***battle Profit C vs Yung Wiz***

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Old 07-13-2006, 10:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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***battle Profit C vs Yung Wiz***
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explain your votes or they will not count

verses due sunday at 12 midnight.....you post late you forfeit.
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Old 07-14-2006, 02:36 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Profit C
says he's a young wiz so I'll call him a smart guy
probably a look-a-like, apartheid
I had nothing so I just said anything
at least I won't do it for my whole verse like this dairy queen
yea I said it, and in a free I would have stutterd
but it'd still be smooth like butter, while ya flow would be all muttered
cluttered like ya girl's puss, take a look at how the world looks
without this clown, I see it, now the world not shook
cause the bad influence has been tooken out
hey smart guy! why are you're teeth crooked now?
you walked the straight and narrow but got punched in the face
smart guys always get their lunch in their face
I'm done with this ace, reason i call you that
is your number 1 is everything that nobody wants in fact
you're whack and I don't even think that you'll drop
and if you do, smart guys wear big shoes, so you'll definate flop

peace...
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Old 07-14-2006, 10:36 AM   #3 (permalink)
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smart guy? nigga your name is profit c
how u gonna profit cents or copy hi-c
I dunno why I'm even gonna come at you hard
but there's a punishment for tryna embarrass da god
you chasin a street dream, you must be a dickfiend
cause u ridin mine like it's a monster ball scene
I'm sorry this clown had to come and waste up a spot
coulda givin it to 2xtreme at least it woulda been hot
the misguided nobody versus the popular stranger
and unfortunately this stranger got some pent up anger
you ain't even touchin the wiz so lemme perform my magic
now poof and disappear, you musta prophecized this tragic
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Old 07-14-2006, 02:46 PM   #4 (permalink)
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profit c ....

you walked the straight and narrow but got punched in the face
smart guys always get their lunch in their face
I'm done with this ace, reason i call you that
is your number 1 is everything that nobody wants in fact

this was your hardest hitting little segment.. overall your verse was alright but kinda weak..nothing to special


yung wiz

I dunno why I'm even gonna come at you hard
but there's a punishment for tryna embarrass da god

i like this line even though its plain it fits in nice with your verse..

your closer was sick too except for the last word but overall your verse was pretty good


profit c in my eyes gets a 4.5/10
yung wiz in my eyes gets a 5/10

overall it was an ok battle but yung wiz just came a litttttle tiny bit better in my opinion , al though it was madddd close
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Old 07-14-2006, 07:35 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Profit-C— Man You came wit it, I like this piece right here....I chuckled...
Nice drop...

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at least I won't do it for my whole verse like this dairy queen
yea I said it, and in a free I would have stutterd
but it'd still be smooth like butter, while ya flow would be all muttered
cluttered like ya girl's puss, take a look at how the world looks
without this clown, I see it, now the world not shook


Young Wiz

you came wit more attitude...like that in you....so you get me vote.....

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you chasin a street dream, you must be a dick-fiend
cause u ridin mine like it's a monster ball scene
I'm sorry this clown had to come and waste up a spot
coulda givin it to 2xtreme at least it woulda been hot
the misguided nobody versus the popular stranger
and unfortunately this stranger got some pent up anger
you ain't even touchin the wiz so lemme perform my magic
now poof and disappear, you musta prophesied this tragic
vote-YW
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Old 07-14-2006, 10:45 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Profit C
cluttered like ya girl's puss, take a look at how the world looks
without this clown, I see it, now the world not shook
This line got me.

It flowed a bit smoother, and seemed to have a better structure, with more thought put into it then Wiz's verse.

VOTE - Profit C
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Old 07-15-2006, 03:09 AM   #7 (permalink)
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This is my win...no matta what....believe that....

and no I'm not getting votes or giving to get.peace.1
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Old 07-15-2006, 12:19 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 07-15-2006, 01:58 PM   #9 (permalink)
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um young wiz had more werd play like wen u made fun of his name
profit it was horrible that butter and muttered line threw me of
punches and flow young wizz
vote - young wizz
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vote = young wiz.....by a lil bit

proft c still had a nice piece
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Old 07-17-2006, 02:38 AM   #11 (permalink)
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and unfortunately this stranger got some pent up anger....lmao

if that was a personal about pent up it came off smooth

and yea young came off decent in this drop but not like he would if he put time into it!

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Old 07-17-2006, 08:25 AM   #12 (permalink)
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dis one is a wap rite here lol
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Wiz wit the win....and as far the pent up thing...I'm holding my peace
won't say nuthin
everything i needed to say right now has been said
that's sumtin for a rainy day
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uhh..i would congratulate you but I don't think you won....but anyway...maybe we'll meet again...peace......
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