wooord, i thought it was on some catchy will smith type shit...the whole singin part...
the rappin....i think you should use that whole flow/sound when you say "whatcha' know about that?!/" that to me sounded the most Brightest in the flow, stood out as the best flow for your voice....if you can take advantage of that, you'd sound str8...as a emcee...
beat, is pretty dope to me, it reminds me of some daz type shit wit the piano's and clubby bounce type joint....and at the same time chill out n smoke to this rider shit...i feel it, the quality is there all around aswell...beat and vocals....the energy was there beat wise....the vocal emotion and flow to this...energy....hmmm doesnt really, i could say, match the beat...you needa be on some more richie rich/rappin 4tay/kurupt style wit it...but thats all comparisons...and opinions....take it how you want it though...just giving some personal insite....
anyways...g'luck...1ne....
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