witness Monster killing Oneduh ...again.

rosa · 11-23-2003, 08:44 PM

12 lines
5 [explained] votes to win

you know the rest....

Oneduh · 11-23-2003, 09:27 PM

I went a few over.. Fuck with the flow

None of ya lines connect, you don't do it in full
But a confrontation with One will get you threw.. to the wolves
My bullets got cruel intentions, to splatter ya dome
Put two in ya spine & bring new meaning to bad to the bone
You thinkin beatin D-Soul makes nice at this shit?
I'd recycle my green card line but he'd bite it again
Guess I'll just clown ya pic, & surely rape ya
I got a kick out of your teeth, then returned the favor
I'm labeled the best writer, able to dead biters
So worried about losin, you even swayed in the thread title
Think you matter to crews? fuck ya fame
When AP added U, they just got your cousins name
Rm steady clowns ya work, still you hope to find greatness
But I'll hand you "you're ass", like the votes were sign language
But no, you got no plans to rap or make hits, buddy
Shit, thoughts of the whole enchilada just make him hungry

rosa · 11-24-2003, 09:37 PM

aiight, I'll play off the thread title too...

peeps gonna need witness relocation programs... shit's hopeless
voters'll have to change names more than you did to get noticed
you need to learn n' Monster's the dude to teach ya
many times I've helped you right align like a disgruntled computer teacher
I got a life off the net, why would I not show up, you prick?
I'm the GOAT, you're just another kid tryna grow up too quick
come to this battle with high perspective of self and lose it
dookie, you couldn't just bite a verse, you needed help to do it
like mid- last year I blew up recyclin styles, I was hot as can be
you ain't even get Resin's style from Resin... duke, you got it from me
aiight, we can flip played lines, it ain't hard to tear ya
...chest open wider than your motherfuckin margin of error
fads come n' go, & you shoulda been ghost in the 90's, slut
seems this is the One duh that didn't know when his time was up
"Mr. Ego is two people." you guys are jokes, you know that right?
after facin you n' siryn, I've been up against all odds ...who post on the site

RAW CLOWN · 11-25-2003, 03:40 PM

OneDuh had a good verse:

None of ya lines connect, you don't do it in full
But a confrontation with One will get you threw.. to the wolves(coo)
My bullets got cruel intentions, to splatter ya dome
Put two in ya spine & bring new meaning to bad to the bone(coo)
You thinkin beatin D-Soul makes nice at this shit?
I'd recycle my green card line but he'd bite it again(LMAO)
Guess I'll just clown ya pic, & surely rape ya
I got a kick out of your teeth, then returned the favor(lol)
I'm labeled the best writer, able to dead biters
So worried about losin, you even swayed in the thread title(lol)
Think you matter to crews? fuck ya fame
When AP added U, they just got your cousins name(lol)
Rm steady clowns ya work, still you hope to find greatness
But I'll hand you "you're ass", like the votes were sign language (lol)
But no, you got no plans to rap or make hits, buddy
Shit, thoughts of the whole enchilada just make him hungry(lol)

nice verse

8/10 blood drops

Monster's verse wuz crucial:

peeps gonna need witness relocation programs... shit's hopeless
voters'll have to change names more than you did to get noticed(LMAO)
you need to learn n' Monster's the dude to teach ya
many times I've helped you right align like a disgruntled computer teacher(OMFG!..lol)
I got a life off the net, why would I not show up, you prick?
I'm the GOAT, you're just another kid tryna grow up too quick(nice)
come to this battle with high perspective of self and lose it
dookie, you couldn't just bite a verse, you needed help to do it(ha)
like mid- last year I blew up recyclin styles, I was hot as can be
you ain't even get Resin's style from Resin... duke, you got it from me(hahaha)
aiight, we can flip played lines, it ain't hard to tear ya
...chest open wider than your motherfuckin margin of error
fads come n' go, & you shoulda been ghost in the 90's, slut
seems this is the One duh that didn't know when his time was up
"Mr. Ego is two people." you guys are jokes, you know that right?
after facin you n' siryn, I've been up against all odds ...who post on the site(nice ending)

9/10 blood drops

vote: Monster

Insanity · 11-25-2003, 04:00 PM

vote- Monster

both verses were good. Nice punches, nice mets, and nice wordplay. I just felt Monster got a lil more creative and came a lil harder in this one

Defcon_5 · 11-25-2003, 04:05 PM

i don't feel like doing a big detailed breakdown but i got monster taking this..that right align shit was hillarious...One u had good concepts but bad wording

vote=monster

prophetic wordz · 11-25-2003, 06:07 PM

i dont feel like giveing a detailed breakdown either... but im sure its not needed..
i vote Monster...
he had better all around everything...
One came nice but not nice enough...
Mon took this hands down with every from flow to multis..
good shit...
fav line...-mon-aiight, we can flip played lines, it ain't hard to tear ya
...chest open wider than your motherfuckin margin of error

Oneduh · 11-25-2003, 06:39 PM

Def, my wording is far superior to you.

You win J, holler

rosa · 11-25-2003, 06:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oneduh

Def, my wording is far superior to you.

You win J, holler

lmao..

Defcon_5 · 11-25-2003, 09:29 PM

no way hombre

CmartOne · 11-25-2003, 09:43 PM

nice battle...........2

11-23-2003, 08:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
rosa _ Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Green Mountain State Posts: 11,591	witness Monster killing Oneduh ...again. 12 lines 5 [explained] votes to win you know the rest.... __________________ I have come to believe that a great teacher is a great artist and that there are as few as there are any other great artists. Teaching might even be the greatest of the arts since the medium is the human mind and spirit. -John Steinbeck

11-23-2003, 09:27 PM	#2 (permalink)
Oneduh Wf. Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 8,589	I went a few over.. Fuck with the flow None of ya lines connect, you don't do it in full But a confrontation with One will get you threw.. to the wolves My bullets got cruel intentions, to splatter ya dome Put two in ya spine & bring new meaning to bad to the bone You thinkin beatin D-Soul makes nice at this shit? I'd recycle my green card line but he'd bite it again Guess I'll just clown ya pic, & surely rape ya I got a kick out of your teeth, then returned the favor I'm labeled the best writer, able to dead biters So worried about losin, you even swayed in the thread title Think you matter to crews? fuck ya fame When AP added U, they just got your cousins name Rm steady clowns ya work, still you hope to find greatness But I'll hand you "you're ass", like the votes were sign language But no, you got no plans to rap or make hits, buddy Shit, thoughts of the whole enchilada just make him hungry __________________ shut the fuck up.

11-24-2003, 09:37 PM	#3 (permalink)
rosa _ Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Green Mountain State Posts: 11,591	aiight, I'll play off the thread title too... peeps gonna need witness relocation programs... shit's hopeless voters'll have to change names more than you did to get noticed you need to learn n' Monster's the dude to teach ya many times I've helped you right align like a disgruntled computer teacher I got a life off the net, why would I not show up, you prick? I'm the GOAT, you're just another kid tryna grow up too quick come to this battle with high perspective of self and lose it dookie, you couldn't just bite a verse, you needed help to do it like mid- last year I blew up recyclin styles, I was hot as can be you ain't even get Resin's style from Resin... duke, you got it from me aiight, we can flip played lines, it ain't hard to tear ya ...chest open wider than your motherfuckin margin of error fads come n' go, & you shoulda been ghost in the 90's, slut seems this is the One duh that didn't know when his time was up "Mr. Ego is two people." you guys are jokes, you know that right? after facin you n' siryn, I've been up against all odds ...who post on the site __________________ I have come to believe that a great teacher is a great artist and that there are as few as there are any other great artists. Teaching might even be the greatest of the arts since the medium is the human mind and spirit. -John Steinbeck

11-25-2003, 03:40 PM	#4 (permalink)
RAW CLOWN c-stock Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: g ville, va Posts: 5,850	OneDuh had a good verse: None of ya lines connect, you don't do it in full But a confrontation with One will get you threw.. to the wolves(coo) My bullets got cruel intentions, to splatter ya dome Put two in ya spine & bring new meaning to bad to the bone(coo) You thinkin beatin D-Soul makes nice at this shit? I'd recycle my green card line but he'd bite it again(LMAO) Guess I'll just clown ya pic, & surely rape ya I got a kick out of your teeth, then returned the favor(lol) I'm labeled the best writer, able to dead biters So worried about losin, you even swayed in the thread title(lol) Think you matter to crews? fuck ya fame When AP added U, they just got your cousins name(lol) Rm steady clowns ya work, still you hope to find greatness But I'll hand you "you're ass", like the votes were sign language (lol) But no, you got no plans to rap or make hits, buddy Shit, thoughts of the whole enchilada just make him hungry(lol) nice verse 8/10 blood drops Monster's verse wuz crucial: peeps gonna need witness relocation programs... shit's hopeless voters'll have to change names more than you did to get noticed(LMAO) you need to learn n' Monster's the dude to teach ya many times I've helped you right align like a disgruntled computer teacher(OMFG!..lol) I got a life off the net, why would I not show up, you prick? I'm the GOAT, you're just another kid tryna grow up too quick(nice) come to this battle with high perspective of self and lose it dookie, you couldn't just bite a verse, you needed help to do it(ha) like mid- last year I blew up recyclin styles, I was hot as can be you ain't even get Resin's style from Resin... duke, you got it from me(hahaha) aiight, we can flip played lines, it ain't hard to tear ya ...chest open wider than your motherfuckin margin of error fads come n' go, & you shoulda been ghost in the 90's, slut seems this is the One duh that didn't know when his time was up "Mr. Ego is two people." you guys are jokes, you know that right? after facin you n' siryn, I've been up against all odds ...who post on the site(nice ending) 9/10 blood drops vote: Monster __________________ NEWBREED(LUMP):::(BLUE):::(KEki)::: (T):::(Snowflake):::(noonie):::(wal i

11-25-2003, 04:00 PM	#5 (permalink)
Insanity Retro Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Who's the great of the Hoosier State? Posts: 5,977	vote- Monster both verses were good. Nice punches, nice mets, and nice wordplay. I just felt Monster got a lil more creative and came a lil harder in this one __________________ !ND !NC HOOSIER DADDY

11-25-2003, 04:05 PM	#6 (permalink)
Defcon_5 U can't see me..biatch!!! Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Greensboro, NC Posts: 9,548	i don't feel like doing a big detailed breakdown but i got monster taking this..that right align shit was hillarious...One u had good concepts but bad wording vote=monster __________________ -Syndacates- -One man wreckin crew- Defeezy the great

11-25-2003, 06:07 PM	#7 (permalink)
prophetic wordz the Ugly Pimp Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Austin TX Posts: 804	i dont feel like giveing a detailed breakdown either... but im sure its not needed.. i vote Monster... he had better all around everything... One came nice but not nice enough... Mon took this hands down with every from flow to multis.. good shit... fav line...-mon-aiight, we can flip played lines, it ain't hard to tear ya ...chest open wider than your motherfuckin margin of error

11-25-2003, 06:39 PM	#8 (permalink)
Oneduh Wf. Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 8,589	Def, my wording is far superior to you. You win J, holler __________________ shut the fuck up.

11-25-2003, 09:29 PM	#10 (permalink)
Defcon_5 U can't see me..biatch!!! Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Greensboro, NC Posts: 9,548	no way hombre __________________ -Syndacates- -One man wreckin crew- Defeezy the great

11-25-2003, 09:43 PM	#11 (permalink)
CmartOne Got Lyrics? Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: The Frozen North Posts: 2,859	nice battle...........2 __________________ *"You See White Coke And Black Roses"-Cormega* (M³) Mic Mercinaries™

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