Ill Keystyle Thread-dope Keystylers Drop Here!

[Shogun...]

"you're your worst enemy", so imma bad influence to myself/
I would try to find heaven or hell if i had eyesight to help; Most emcees are writin' blind, however they can still feel my rhymes with braille/
We might as well keep rappin' till were famous/
obtain a recording contract so they pay us to play our songs on local broadcasting stations/
Go on tour and perform on stages; so audiences around the globe will congradulate us with standing ovations/

Sunrays reflect off raindrops, so when the storms rain is ova'(over)
It forms rainbows with more color coordinations than crayola....
__________________

[Shogun...]

uppin'

[Retarded Skills]

R.S. be like Rushin Roulette, him fucken wit-me might lose his life,
I be stupid nice, you souf-paw-fuckers'll learn that I do this right/

I'm not here for any kinda comrodary, skills is all that the gods honoring,
Fuck the fake shit, I'm ruining toy gangstaz like Shawn Connery/

On missions impossible, half my soldies retired now livin' in hospitals,
We gets down like that, steppin-on-feet, squishin' ya ossicles/

when I'm not breaking cervixes while still creating purposes,
Which are mainly verses with with lyrics tighter than cats thats making turnikets/

[DuBuLouS]

sun rays reflect off rain drops, form puddles when your brain stops
insane cops, release hell, my subtle rebuttle - you against the grain, pops
let me shorten my lines, cuz I ain't forcin my lines
my torturous crimes, scorchin your fortress with rhymes
and now your fortress in mine
cuz your stylistics is faker than fish sticks
and everything I bring is everything on your wish list
step in the business, cut you, then sell you a bandage
manage to toss black paint all over your canvas
how can you stand this?
I'll damage ya with with two hundred proof stamina
plus I'm flashy like cameras, ash you like Camels and stash you in Pamela's
pussy, you can fit when you're gushy
I ain't tryin to get pushy, my rhythm is cushy
so I'll bring it back like diamonds in Luda's track
stayin true to that, washin' down buddha sacks with scooby snacks
my doobies got me writin' rubies and you know that my food be
scrumptious, my pen functions appropriate like conjunction junction
keep the trunk bumpin somethin that shakes the block
shakes the block....

[teflon~king]

Im the worlds most illest killa, gotta get my scrilla//
and no witnesses ni99a thats how pullin six figures//
I stay wit who the trillest, an who squeezin the triggers//
ni99as from my block say that Im the fuckin realist//
but Im runnin yo hood too and fuckin ya dealers//
out the the millions they makin, an if you mistaken//
ya life I be taken now Im patiently watin, debatin//
whether or not you can stop all the fakin, an hatin//
and if you continue yo gone take trip ta see satan//

[Shogun...]

now thats what im talkin bout fellas!
dope keystyles...uppin

[KriminaL]

I'm dropping a lil keystyle, So you know how i kick it //
My flows a nike endorsement, Don't forget to tick it //
I aint gotta be gangsta, G, or anything of the sort //
But for people here to act like they are, i laugh at the thought //
Lil Shogun trying to get together a thread for text heads //
Yo - attention, Shogun - dont ya know ... Text's dead //
I could count the good heads on both hands //
and Jimmy Saint's jealous because he has no fans //
Every thread i post in, the view count'll sky-rocket //
Then the forum dies the moment i stop it //
I been running this shit, since the middle of 'o5 //
Now i gotta beat cats, who pretty much have no lives.

Fucka.

[YuNg WiZ]

....I'll blaze the thread and drop the niceness/
....anyone rappin in my likeness, ain't priceless/
.....you restless, and you bout to get ur chest lift/
....the way u hold ur necklace is sorta reckless/
....you kids dat wanna test this, wiz is a beast/
....been around as long as krim and still ain't deceased/
....no lives, agreed, niggas need a hobby/
....instead they all chill in da RM open mic lobby/
....thinkin they can rhyme, ahead the time but I'm/
....gonna show em that I'll murder em all without reachin my prime/
....yea I'll strecth a line wit my rhymes, that's fine/
....cause even when i walk a thin line, i get mine/
....ya'll all ride da pine, I'm in da startin 5/
....they gave me dis lil light to shine...but i ain't want it/
....instead I'll stay in da backseat and tweak my flow/
....and come back wit sumthin vicious for u fuckas to hate on/
....cause even if I drop sumthin ill, u niggas work ur ass off to keep me concealed/
....so wuts da deal, forreal, niggas need to chill, takin my meal/
....right from my table, so I'ma let ya'll kno how da fuck i feel/

btw this should be in da cypher forum

[DuBuLouS]

nah...I like it up in here....I don't even hit the cypher

[YuNg WiZ]

true....I'm jus sayin some mod might decide it should be up in there since it's a free for all cause that's wut happened to da last one

[DuBuLouS]

fuckin mods....they wouldn't be shit without a badge and a gun

[KriminaL]

Fucka mod, i'll be moddin here soon, hopefully.

[Shogun...]

lol...what did i start!!! lol keep it goin, and ill keystyle Krim

[Cadet_Karma]

God, it shouldnt be like this
im young and ima chick
but just tempt me 1 more time and ima just snap and
say fuck it
CSI get up ya remains and put em in a bucket
why im I this way cant control my rage
i tried to calm down and put a pen to the page
i still got time rite? just 18 years of age
my patients is short im quick to leave a bitch sideways
after, shit wont faze me i be in a daze
yea sometimes I str8 blackout for dayz
snap back to life like nothing eva happened
thats why now im tryna make money rappin
fed up with dudes and their BS cheatin and all the slappin
love the hater they push me to do better
still grindin cuz trust me ima true money getter
and aint no bitch pussy cant get any wetter
I leave hoes stationary like a love letter
frozen in time...i was chosen to grind and protect whats mine
ask forgiveness while I put the 12 guage to ya spine
life is meant to be hard the weak wont last
bitches acting up like i wont send them to hell fast
neva fell in love, love is for losers
and sometimes loving some1 can cause
you emtional and physical bruises
I dont trust nobody thats why i stay with the rugers
I wanna get to heaven but most likely ill get turned down at the door
so everyday I pray and at nite I pray even more
and if i go to hell at least a good seat i can score

[Shogun...]

ok Karma...you got skills with wordplay and mechanics and the rhyme scheme was pretty good for a keystyle...maybe just need to work on vocab a bit more...some of the details were great...the RSTL is callin!!!
keep up ya art girl

[DuBuLouS]

mister victor...pop it off the top of the brain
spit fire in the sky and drop it like rain
aint no stoppin this unstoppable game
shine so bright we'll shatter your optical frames with toxins and flames
so check the flows that I'm scribblin'
rose in my mouth, dancin' and wigglin'
tricklin' words thru your ear hole
fear no posers or middle men
flowin' smooth as q-balls
with stacks of lyrics packed in my u-haul
accurate like david du-vall
immaculate, you can't tackle me homie you're too small
post on my blue wall...well maybe it's white
or maybe I'll drop you twenty seven flights into a bucket of sprite
obey your thirst, pray for the worst and expect even less
pack a hundred guns and cover it up with a vest
overdose on mental medicine, explode the heart in your chest
I'll fart on the best, take his girl and stick my head on part of her breast!

[Shogun...]

sorry mods lol...i didnt expect for that many peeps to keep goin with this...but it was fun considering open mic doesnt get many dope keystyles as of late..

[Sir Bustalot]

.....take his girl and stick my head on part of her breast

I rhyme retarded at best-
i imprisoned half my enemies then martyr'd the rest
pitch father than jets and bring in the payload
cuz i make 50% commission per every slave sold
servin rhymes fresh while most serve verses a day old
case closed, crooks get bounced like a gumshoe
im the fear when the principle laughs and flunks you
and i rhyme like a freak in nipple clamps and thumbscrews
im a beat ninja flippin rhymes with my scimitars
an i can form a punchline in the time a chinaman can skin a car
or skin a cat, i come off the top like a fitted hat
if ya ever left ya girl alone ya better know busta been in that

[Gsus]

Listen...

Yo netcees wanna mega-bite...cuz my mind like a computer....
see my spits fresh...like I brought em back from the future/
Ima nightmare like Kruger...u kids done stepped in my reality...
u rappers on diet...so u stay watchin me like calories/
I get serious wit it...niggas hear me spit and wanna change the topic...
cuz fuckin wit me, and you'll drop to the bottom like change in pockets/

[6ftground]

I grab lyric from lyricist and mega bite em to those who copy write em, I don't bite em.
I write beyond them, I'm a colossus of line write"n", I got no time for lime light "n", I like writing,
Check my signature then you see who come before ya!
I'm not looking to be a star, cause I already shine bright,
Like stay bright on a soldiers uniform,
I never with out arms
I stay out of ways harm,
I create the swam, dilate your sight, so you can focus on what I write, I know you like.
I can get you high than a kite with what I write.
i love to inspire, I'm no liar, others hate with reply lines of fire..
Hell is where they'll ex-spire../
Now who takes you higher?
^ftground, the silent writer...