions like a pistol impregnated trigga page buss like seamons the expediential trigga rage mission in life just classed down, when the judge frowned and smacked down, the stick of fury, judge and jury tried to end my life in a hurry, crutial point of my past present future my kids look into my eyes hands in hand with the man blinging like Madonna in spot lights kissing Britney with love deep down where it lies, dry cries like sizzla, no more I quote the raven, never more Heart melted and poured over the pavement My ex wife’s smile crushed my soul with blood dripping down the sewage hole Cold like my skin exposed to the winter breeze, on my bended kness with my winter plead, Like the boy asking santa for jackfrost to breath, I’m asking God for one more chance to redeem My life appeal, to eat mcdonalds happy meal with my daughter Ceceal Johnius becoming strong like G strings and thongs Remembering the time during offspring he kicked his mother Birth control never mattered, shattered records with the screams in the hospitals Broke through metals, he was a happy little fello, hello ~~~~~z get down and write poems to touch babie girl’s frown She my sunshine when the stormy weathers appear in town My rain when the heat rays tortures my very smile Like a fist to your man, I’m taking you back by my heart force Distorted family ain’t what you living for Got remarried quiker than Maurice green running for gold Changed in everyway, God’s name in every memory lane, My love for you shouting louder than a choo choo train, Ever since I got my wife back, my kids got their smile back Relax with two jobs giving my girl a massage of riches and riches I never lack Once was a divorce now jus a phase in the past __________________ Me an U, its like one on two in relation to rap Im so good I'll make ur 'hairs' stand up to 'clap'

10-17-2004, 09:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
Curse WordZ Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 80	shit this was pretty obvious ......... Musick stayed on topic in the beginning ... ambassador's flowed really well but he never really got to the point I felt tension and emotion from both sides this was a really cool battle But i have to give my vote to MuSick __________________ ----- Curse Words.... Text 3-0 and couting

10-19-2004, 09:05 PM	#5 (permalink)
MuSick Pride of the South Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: none of ur fuckin business Posts: 551	haha ye thanks man, appreciated __________________ Me an U, its like one on two in relation to rap Im so good I'll make ur 'hairs' stand up to 'clap'

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10-19-2004, 08:59 PM	#4 (permalink)
$(H20)$ Guest Posts: n/a	This was long and drawn out topical battles=gay Musick won Cause he was more on topic gay topic gay battle though if I dont read anything about somebody's moma or shootin a nicca i get bored

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