7. Saliva(6-0) vs 8. Vyris(7-3)

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Old 10-15-2003, 03:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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7. Saliva(6-0) vs 8. Vyris(7-3)




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Old 10-17-2003, 06:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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iigh son imma match that up

lets talk bout ranks before this bum gets rattled
this week its 7 verses 8...like my run after this battle
you showed promise a while back, but werent mentored right
so now the turn around of ya career been more like
you just a little bitch, keep eatin ya spinnach
i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it
i feel for ya...down syndrom netcee? we know its no rumor
cause you the son of a bitch...with a real mean sense of humor
poundin this fool, yall know he deserve it
just a wica bitch bout to get hung like the salem witch verdicts
speakin of that shit, not too far in the past
you a lil like my wins, another trick of the craft
learn about wordplay, get dope n fame
saliva capatilize on wackness like the V in ya name
mc kill this bitch from Botswanna to Great Lakes to Rio
i-land so many hits, user and aloe wanna make a trio
this shits for real, now drop ya wack shit, all stacked
dude still got a hard dick from that ass similie some bars back
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Old 10-17-2003, 07:56 PM   #4 (permalink)
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gotcha...

take a bath
break my craft?

I'm spittin at you, catch the liquid in ya iris
cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!
expell the violence, in school ya grades sucked
but to make it worse, 2 weeks ago ya proved u failed scientz
a frail appliance, this cheater reps beyond the net
so fuck letting ya flop a verse, you'd rather FLIP a concept
I rip this nonvet, your small and a moses of ghosting
he's bogus at posting lines, and is so short he poses for trophies!
notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
get left in the dirt, it's me against the old fat don
6-0 is ya age, you're so wrinkled ya gotta SCREW ya hat on
and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky
and combat is ugly, this fucker is going through trials
of tribulations cuz even ya location suggests you live in denile!
spittin a mile, you ain't top or wild see
you posting nice is more of a turn off than that smilie

and then vyris won...

Last edited by VyRiS; 10-18-2003 at 07:27 PM. Reason: WORD OF THE WEEK ..didn't know it was back
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Old 10-17-2003, 09:42 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Vyris.
The Good:

cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!

The Bad:

6-0 is ya age, you're so wrinkled ya gotta SCREW ya hat on

Saliva:
The Good:

i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it

saliva capatilize on wackness like the V in ya name

i-land so many hits, user and aloe wanna make a trio

The Bad:

so now the turn around of ya career been more like

you a lil like my wins, another trick of the craft


Hmm. I'm going with Sal here. Just more cleverness Compared to Vy. Good shit tho fellas.


Vote - Saliva
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Old 10-17-2003, 10:30 PM   #6 (permalink)
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saliva niceness:
you just a little bitch, keep eatin ya spinnach
i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it
just a wica bitch bout to get hung like the salem witch verdicts
mc kill this bitch from Botswanna to Great Lakes to Rio
i-land so many hits, user and aloe wanna make a trio


decent verse... a little short....

vyris niceness:
I'm spittin at you, catch the liquid in ya iris
cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!
notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky
and combat is ugly, this fucker is going through trials
of tribulations cuz even ya location suggests you live in denile!

this verse made me chuckle a few times... nice

vote - vyris....

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Old 10-18-2003, 04:52 AM   #7 (permalink)
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vote-saliva

lets talk bout ranks before this bum gets rattled
this week its 7 verses 8...like my run after this battle

even tho u didnt eat my verse fucka lol...nah this was nice


had a few nice lines that i felt...the trick in the book, and island lines were straight...he was also more consistant than vyris...that saliva/vyris line was sick but after that vyris seemed to start slacking...u made ur verse seem more like the dozens than a battle verse...u were using old jokes that i heard back in the days...like the screw ya hat on line, n the pose for trophies joint...thats more like some in living color shit than some battle lines...no diss at all but i dont think u did enough to take vyris in this match
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Old 10-18-2003, 10:06 AM   #8 (permalink)
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EVIL GENIUS.
notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
^^lol.. line of the battle

This was a decent battle. nothin too stunning but i felt vyris alittle bit more.. although some of his lines were like he got them off a joke website.. e.g. screw ya hat on punch.. He had the line of the battle.. & an overall more consistent verse.. Saliva was ight too, wasnt feeling the smilie thing though..

vote: vyris
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Old 10-18-2003, 10:58 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Vote = Vyris

Saliva came pretty straight, I mean.. there's nothing negative I can say about his shit really. I just thought Vyris brought more game.
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Old 10-18-2003, 11:13 AM   #10 (permalink)
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vote - vyris

i thought saliva had horrible concepts this week and the ones that were decent were played, it wasa cool match, but vyris had more originality and better wording.
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Old 10-18-2003, 11:42 AM   #11 (permalink)
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weak battle, not hatin, but honestly how did you all get in top 30 wit these verses? damn, seriously...

Saliva-bad concepts, wack noob lines, really nothin positive that stood out

Vyris-a little better, but the noob concepts were flying left and right.

expell the violence, in school ya grades sucked
but to make it worse, 2 weeks ago ya proved u failed scientz
doesnt even rhyme..but about the best one he had

notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
get left in the dirt, it's me against the old fat don
6-0 is ya age, you're so wrinkled ya gotta SCREW ya hat on
and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky
This^ is all a bunch of newbie bullshit, i wouldnt expect some1 in top 30 to be so thoughtless when it comes to their verse, i did that Fat and chunky line honestly when i first started rapping, and i was wack as hell

v/vyris, won this due to lack of concepts from other cat, weak battle tho
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Old 10-18-2003, 11:45 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Came with some nicer punches

That step line was cool. Saliva, rushed it. And that's obvious since he came pretty ill in the past few weeks.

Decent battle.
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Old 10-18-2003, 06:07 PM   #13 (permalink)
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saliva

"you showed promise a while back, but werent mentored right
so now the turn around of ya career been more like
you just a little bitch, keep eatin ya spinnach
i know every trick in the book, shit, you got 3 chapters n it"

vyris

"I'm spittin at you, catch the liquid in ya iris
cuz you can catch diseases from saliva but DIE from a vyris!
notice he's mostly a fag that won't be left for the worse
but he's got an ego, with a head so BIG he's gotta STEP into his shirts!
and that is wrong, if I saw a pic'a this rappin junky
I'd be laughin monthly, cuz I know he's like bad milk, fat and chunky"

those were my favourite lines, but

vote - vyris
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Old 10-19-2003, 06:40 PM   #15 (permalink)
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vote-vyris

fresh different, more appealing less wordy concepts that didn't hit than the other guy

nice battle
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Old 10-19-2003, 08:59 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Viris started off good, but started to lack towards the end, whereas Saliva was a bit flaky every now and then throughout the verse. I don't mean to go against the grain, but I'm going to vote for Saliva for a little..I mean a LITTLE bit more creativity, and consistency. Viris, you had a pretty niice verse though.....good match.

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Old 10-19-2003, 09:23 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Old 10-19-2003, 11:49 PM   #19 (permalink)
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