.:: CeSo Uno vs Phonetixs ::.

[Phonetixs]

aight....the topic is that you are a slave being sold and shipped off to America...have fun with this...I personally do not care if i win or lose...I do this text stuff just to have fun and try to elevate...and I know I got stuff to work on...but have fun...again good luck, and I will drop my verse...~WuN~

Rules:
First To 4 Votes
3-0 is Ko
House Rules
No Bar Limit...No Line Limit
*Just have fun*

aight i will spit as soon as i can...stay tuned.... again just have fun...i know peeps that take this battlin too serious...even topicals..lol..so stay tuned....

aight ~WuN~

[Phonetixs]

Hands held in bondage;leather textures grate my *scarred* wrists
hearin the yelling of my *worth* from the auctioneer readin *prices* from lists/1
Eyes of hatred for my kind and my creed has not been *abolished*
my demeanor and *bearing* of soul has officially been *demolished*/2
Sweat stings my open wounds as I stare at the barren, demonic sun
I raise and pray to Allah, knowin that my destiny is to serve...thy will be done/3
The *Motherland*....the land of where love and foundation...never will I see home
Knowin' full well my back will have *lashings* for not stayin put but seek freedom to *roam*/4
Mutters from my future *owners* havin stereotypical images flash my mind as their *pets*
Used to *payback* with manual labor to work and pay our *inferiority* *debts*/5
Whistles billow in the distant billowin my departure for the *hell-on-earth*
*trippin* from mind-bogglin' alertations I never knew i ever *fell-since-birth*/6
a *vacancy* left in my chest...never gonna see my wife since the whites *checked-me-out*
*full-provin* my chances of seein the lush scenery and my people *wrecked-my-doubt*/7
after bein priced as a piece of *property*, my *master* is given assurances of collateral
where my voices speakin in my mind makes me lose sanity in senses that are *bilateral*/8
I march in depressive cadences on the docks panels toward my *naval* prison
knowing deep inside my ability to have chances of happiness again has never risen/9
*Barred* in this *floatin'* prison to grab a set of oars to *sail* to my *doom*
*sweepin* the last aromas of my home away like an antique set of *brooms*/10
I taste the fear that soars in my lips from my flourishin' mixed feelings
the chemistry rises my body temperature to the tops of heaven's ceilings/11
irony at its primest example where I am set to sail to America.....the land of equality
I lay the oar down and pray to Allah and offer my soul for my mind's last tranquilty/12

[CeSo_Uno]

eh....the topic is lame...but fuck it...i just got home from work
will post by tonight.....

[CeSo_Uno]

aroma of moth fills my nostrils, the devil's at the dephts of this ship,
caught shackled with strong hands....yet broken wrists,
such an unfortunate lifestyle, not even given' a fair trial,
but i guess im used to this...my roots run deeper than the nile,
meanwhile... my brother "phonetics" was murdered on a trip west,
he was not strong inough...so they ripped his heart out his chest,
beat him to a pulp before hand, for showing advanced intellectual,
he should have kept his topical real-slaves dont use words like collateral,
what a bloody mess, but i have to stay strong....and move on,
many of my peoples are left behind....miss my family, its been so long,
i dont even sweat anymore...my body is past dehydration,
if only i had something to eat.....like a big plump juicy.......raisin,
think im exageratin'? just a single raisin would fill my appetite,
eat it like i never had a meal in my life...spit it...too much food at a time,
my wounds are too much for words, my cries so loud they're mute,
my mind so tired i forget............................. ................................... ,
keep on moving, and i've been listenting to my fellow slaves around me,
they tell me of the pro-missings, said they followed stars...now free,
if the only guarantee for tommorow is written in stars...than imma start following,
(slave stands up...starts walking out....gets shot down)

[CeSo_Uno]

dont follow this kid........knocked him out.....now he's got asterisks all over his paragraph........obsessed with pink and fluffy-ness....imma call ya kirby...heh heh

[CeSo_Uno]

jk....nice post....goodluck

[Juxtaposition]

Vote - CeSo

Better verse.

[CeSo_Uno]

thanks for the vote

[Phonetixs]

good verse sir!!!
nice we still uppin...again ceso..hella nice verse man

[CeSo_Uno]

thanks...u too...one

[Da-_-Truth]

Well Well kinda hard to vote on this on

Phonetics looked like he came better wit his delivery and he had better word usage in expressin waht he was sayin

and Ceso had his flow more on point then Phonetics....

But i go for c()mplexity and Phonetics had c()mplexity,good word usage,and a deep flow that sticked on topic

Ceso was also on topic and flow was better on point,but he lacked c()mplexity and was more simple than Phonetics

so my vote goes to Phonetics,real close on yall stay up

V/Phonetics

(Why the fuck cant we say c.omplexity. ?)

[CeSo_Uno]

aight.....1-1....(by the way...i wasnt aiming on ~~~~~~~~~~....i put that in my flow as well...i was aiming for punches/imagery/realism.....in the topical im a slave. slaves cant read, hence my flow wasnt astronomical)...thanks for votin' even more...thanks for explainin' ya vote...lets keep these votes coming...one

[CeSo_Uno]

by the way...all the ~~~~~~~~~~ that writes out co.m.plexity...damn why cant swe say that? the answers are far too c.om.plex

[iLL LoRE]

i stoped readin this shit, it's fuckin long as hell

[Phonetixs]

most topicals are sorta long..LOL... i know mine is long...but most topicals are long or semi-long..aight WuN

[J-Kastro]

Nice battle to the both of you.

Phonetics stayed on topic and got deep with his lyrics, while seno tried to make it rhyme a bit more and even threw a diss directly to his opponent.

No doubt I think Phonetics won just because of the fact he got deep with the topic, and really put it out there, seno did the same but didn't get deep as Phoneitcs did, he just sort of said a few things and focused on rhyming, where Phonetics focused more on feeling/emotion.

No hate here, good battle, my vote = phonetics.

[CeSo_Uno]

aight...thanks for da vote 1-2(phonetixs on the lead)....keep em comin....more votes

[Phonetixs]

thx sirs...again ceso nice drop man

[iLL LoRE]

this battle is too long, im not gonna read it

[Phonetixs]

ok....