RBL Championship: 1. Island(10-1) vs 2. Aura(8-1) vs 3. Rhyme(7-1)

[Mud.Crumb]

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Technique

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[aura]

say 20-24

[Rhymeageddon]

ya thats cool.. 20 - 24... but if user's going 30.. i'll be hitting the 30 mark =)

24 is fine

[aura]

User was a baby and..

Words couldn't describe, his mom's feelings when she fed it
Um, "YOU FAT FUCKING GROSS FUCK"..well there I said it
You're just a weak bitch, no one's left readin your shit
Cuz you ain't just wack as a mother, you're breast feedin your kids
Look at the Dough battle, you tried to leave a rapper torn
..but you chin-checked bout as much as you do in faggot porn
I've called you fat before, guess that's why you act so bitter to me
But when God made you, he broke the mold, literally
You're just a joke on the net while I'm on a higher plateau, check
You should throw in the towel, try the one round Aloe's neck
Cuz you really don't do shit, I'd dispute ya got no such life
..sayin you've got girls that thought you were cute at an open mic?
Everybody know it's lies, you weren't born perfectly
Lookin like a Lunatic, need to cover ya face with a mask like Murphy Lee
And Rhymeageddon you're boring, ya style and ya name sucks
Forget fresh concepts, cuz you can't even think of a played punch
You'll spit the same stuff as last time, so I don't give a fuck
While I'm spittin fire off the dome like User's hair if it's cut
Pussy I'm tearin ya up, but if that’s not doubt in minds
Ya punches like they’re misbehaving, cuz they "step out of line"
You're about to find out it don't matter if you rhyme plenty
You'll discover the HARDAWAY, like when Orlando signed PENNY
So, I'm rapin ya moms but who cares? call the cops bitches
..her ass like that Sadam statue when it fell, half the block hit it

technique

[Rhymeageddon]

............



aura the convulsing bitch, is deadly to no-1, but loves the shit
cuz when i post people dont 'hold their breath', they fucking hug it
c'mon kid's, u call them verses last week? u must be talkin shit
cuz we've seen more ooooohze in a below average horror flick
whooping these kid's, aura's been killed, i'm on route for the rest
rhyme brought the recipe for disaster, that user could'nt resist
acting harder, you idiot... time & time again i hafta scar them
aura had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber
& who would fake an audio? yeh fucker....you'll suck & lose
only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse
quit text, infact fuck it, just die, but faggot i'm wrecking aura still
say adios/audios muthafucker, because island your text is horrible
turn the table's, user, VA's never had a quake, it's fuck'n stable
s'why the voter's dont want him to fall off, -the fuckin table
whos feelin em? cuz rhyme is text killing, & they say you're serial
while voter's 'gassen em with trash' like back to the future's vehicle
i can see auras here? it's stupid he must be keeping my hand
saying he could'nt 'desert' us for now... in fear of island
wrecking the worst, rhyme'll cripple these two heading the list
island win? there's no way in hell, without exiting first
stumble an all, as your verses read blank -something will fall
it's tru tho, if you have nothing good, ...-to say, say nothing at all
so i'll add another line of bullshit for the twit's to sit & read
cuz auras chance has gone'a begging, with his mom, dad, sister, aunt, gran,user's family and nasif

see the technique.... fockers

[U S E R]

God vs. Ghostwriter vs. Ghostwriter


Im doin some rapin tonight…bets is off, n im sayin it like…
Island stays with the hookup…yall stay with ladies delight
get it yet?..ill hit a vet, n ya still wont see me brother,
toppling Island?...how, when you faggots couldn’t beat each other…

Aura:

Island and Aura…were different, n screw it ya worthless
but were alike too, cuz each week someone else is doin our verses
See its my job to win...and you can tell theres losses
Your only line of work is waitin for a check at the welfare office
User this....User that....overused the topic and played it out
...hes just mad i got more pounds than his UK bank account
this bitch gets bullied at school, n at lunch he pities the moment..
when he's going thru Hall's running more than Kansas City opponents
go ahead and reach for the title, you wont get it in time..
cuz ya style is lending to wackness, more than the ppl givin you lines

Rhyme:

rhyme’s got ghoster’s too…he needs lines, so the bastard flips em..
Cuz each week he’s prayin for Angels…more than disaster victims*
U wont lose like a man, u'll say i got dickrode instead
They say misery loves company, ..u must have a shit load of friends
fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks
Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment
Rhymes wack as fuck…and this fag aint clownin on me
Cuz the only time we’re proud of 2.5…is when nasifs countin to 3

*yea..Angel admitted and so did homie

[headless verseman]

Originally Posted by aura

User was a baby and..


Um, "YOU FAT FUCKING GROSS FUCK"..well there I said it

wack

Cuz you ain't just wack as a mother, you're breast feedin your kids
wack


..but you chin-checked bout as much as you do in faggot porn
wack
But when God made you, he broke the mold, literally
blah


You should throw in the towel, try the one round Aloe's neck
ok


..sayin you've got girls that thought you were cute at an open mic?
no


Lookin like a Lunatic, need to cover ya face with a mask like Murphy Lee
wack


Forget fresh concepts, cuz you can't even think of a played punch
blah


While I'm spittin fire off the dome like User's hair if it's cut
7th inning award


Ya punches like they’re misbehaving, cuz they "step out of line"
wack


You'll discover the HARDAWAY, like when Orlando signed PENNY
ur 10 years late


..her ass like that Sadam statue when it fell, half the block hit it
terribly worded

technique

Originally Posted by Rhymeageddon

............




cuz when i post people dont 'hold their breath', they fucking hug it
no
cuz we've seen more ooooohze in a below average horror flick
no


rhyme brought the recipe for disaster, that user could'nt resist
wak

aura had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber
wak


only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse
wak

say adios/audios muthafucker, because island your text is horrible
no

s'why the voter's dont want him to fall off, -the fuckin table
no

\
while voter's 'gassen em with trash' like back to the future's vehicle
warm up award

saying he could'nt 'desert' us for now... in fear of island
mop







see the technique.... fockers

both of u came horrible so far.....

Originally Posted by ..::UserName::..

God vs. Ghostwriter vs. Ghostwriter



Aura:


...hes just mad i got more pounds than his UK bank account
he shouldve used this line, lmfao

this bitch gets bullied at school, n at lunch he pities the moment..
when he's going thru Hall's running more than Kansas City opponents
dopest vocalist



Rhyme:


fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks
good




*yea..Angel admitted and so did homie

very disappointing championship battle

arua and rhyme definitely came weak for some reason....both of those verses were filled with lines that were played as fuck, terribly worded, lack of originilty..........everything u dont do with a championship on the line



dont know what to say


vote username, lesser of all evils with 2 good lines

[BuGG]

V - Island

Consistatly better lines won this one. Half the time, I don't think you kids know what you want to say:

"only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse" - Rhyme

What other kinds of tracks would he have in his ARM? Plus, it's an old idea...

There were other lines that should have been proofed, but I don't have time for all of that...

[Warlokk.]

Heh.. yeah I dont really need to break it down.. not really what I expected.. plus it gets really boring to read three verses of like 24 lines each.. damn..

Well, whats been said has been said.. not all that impressive for a three-way championship, but User did take it..

Vote = Username

[Desenut§]

ok..
Aura had some hot personals.. and showed some real originality.. but some of the wording didn't lend itself to maximum impact.. and some of it just didn't make sense.. but all in all.. a well above average verse..

rhyme..
I don't know man.. I've seen half those concepts flipped before.. and you didn't even flip them to thier full potential.. which drew away from your verse in my eyes.. AND lent credence to aura's attack on that very subject..

Island/user...
Straight fire and originality.. I couldn't really find fault with your verse.. except the opening.. the ladies delight line was kinda bleh.. but hot damn at the rest.. direct.. hard hitting.. AND well flipt..

so if I had to order the vote.. user would take first.. followed by aura.. then rhymes..

vote-user/island

[.Archive.]

Originally Posted by Desenut§

ok..
Aura had some hot personals.. and showed some real originality.. but some of the wording didn't lend itself to maximum impact.. and some of it just didn't make sense.. but all in all.. a well above average verse..

rhyme..
I don't know man.. I've seen half those concepts flipped before.. and you didn't even flip them to thier full potential.. which drew away from your verse in my eyes.. AND lent credence to aura's attack on that very subject..

Island/user...
Straight fire and originality.. I couldn't really find fault with your verse.. except the opening.. the ladies delight line was kinda bleh.. but hot damn at the rest.. direct.. hard hitting.. AND well flipt..

so if I had to order the vote.. user would take first.. followed by aura.. then rhymes..

vote-user/island

^^ pretty much what im feeling


fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks
Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment
this here was str8 fiyyah

i liked all 3 verses to be honest but with more consistency and quality punches

v/Island

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

sorry, but this battle was terrible.

[K o m p l e x x]

v/ island

I thought aura was going to take it this week, but he didn't really bring his usualy heat. Island came correct, better of the 3 verses no doubt

[Downed Shadow]

hii

[X sample]

that breakdown of headless verseman's was possibly the worst ive ever seen..

its the kinda breakdown when u know he wont have anything good to say about them even if they dropped the dopest line ever..

btws i'll vote later..

[Defcon_5]

my super long extraordinary breakdown


Aura:

Words couldn't describe, his mom's feelings when she fed it
Um, "YOU FAT FUCKING GROSS FUCK"..well there I said it

^^this was a ok opener

You're just a weak bitch, no one's left readin your shit
Cuz you ain't just wack as a mother, you're breast feedin your kids

^^egh this was so-so

Look at the Dough battle, you tried to leave a rapper torn
..but you chin-checked bout as much as you do in faggot porn

^^wasn't feeling it

I've called you fat before, guess that's why you act so bitter to me
But when God made you, he broke the mold, literally

^^been done before

You're just a joke on the net while I'm on a higher plateau, check
You should throw in the towel, try the one round Aloe's neck

^^lol this was funny

Cuz you really don't do shit, I'd dispute ya got no such life
..sayin you've got girls that thought you were cute at an open mic?

^^nah

Everybody know it's lies, you weren't born perfectly
Lookin like a Lunatic, need to cover ya face with a mask like Murphy Lee

^^Murphey Lee don't have a mask on his face

And Rhymeageddon you're boring, ya style and ya name sucks
Forget fresh concepts, cuz you can't even think of a played punch

^^heh

You'll spit the same stuff as last time, so I don't give a fuck
While I'm spittin fire off the dome like User's hair if it's cut

^^nah

Pussy I'm tearin ya up, but if that’s not doubt in minds
Ya punches like they’re misbehaving, cuz they "step out of line"

^^this was another so-so one

You're about to find out it don't matter if you rhyme plenty
You'll discover the HARDAWAY, like when Orlando signed PENNY

^^this was too played

So, I'm rapin ya moms but who cares? call the cops bitches
..her ass like that Sadam statue when it fell, half the block hit it

^^this was a coo closer




Rhyme:

aura the convulsing bitch, is deadly to no-1, but loves the shit
cuz when i post people dont 'hold their breath', they fucking hug it

^^this was a decent opener

c'mon kid's, u call them verses last week? u must be talkin shit
cuz we've seen more ooooohze in a below average horror flick

^^this was ok

whooping these kid's, aura's been killed, i'm on route for the rest
rhyme brought the recipe for disaster, that user could'nt resist

^^this was nice

acting harder, you idiot... time & time again i hafta scar them
aura had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber

^^this was a terrible flip

& who would fake an audio? yeh fucker....you'll suck & lose
only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse

^^also a old concept flipped

quit text, infact fuck it, just die, but faggot i'm wrecking aura still
say adios/audios muthafucker, because island your text is horrible

^^aura still and horrible don;t work..it's too stretched

turn the table's, user, VA's never had a quake, it's fuck'n stable
s'why the voter's dont want him to fall off, -the fuckin table

^^umm =/

whos feelin em? cuz rhyme is text killing, & they say you're serial
while voter's 'gassen em with trash' like back to the future's vehicle

^^lol best line of your verse

i can see auras here? it's stupid he must be keeping my hand
saying he could'nt 'desert' us for now... in fear of island

^^nah wasn't feeling this

wrecking the worst, rhyme'll cripple these two heading the list
island win? there's no way in hell, without exiting first

^^list and first don't rhyme

stumble an all, as your verses read blank -something will fall
it's tru tho, if you have nothing good, ...-to say, say nothing at all

^^i don't get how this is a diss

so i'll add another line of bullshit for the twit's to sit & read
cuz auras chance has gone'a begging, with his mom, dad, sister, aunt, gran,user's family and nasif


^^no



Island:


Im doin some rapin tonight…bets is off, n im sayin it like…
Island stays with the hookup…yall stay with ladies delight

^^this was ok

get it yet?..ill hit a vet, n ya still wont see me brother,
toppling Island?...how, when you faggots couldn’t beat each other…

^^lol nice

Aura:

Island and Aura…were different, n screw it ya worthless
but were alike too, cuz each week someone else is doin our verses

^^lmao

See its my job to win...and you can tell theres losses
Your only line of work is waitin for a check at the welfare office

^^heh

User this....User that....overused the topic and played it out
...hes just mad i got more pounds than his UK bank account

^^this was funny

this bitch gets bullied at school, n at lunch he pities the moment..
when he's going thru Hall's running more than Kansas City opponents

^^heh nice

go ahead and reach for the title, you wont get it in time..
cuz ya style is lending to wackness, more than the ppl givin you lines

^^lol

Rhyme:

rhyme’s got ghoster’s too…he needs lines, so the bastard flips em..
Cuz each week he’s prayin for Angels…more than disaster victims*

^^ lol

U wont lose like a man, u'll say i got dickrode instead
They say misery loves company, ..u must have a shit load of friends

^^kinda played

fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks

^^heh

Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment

^^played concept pretty decent flip

Rhymes wack as fuck…and this fag aint clownin on me
Cuz the only time we’re proud of 2.5…is when nasifs countin to 3

^^ha stop picking on nasif..lol funny though



vote=Island...more consistency in his verse

[VyRiS]

B-B-B BREAKDOWN !!!
point system.


aura:
Words couldn't describe, his mom's feelings when she fed it
Um, "YOU FAT FUCKING GROSS FUCK"..well there I said it
hahaha, nice open.. 3/5
You're just a weak bitch, no one's left readin your shit
Cuz you ain't just wack as a mother, you're breast feedin your kids
lmao.. 4/5
Look at the Dough battle, you tried to leave a rapper torn
..but you chin-checked bout as much as you do in faggot porn
bwahaha, nice personal.. 4/5
I've called you fat before, guess that's why you act so bitter to me
But when God made you, he broke the mold, literally
haha, pretty good.. 3/5
You're just a joke on the net while I'm on a higher plateau, check
You should throw in the towel, try the one round Aloe's neck
haha, niceness.. 4/5
Cuz you really don't do shit, I'd dispute ya got no such life
..sayin you've got girls that thought you were cute at an open mic?
nah.. 2/5
Everybody know it's lies, you weren't born perfectly
Lookin like a Lunatic, need to cover ya face with a mask like Murphy Lee
wasn't really feelin this.. 2/5
And Rhymeageddon you're boring, ya style and ya name sucks
Forget fresh concepts, cuz you can't even think of a played punch
hahahahaha, i liked that, came outta nowhere.. 4/5
You'll spit the same stuff as last time, so I don't give a fuck
While I'm spittin fire off the dome like User's hair if it's cut
I dont get the personal so.. 3/5
Pussy I'm tearin ya up, but if that’s not doubt in minds
Ya punches like they’re misbehaving, cuz they "step out of line"
nah, could've been worded better.. 2/5
You're about to find out it don't matter if you rhyme plenty
You'll discover the HARDAWAY, like when Orlando signed PENNY
way played.. I remember seein shit like that last year.. 1/5
So, I'm rapin ya moms but who cares? call the cops bitches
..her ass like that Sadam statue when it fell, half the block hit it
hahahaha, nice ending.. 3/5

pretty good verse
ya overall score is.. 35/60


rhyme:
aura the convulsing bitch, is deadly to no-1, but loves the shit
cuz when i post people dont 'hold their breath', they fucking hug it
this was iight.. 2/5
c'mon kid's, u call them verses last week? u must be talkin shit
cuz we've seen more ooooohze in a below average horror flick
hahaha, nice.. 4/5
whooping these kid's, aura's been killed, i'm on route for the rest
rhyme brought the recipe for disaster, that user could'nt resist
i liked that one.. 4/5
acting harder, you idiot... time & time again i hafta scar them
aura had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber
nah.. 2/5
& who would fake an audio? yeh fucker....you'll suck & lose
only track's in aura's arm's ..were from years of drug abuse
hahahahaha.. 4/5
quit text, infact fuck it, just die, but faggot i'm wrecking aura still
say adios/audios muthafucker, because island your text is horrible
this was ok, pretty good.. 3/5
turn the table's, user, VA's never had a quake, it's fuck'n stable
s'why the voter's dont want him to fall off, -the fuckin table
haha, was decent.. 2/5
whos feelin em? cuz rhyme is text killing, & they say you're serial
while voter's 'gassen em with trash' like back to the future's vehicle
hahaha, I liked that.. 3/5
i can see auras here? it's stupid he must be keeping my hand
saying he could'nt 'desert' us for now... in fear of island
haha, nice.. 3/5
wrecking the worst, rhyme'll cripple these two heading the list
island win? there's no way in hell, without exiting first
nice, flow was nice.. 3/5
stumble an all, as your verses read blank -something will fall
it's tru tho, if you have nothing good, ...-to say, say nothing at all
good, but didn't really hit hard.. 2/5
so i'll add another line of bullshit for the twit's to sit & read
cuz auras chance has gone'a begging, with his mom, dad, sister, aunt, gran,user's family and nasif
ok end.. 2/5

cool verse here
ya overall score is 34/60


Island:
Im doin some rapin tonight…bets is off, n im sayin it like…
Island stays with the hookup…yall stay with ladies delight
haha, nice open.. 3/5
get it yet?..ill hit a vet, n ya still wont see me brother,
toppling Island?...how, when you faggots couldn’t beat each other…
hahahaha, nice personal.. 4/5
Island and Aura…were different, n screw it ya worthless
but were alike too, cuz each week someone else is doin our verses
hahahaha, another nice one.. 4/5
See its my job to win...and you can tell theres losses
Your only line of work is waitin for a check at the welfare office
haha, this was str8.. 3/5
User this....User that....overused the topic and played it out
...hes just mad i got more pounds than his UK bank account
whatttttt.. that was hot right there.. 4/5
this bitch gets bullied at school, n at lunch he pities the moment..
when he's going thru Hall's running more than Kansas City opponents
this was pretty good.. 3/5
go ahead and reach for the title, you wont get it in time..
cuz ya style is lending to wackness, more than the ppl givin you lines
hahaha, the personals keep comin.. 3/5
rhyme’s got ghoster’s too…he needs lines, so the bastard flips em..
Cuz each week he’s prayin for Angels…more than disaster victims*
hahahahaha, niceness.. 4/5
U wont lose like a man, u'll say i got dickrode instead
They say misery loves company, ..u must have a shit load of friends
hah, nice.. 3/5
fags fall in the rankings...so watch this guy get dropped
cuz this week is Island Time…….like Hawaiin clocks
was decent.. 2/5
Poor bastard, im gonna burry you deep in sediment
If money talks, then yours got a broke jaw n a speach impediment
hahahahaha, that was nice.. 4/5
Rhymes wack as fuck…and this fag aint clownin on me
Cuz the only time we’re proud of 2.5…is when nasifs countin to 3
hah, pretty good ending.. 2/5

good verse right there, I was liking it
ya total score is.. 39/60


all scores are this..
aura = 35/60
rhyme = 34/60
island = 39/60

it was actually close as you can tell by my point system.
this was a good battle, what I like to see in the championship.
I was feelin all the verses, this will mos def be the battle of the week. I felt that island edged it out a little, as you can see in the point system, but everybody had dope verses.. he was just more consistant and more thought out. nice battle yall!!

vote = island

[Nintendo™]

Vote- Island more consistancy and better punches...Aura and Rhymageddon both had some played shit even though island wont spectacular he left the playedness and came with a few new concepts.

Every has basically stated what i think.

pz