leave a rhyme...

Antonio Gambino · 07-09-2006, 11:58 PM

aight im new here, so ima set it off, put like a 10 min keystyle down, lay it down, im mostly just out to run wit' the best of em'... feed back or rhyme.. its whatever

Tha' king of italy, livin' wit a G, shits never runnin' civily...
gunnin' to get rid'a me, leave the country bounce to sicily, but im still rollin' wit' made chedda'-cheese...
my shits goin good, just let it be...
if its not broke dont fix it, i swear your rhymes need a remedy, i aint even sayin' that cause were enemies...
if it was beef i'd have ya' murdered like you were kenedy..

blow enforcements, rich off coke endorsements, ill leave you on the mary go round, you run wit' broken horses..
get moms afta' ya. now you soked in sauces.. you fuckin' hassa's..

got so much RAW you can call me slaughter house, the type to kid nap ya' kidz, stick my dick in your daughters mouth...
never get caught about cause shits hot out..
house got raided but im damn glad i got out..
set ya' house on fire like DRE did, burn that shit to the pavement then punch the cop out...
have ya' neighbour screamin' WE NEED AID BITCH!! get a telly, pull that muthafuckin' chach out...
the works done for tonight...
*CLOCKS OUT*

The Grimace · 07-11-2006, 01:20 AM

needs work ant, i think this was the only decent line

blow enforcements, rich off coke endorsements, ill leave you on the mary go round, you run wit' broken horses..

keep up

MC-Panther · 07-11-2006, 03:56 PM

not feeling , keep practicing

barnizzle · 07-11-2006, 07:29 PM

keep workin at it...yo vocab and lyrical is coo....
but yo flow could be better if u use some deeper thought ya dig

Sir Bustalot · 07-13-2006, 01:14 AM

i say scripts that even jesus writes down in his journal
and when talkin to his heavenly soldiers- he calls me the colonel
my mind's like a brotherhood, all my lines fraternal,
ive burned whole cities with my kind's inferno - my rhyme's eternal
im the illest thing since the last epidemic
i school the genius, my class is intensly academic
highly professional like this cats athletic
im cool, calm, collected, and to my enemies im apathetic
mad kinetic, deadly and a tad poetic
like my skill was a disease i just had ta spread it
i smash reps like an underdog on the come up
i rhyme from sundown ta sun-up
ill leave ya dumb struck, pull ya hoe card after one pluck
im chaotic evil,
and ill leave ya addicted like narcotic needles
i spark cronic wit my peoples in dark masonic steeples
i aint one ta gloat but my style's goat
and ill surpass the competition in my quarter mile quotes

Sin City · 07-13-2006, 01:31 AM

2 My Sir Dude......that's What's Really Poppin My Nigga

Profit C · 07-13-2006, 11:14 AM

leaving a rhyme like I bounced on rap
trounced the fact that people ain't down with that
people act like flounders act, open mouth
with nothing coming out except breaths that float
so we go, everyday, need to know the ropes
like a child that eats candy, you have to know fa sho
get low, get low is what i hear, snakes around
want to take me down, I was know to break these clowns
the hate, the proud.......it's all the same
to them it's a game, want the baller's fame
seems like I complain, but I'm mad and I'm sayin this
hating things that are taking kids to make them flip
like hairstyles, I know the heir to styles
mind your P's and Q's, it's no fair with files
FBI, always investigating, what's going on?
live and let live......they don't about us dawg
bark up the wrong tree and they'll leave you
wordplay, oh my what words say, but they still don't believe you
but I must because that's me, it's the fate I met
learn to take my steps like babies, no hate, regret
except when wrong is done, but when I'm doing good
it's like I'm in the hood because everybody shook

10 min key....peace..keep it going peeps....1

The Grimace · 07-15-2006, 05:51 AM

some cats need practise/ choppin lines with axes
got words powerful like tru bass that cause collapses
chokin like your voice's absence/ kid your rapless
squeaky voice cuz this adam turned down his apple
sadastic statistics say satan slays you with a scalpel
gotta gatfull of possible rapfull battles/evil raps stack like mountain alp-fulls
bloodred hands, then 15 second lather/ washed up cadaver
aftermath squared spreads your body priced cost up/scatter
head on a platter im an animal, live for lives, forks n knives, also a cannibal
tactical quote questions twisted to get answer-fulls with my clan 'a bulls
when we see red we charged, ignite ya flesh n leave you burnt charred

Struck uh Nerve · 07-16-2006, 02:46 AM

This guy dissin his adam's apple? ur shits fiction,
Can you even fathom actual events? bitch listen/
Its this instant when u need to really wake up/
Smell the coffee and realize u a pretendin wanksta/

The Grimace · 07-16-2006, 05:00 AM

all talk no actions, raps lackin ,slackin verbs
your wack inevitably absurd,unorganize your words with a dog to sheperd ya verse
dig deep next time maybe you'll strike a nerve
this 4 eyes dropped four lines? you fuckin nerd next time rehearse
leave you tumblin mumblin inside my dryer
this net head has a wetbed my inferno lines kickin like fire
battles i hoasted leave you roasted cant boast kid your next
illegitimate illiterate/ better work on ya text when your workin with a vet
fuck this cypher you biter/
false gunner drop your lines in a dumpster light it up thiswritter
emcees like me spit a hundred degrees, sock eightballs make ya nose freeze
crack viles stackin like files stack your posse in command im kinda bossy
follow my orders cuz i doubt he has the nerves to smell his coffee

Nick Names · 07-17-2006, 04:00 PM

All Bitch niggaz in my way please step to the right
You may get lucky, duck the left but you catching the right
Straight RAW, monday nights you can catch me on SPIKE
Or spittin' on RM cyphas with a collection of dykes
If we was kids you would have punked out and left on ya bike
Or in jail, on the yard im at your neck with a knife
You thinkin' im bullshittin' so you testin' me right
I'll leave you time to say so you sorry with two seconds life
After we meet, flat in the street, took your last breath in the night
Detectives askin paramedics "the time of death, is it right?"
I'm soarin', other niggaz spit rhymes they shit is boredom
Swear they getting bitches buying shoes out Nordstroms
They stick to text because nobody will record them
A coin toss in they favor made they moms not abort them

CaTchW0n · 09-13-2006, 12:44 PM

Of course slim, I watch my waist line eating up these bait lines
Punctual, not to waste time unless I Shoot up the clock
Still keep my loot in my sock, still prove i can cop
still do what I got to move up a spot...
Fam im trying to do all the shots it takes to make it
while some steady fake it to they make it stay complacent
Its back to the basics
every opportunity take shit and raise it
The bar, know who we are, no matter how they try to erase it
duplicate it the carbon copies
I make shit tough to swallow like mixtures of ammonia with bleach hydroxy

2Shay · 09-15-2006, 09:02 AM

bored of metaphors n bitchs dry like menapause,
all wet talk then a battle comes n they...pause...
over-opinionated under-skilled,
show up to a battle they get over-grilled,
over-kill 'Shay hitin' wit the head-shots,
water runnin red like human coco pops,
burnt to a krisp my flow is blazin',
shit so sharp i leave emcees crastrated....

St@y Crunk · 09-15-2006, 02:19 PM

Half of you rap dudes are like handy men that lack tools/
thats cool...i stick out like a black kid in a white school/
now thats rude,so what! you ain't even gotta want me/
yea lonely,yea basiclly a myspace junkie/
so Hunt me,thats the quickest way to murk you,i'll hurt you/
act like oparh and get left the color purple....lol

Sir Bustalot · 09-18-2006, 02:15 AM

i spit a sickness not seen on this earth - obscene with a verse
come between my life and my soul and youll leave with a curse
feeling gets hurt when i reveal my true intentions
im not at all 2-D i run through all true dimentions
rude in sentence, im reponsible for so few defendants
sinner, i have angels coming to collect my due repentance
im banned across the galaxy for my instability
my sins are killin me but my skills still set a million free
demons are akin to chill wit me, so i try not to set fires
rhymin with the devil and bobbin my head till my neck tires
ive been on top so long i expect liars-
and i can short circuit the mainframe like ya forgot ta check wires
im the blue one, cut me first and get blown dead
or maybe im the other like damn i should of known, red!
im an old head, sewn dread-
across these sheets like while you were asleep ya nose bled

Da New Kid · 09-20-2006, 05:10 PM

I'll see if I run or not my mouth, I stay comin' in and out
To leave you a rhyme you could dedicate your life to
And Let's leave it at that, bitch, I won't play to like you
I contemplate, Im insightful, Im the shit and my dad an ass
Be a witness of the aftermath; Im the fact behind the theory
I pack a nine, feel fear of me, ya ass is grass
Im high as fuck, you low on self esteem, I blow on L's kid
you blow on men dicks, you baby soft and ya lines short like baby piss
You no ladies man you a ladyboy on some shady shit
You like threesomes cause to rock ya dame you need help
While I kick more flames than a soccer game in hell........

Big Newt · 09-24-2006, 01:13 PM

I can see you kissin this firing glock, spittin about this cypher ain't hot, shit
your brain's rushin, too much mess cap, listenin to trainsporting
I bet cash, you're abusin of crystal meth, crack & Coke under your red cap
you're a submit dude, your happiness go lower, cause I'm droppin truth

07-09-2006, 11:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
Antonio Gambino Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 1	leave a rhyme... aight im new here, so ima set it off, put like a 10 min keystyle down, lay it down, im mostly just out to run wit' the best of em'... feed back or rhyme.. its whatever Tha' king of italy, livin' wit a G, shits never runnin' civily... gunnin' to get rid'a me, leave the country bounce to sicily, but im still rollin' wit' made chedda'-cheese... my shits goin good, just let it be... if its not broke dont fix it, i swear your rhymes need a remedy, i aint even sayin' that cause were enemies... if it was beef i'd have ya' murdered like you were kenedy.. blow enforcements, rich off coke endorsements, ill leave you on the mary go round, you run wit' broken horses.. get moms afta' ya. now you soked in sauces.. you fuckin' hassa's.. got so much RAW you can call me slaughter house, the type to kid nap ya' kidz, stick my dick in your daughters mouth... never get caught about cause shits hot out.. house got raided but im damn glad i got out.. set ya' house on fire like DRE did, burn that shit to the pavement then punch the cop out... have ya' neighbour screamin' WE NEED AID BITCH!! get a telly, pull that muthafuckin' chach out... the works done for tonight... CLOCKS OUT

07-11-2006, 03:56 PM	#3 (permalink)
MC-Panther Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Toronto. Posts: 6,945	not feeling , keep practicing __________________ they kick in your door, can you dodge the draft? looking down the barrell, could you dodge the draft? a rifle in your face. would you dodge the draft? they'll pull the trigger back, if you even fucking try...

07-11-2006, 07:29 PM	#4 (permalink)
barnizzle HIP HOP Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: STL 314 Posts: 6,618	keep workin at it...yo vocab and lyrical is coo.... but yo flow could be better if u use some deeper thought ya dig __________________ "2 all my brothers it ain't 2 late 2 come 2gether Cause 2 much black and 2 much love, equal 4ever"-Jay-Z 22 Two's

07-13-2006, 01:14 AM	#5 (permalink)
Sir Bustalot Personal Jesus Join Date: May 2002 Location: Flavor Country *Calgary* Posts: 27,764	i say scripts that even jesus writes down in his journal and when talkin to his heavenly soldiers- he calls me the colonel my mind's like a brotherhood, all my lines fraternal, ive burned whole cities with my kind's inferno - my rhyme's eternal im the illest thing since the last epidemic i school the genius, my class is intensly academic highly professional like this cats athletic im cool, calm, collected, and to my enemies im apathetic mad kinetic, deadly and a tad poetic like my skill was a disease i just had ta spread it i smash reps like an underdog on the come up i rhyme from sundown ta sun-up ill leave ya dumb struck, pull ya hoe card after one pluck im chaotic evil, and ill leave ya addicted like narcotic needles i spark cronic wit my peoples in dark masonic steeples i aint one ta gloat but my style's goat and ill surpass the competition in my quarter mile quotes __________________ HUH? Just a victim of the in-house drive-by Track of the day:Right Now--> Devin tha Dude

07-13-2006, 01:31 AM	#6 (permalink)
Sin City WolfPaCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Raw Town Posts: 5	2 My Sir Dude......that's What's Really Poppin My Nigga __________________ WolfPaCK

07-11-2006, 01:20 AM	#2 (permalink)
The Grimace MC's hammeredd Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 2,330	needs work ant, i think this was the only decent line blow enforcements, rich off coke endorsements, ill leave you on the mary go round, you run wit' broken horses.. keep up

07-13-2006, 11:14 AM	#7 (permalink)
Profit C Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 118	leaving a rhyme like I bounced on rap trounced the fact that people ain't down with that people act like flounders act, open mouth with nothing coming out except breaths that float so we go, everyday, need to know the ropes like a child that eats candy, you have to know fa sho get low, get low is what i hear, snakes around want to take me down, I was know to break these clowns the hate, the proud.......it's all the same to them it's a game, want the baller's fame seems like I complain, but I'm mad and I'm sayin this hating things that are taking kids to make them flip like hairstyles, I know the heir to styles mind your P's and Q's, it's no fair with files FBI, always investigating, what's going on? live and let live......they don't about us dawg bark up the wrong tree and they'll leave you wordplay, oh my what words say, but they still don't believe you but I must because that's me, it's the fate I met learn to take my steps like babies, no hate, regret except when wrong is done, but when I'm doing good it's like I'm in the hood because everybody shook 10 min key....peace..keep it going peeps....1

07-15-2006, 05:51 AM	#8 (permalink)
The Grimace MC's hammeredd Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 2,330	some cats need practise/ choppin lines with axes got words powerful like tru bass that cause collapses chokin like your voice's absence/ kid your rapless squeaky voice cuz this adam turned down his apple sadastic statistics say satan slays you with a scalpel gotta gatfull of possible rapfull battles/evil raps stack like mountain alp-fulls bloodred hands, then 15 second lather/ washed up cadaver aftermath squared spreads your body priced cost up/scatter head on a platter im an animal, live for lives, forks n knives, also a cannibal tactical quote questions twisted to get answer-fulls with my clan 'a bulls when we see red we charged, ignite ya flesh n leave you burnt charred Last edited by emcee_squared; 07-15-2006 at 05:54 AM.

07-16-2006, 02:46 AM	#9 (permalink)
Struck uh Nerve Does it Hurt? Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: A T L - Zone 3 Posts: 14	This guy dissin his adam's apple? ur shits fiction, Can you even fathom actual events? bitch listen/ Its this instant when u need to really wake up/ Smell the coffee and realize u a pretendin wanksta/

07-16-2006, 05:00 AM	#10 (permalink)
The Grimace MC's hammeredd Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 2,330	all talk no actions, raps lackin ,slackin verbs your wack inevitably absurd,unorganize your words with a dog to sheperd ya verse dig deep next time maybe you'll strike a nerve this 4 eyes dropped four lines? you fuckin nerd next time rehearse leave you tumblin mumblin inside my dryer this net head has a wetbed my inferno lines kickin like fire battles i hoasted leave you roasted cant boast kid your next illegitimate illiterate/ better work on ya text when your workin with a vet fuck this cypher you biter/ false gunner drop your lines in a dumpster light it up thiswritter emcees like me spit a hundred degrees, sock eightballs make ya nose freeze crack viles stackin like files stack your posse in command im kinda bossy follow my orders cuz i doubt he has the nerves to smell his coffee Last edited by emcee_squared; 07-16-2006 at 05:02 AM.

07-17-2006, 04:00 PM	#11 (permalink)
Nick Names DAL: 4-1 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Alexandria, Virginia Posts: 1,595	All Bitch niggaz in my way please step to the right You may get lucky, duck the left but you catching the right Straight RAW, monday nights you can catch me on SPIKE Or spittin' on RM cyphas with a collection of dykes If we was kids you would have punked out and left on ya bike Or in jail, on the yard im at your neck with a knife You thinkin' im bullshittin' so you testin' me right I'll leave you time to say so you sorry with two seconds life After we meet, flat in the street, took your last breath in the night Detectives askin paramedics "the time of death, is it right?" I'm soarin', other niggaz spit rhymes they shit is boredom Swear they getting bitches buying shoes out Nordstroms They stick to text because nobody will record them A coin toss in they favor made they moms not abort them __________________ Nick Names = Simple Complexity "Wretched Slugs" - Johnny Ringo Click Here

09-13-2006, 12:44 PM	#12 (permalink)
CaTchW0n thats not wavy Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Las Vegas, Craptable Posts: 1,401	Of course slim, I watch my waist line eating up these bait lines Punctual, not to waste time unless I Shoot up the clock Still keep my loot in my sock, still prove i can cop still do what I got to move up a spot... Fam im trying to do all the shots it takes to make it while some steady fake it to they make it stay complacent Its back to the basics every opportunity take shit and raise it The bar, know who we are, no matter how they try to erase it duplicate it the carbon copies I make shit tough to swallow like mixtures of ammonia with bleach hydroxy __________________ THEY KEEP THINKING IM AMATEUR, THATS WHY I GIVE EM THE FINGER LIKE IM GETTING A MANICURE....

09-15-2006, 09:02 AM	#13 (permalink)
2Shay Englands Finest Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: (England) Posts: 2,339	bored of metaphors n bitchs dry like menapause, all wet talk then a battle comes n they...pause... over-opinionated under-skilled, show up to a battle they get over-grilled, over-kill 'Shay hitin' wit the head-shots, water runnin red like human coco pops, burnt to a krisp my flow is blazin', shit so sharp i leave emcees crastrated.... __________________ $ The Corporation l NASTY l Master Peace l Prodigal_Son l Baron Mynd l 2Shay l l Revanon l Lotus l -=Kolli$ion=- l don killa l Noble Soldier l

09-15-2006, 02:19 PM	#14 (permalink)
St@y Crunk Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 5	Half of you rap dudes are like handy men that lack tools/ thats cool...i stick out like a black kid in a white school/ now thats rude,so what! you ain't even gotta want me/ yea lonely,yea basiclly a myspace junkie/ so Hunt me,thats the quickest way to murk you,i'll hurt you/ act like oparh and get left the color purple....lol

09-18-2006, 02:15 AM	#15 (permalink)
Sir Bustalot Personal Jesus Join Date: May 2002 Location: Flavor Country *Calgary* Posts: 27,764	i spit a sickness not seen on this earth - obscene with a verse come between my life and my soul and youll leave with a curse feeling gets hurt when i reveal my true intentions im not at all 2-D i run through all true dimentions rude in sentence, im reponsible for so few defendants sinner, i have angels coming to collect my due repentance im banned across the galaxy for my instability my sins are killin me but my skills still set a million free demons are akin to chill wit me, so i try not to set fires rhymin with the devil and bobbin my head till my neck tires ive been on top so long i expect liars- and i can short circuit the mainframe like ya forgot ta check wires im the blue one, cut me first and get blown dead or maybe im the other like damn i should of known, red! im an old head, sewn dread- across these sheets like while you were asleep ya nose bled __________________ HUH? Just a victim of the in-house drive-by Track of the day:Right Now--> Devin tha Dude

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09-20-2006, 05:10 PM	#16 (permalink)
Da New Kid New Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Queens, NY Posts: 1,794	I'll see if I run or not my mouth, I stay comin' in and out To leave you a rhyme you could dedicate your life to And Let's leave it at that, bitch, I won't play to like you I contemplate, Im insightful, Im the shit and my dad an ass Be a witness of the aftermath; Im the fact behind the theory I pack a nine, feel fear of me, ya ass is grass Im high as fuck, you low on self esteem, I blow on L's kid you blow on men dicks, you baby soft and ya lines short like baby piss You no ladies man you a ladyboy on some shady shit You like threesomes cause to rock ya dame you need help While I kick more flames than a soccer game in hell........

09-24-2006, 01:13 PM	#17 (permalink)
Big Newt a random p0nkass Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 11	I can see you kissin this firing glock, spittin about this cypher ain't hot, shit your brain's rushin, too much mess cap, listenin to trainsporting I bet cash, you're abusin of crystal meth, crack & Coke under your red cap you're a submit dude, your happiness go lower, cause I'm droppin truth

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