13 WarLoKK 5-0 vs 14 Imperial 7-3

[Insanevillian]

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[Imperial]

In.. 18 lines.

Votes:

1. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646094-133-nolimit-tank14-vs-134-memento-post7406871.html

[Warlokk.]

I'm just doin 2 lines.. good luck


Vote 1 = 17 Jowelz 5-1 vs 18 Censor 5-1
Vote 2 = http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/646179-5-phrenic-8-3-vs-6-toil-6-0-a-post7414754.html
Vote 3 = http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/646108-105-ouch-vs-106-mr-body.html#post7414835
Vote 4 = http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/646170-19-catatonic-5-1-vs-20-zuchie-4-1-a.html#post7415064
Vote 5 = http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/646164-27-royal-penis-5-3-vs-28-vyris-5-3-a.html#post7419406
Vote 6 = http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/646165-25-scientz-4-0-vs-26-saliva-4-0-a-post7419464.html

[Imperial]

Inner crew battle

Time to get personal...

Fuck name disses.. all war ‘lock’ lines are played
If you dont understand that, ill repeat.. all Warlokk’s lines are played
Youre the leader of our crew.. thas why we dont do nothin
And you neva win belts.. ya dad jus whips ya ass with ‘em
Hes predictable, ill explain how much Warlokk sucks
Hell probly take my name out his sig.. and use that for a punch
Dont even try to say im wack.. thas a lie and a hoax
You recruited me.. so you obviously know Im dope
My punches are ill, I got mad skills when Im rappin bars
So at least we got one thing in common…… no avatars
His punches aint hot, when voters rate Lokk…
He only gets A 1.. like people addicted to their steak sauce
Youre neva hittin high, ya gettin knocked out for sure
Ya punches are more ‘low key’ than the lock on a mouse’s door
Ive heard ya beats.. you need some fuckin practice
But whats the point of havin a beat.. when you suck at rappin
Lokk wore a suit.. thinkin hed be more of a threat
So I strangled him wit his tie.. to give him a formal death

[Warlokk.]

Hate me, its crazy- damn I’m tired of all these lames
..so I’ll give ya more shots than that camera virus I got on AIM


Imp is known to lose, critics say you suck & you gay
Warlokk wont win by a hair.. shit - more like a fuckin toupee
You underated man? Shit just aint set in fairly
..but your only the underdog.. in a fuckin pet cemetary
I’m hard as a rock, I got ya neck pressed at an angle
See I’m settin the standards.. you in the kitchen settin the table
Imp’s stupid as they come, all my boys is slayin you
..cuz you don’t just draw a blank- you oil paint em too
You copyin my style, & its bout time this whore is silenced
So on ya next vacation.. you can stay at my ‘resort’ to violence
Ya foundation is weak.. I aint surprised ya skill is wack
Honestly.. you the guy who lost to a fuckin Fill-in-Champ
If talents a needle in a haystack, this wack coward is fucked then
..cuz hes got more ‘hey’ than a Fat Albert discussion
We’ll get to the matter at hand, okey dokey? but first..
..how come this is the only week you didn’t show me ya verse?
I coulda revised it, but instead you just put in some shit
..you’ll always be below Warlokk – hell, just look at my sig


You’re our weakest link..

[BuGG]

V - WarLoKK

LoKK had better concepts this time around. He kept me interested in reading. I liked the Fill-in-Champ diss. I doesn't really come off great to read it, but that's some real shit there...

[Narsil]

hahah I kinda enjoyed this battle not because it was like suuuuper but warlok still uses the old style that shit used to be used by everyone....I am still feelin it tho...anyways small break down..


My punches are ill, I got mad skills when Im rappin bars
So at least we got one thing in common…… no avatars

this wuz pretty nice

the rest wuz either average or kinda played..I'd say this was an off week for you..you had better...

Imp is known to lose, critics say you suck & you gay
Warlokk wont win by a hair.. shit - more like a fuckin toupee

this the shit I mean lines like these were way coo ... I'm still feelin em tho vote lokk for bringin the ole school back

Imp’s stupid as they come, all my boys is slayin you
..cuz you don’t just draw a blank- you oil paint em too

coo shit..

there were more but you had it at this..I felt you coulda worded some of the lines better...imp got you at that but overall yer verse was jus more enjoyable...

Imp you was kinda missin that injury to insult...personals are good..but set it up •••••..make it hurt...other then that ya shit was coo...

vote lokk

and dont be afraid to return vote either

[•optix•]

Imperial's quatables...

His punches aint hot, when voters rate Lokk…
He only gets A 1.. like people addicted to their steak sauce

Could have been worded better, dope idea.

Youre neva hittin high, ya gettin knocked out for sure
Ya punches are more ‘low key’ than the lock on a mouse’s door
Ive heard ya beats.. you need some fuckin practice
But whats the point of havin a beat.. when you suck at rappin
Lokk wore a suit.. thinkin hed be more of a threat
So I strangled him wit his tie.. to give him a formal death

Whole section was fiya

[•optix•]

Imperial's quatables...

His punches aint hot, when voters rate Lokk…
He only gets A 1.. like people addicted to their steak sauce

Could have been worded better, dope idea.

Youre neva hittin high, ya gettin knocked out for sure
Ya punches are more ‘low key’ than the lock on a mouse’s door
Ive heard ya beats.. you need some fuckin practice
But whats the point of havin a beat.. when you suck at rappin
Lokk wore a suit.. thinkin hed be more of a threat
So I strangled him wit his tie.. to give him a formal death

Whole section was fiya


Warlokk's...

You underated man? Shit just aint set in fairly
..but your only the underdog.. in a fuckin pet
cemetary
Imp’s stupid as they come, all my boys is slayin you
..cuz you don’t just draw a blank- you oil paint em too
Ya foundation is weak.. I aint surprised ya skill is wack
Honestly.. you the guy who lost to a fuckin Fill-in-Champ
We’ll get to the matter at hand, okey dokey? but first..
..how come this is the only week you didn’t show me ya verse?

HAHA

Anyways,

vote- Warlokk

[Wordage]

Imperial

Fuck name disses.. all war ‘lock’ lines are played
If you dont understand that, ill repeat.. all Warlokk’s lines are played
7.5/10
Youre the leader of our crew.. thas why we dont do nothin
And you neva win belts.. ya dad jus whips ya ass with ‘em
7/10
Hes predictable, ill explain how much Warlokk sucks
Hell probly take my name out his sig.. and use that for a punch
7/10
Dont even try to say im wack.. thas a lie and a hoax
You recruited me.. so you obviously know Im dope
7.5/10
My punches are ill, I got mad skills when Im rappin bars
So at least we got one thing in common…… no avatars
7/10
His punches aint hot, when voters rate Lokk…
He only gets A 1.. like people addicted to their steak sauce
7.5/10
Youre neva hittin high, ya gettin knocked out for sure
Ya punches are more ‘low key’ than the lock on a mouse’s door
7/10
Ive heard ya beats.. you need some fuckin practice
But whats the point of havin a beat.. when you suck at rappin
7/10
Lokk wore a suit.. thinkin hed be more of a threat
So I strangled him wit his tie.. to give him a formal death
8/10

total= 65/90


Warlokk

Hate me, its crazy- damn I’m tired of all these lames
..so I’ll give ya more shots than that camera virus I got on AIM
7/10
Imp is known to lose, critics say you suck & you gay
Warlokk wont win by a hair.. shit - more like a fuckin toupee
8/10
You underated man? Shit just aint set in fairly
..but your only the underdog.. in a fuckin pet cemetary
9/10
I’m hard as a rock, I got ya neck pressed at an angle
See I’m settin the standards.. you in the kitchen settin the table
7.5/10
Imp’s stupid as they come, all my boys is slayin you
..cuz you don’t just draw a blank- you oil paint em too
8/10
You copyin my style, & its bout time this whore is silenced
So on ya next vacation.. you can stay at my ‘resort’ to violence
8/10
Ya foundation is weak.. I aint surprised ya skill is wack
Honestly.. you the guy who lost to a fuckin Fill-in-Champ
7.5/10
If talents a needle in a haystack, this wack coward is fucked then
..cuz hes got more ‘hey’ than a Fat Albert discussion
7/10
We’ll get to the matter at hand, okey dokey? but first..
..how come this is the only week you didn’t show me ya verse?
6.5/10
I coulda revised it, but instead you just put in some shit
..you’ll always be below Warlokk – hell, just look at my sig
7.5/10

total= 76/100

vote= Warlokk. Had some very creative concepts like the Pet Cemetary & Resort lines just to name a couple. Nice flow by both of yah throughout. Wasn't feeling alot of Imp's lines, closer was nice and had some ok personals. But in the end I felt Warlokk took it because his lines were more creative and witty. Goodluck to both of you.

[CATATONIC]

vote = lokk


got a better feel for his verse off the first two bars...


im just not a fan of one syllable rhymin. personal taste tho.

peace

[namix]

Warlokk

Hate me, its crazy- damn I’m tired of all these lames
..so I’ll give ya more shots than that camera virus I got on AIM
.....naw, not feeling this dog, especially for an opener.. blah @ aim disses, u know? lol

Imp is known to lose, critics say you suck & you gay
Warlokk wont win by a hair.. shit - more like a fuckin toupee
.........hah, there we go.. smooth, i have seen 'by a hair' lines before, not a lot of 'em, but this was a nice flip to me.

You underated man? Shit just aint set in fairly
..but your only the underdog.. in a fuckin pet cemetary
.........lol cool, nice more grimey hit here.. it would have been a smoother read if you didnt use 'under' in both lines, especially at the end of two short breaks if you feel me lol.. just a heads up on that, this was a dope line

I’m hard as a rock, I got ya neck pressed at an angle
See I’m settin the standards.. you in the kitchen settin the table
........HAHA, man, i think this is being overlooked more than it should be, this was fire i thought..

Imp’s stupid as they come, all my boys is slayin you
..cuz you don’t just draw a blank- you oil paint em too
.........well, you have very smooth wording, and that is huge in a text battle.. alot of newer kids take nice concepts and just mangle them with poor wording, but the cats that have been around for a minute can take a REAL PLAYED CONCEPT, and somehow make 'em sound dope .. lol, for real, oil paint was funny even tho draw a blank is definately played

You copyin my style, & its bout time this whore is silenced
So on ya next vacation.. you can stay at my ‘resort’ to violence
...........word, i feel it, this time i think your wording wasnt as needle point... 'at my resort to violence', if u coulda made that sound better.. it doesnt sound AS tough as it could because you are saying its your "Resort" to violence, that makes u sound like its ur last option and u dont wanna fight.. I think if u flipped it more into "but u would never resort to violence" somehow it would been straight ill, but it was cool

Ya foundation is weak.. I aint surprised ya skill is wack
Honestly.. you the guy who lost to a fuckin Fill-in-Champ
..........lol, pretty nice hit, hopefully keepin it personal, not as impressive to me, but its still pretty cool

If talents a needle in a haystack, this wack coward is fucked then
..cuz hes got more ‘hey’ than a Fat Albert discussion
........haha word man, still the heads up, the repetitive homophones 'hey' and 'hay' doesnt sound as nice as if we heard 'hey' for the first time in the punch.. maybe a synonym,
'when it comes to finding skill, this herb's a dime a dozen......
hes just a needle in straw....with more 'hey' than a fat albert discussion'
...eh, i dont know if you feel me, im stoned as hell so just like breakin 'ish down for what its worth.. cool line lol ;)

We’ll get to the matter at hand, okey dokey? but first..
..how come this is the only week you didn’t show me ya verse?
.......Fire. this was maybe my favorite line.. what a damn grill slap haha.. so simply put too, just casually hitting with prolly ur hardest shot too.. i thought that completely made imperial look like a bitch, and an inferior.. lol.. damn.

I coulda revised it, but instead you just put in some shit
..you’ll always be below Warlokk – hell, just look at my sig
.........I wish i deleted this line by mistake lol.. naw, for real its ok, i think it was sonned by your bar above it though, i think you should have ended it there, it woulda sounded like a nice closer too.. but this was still pretty cool, hear shit like it now and again though. nice verse..



Imperial -

Fuck name disses.. all war ‘lock’ lines are played
If you dont understand that, ill repeat.. all Warlokk’s lines are played
........haha, that was so simple, same rhyme.. hahah, that was just funny to me though.. i mean definately not ill, but it was hilarious.. ahh, pot

Youre the leader of our crew.. thas why we dont do nothin
And you neva win belts.. ya dad jus whips ya ass with ‘em
.......that didnt flow well to me playa.. also belt lines, especially with whipping are pretty played.. it was aiight tho

Hes predictable, ill explain how much Warlokk sucks
Hell probly take my name out his sig.. and use that for a punch
.....haha, i mean, your hits are pretty simple, but you are still clownin on him a little by it.. pretty funny, rhyme is iffy though

Dont even try to say im wack.. thas a lie and a hoax
You recruited me.. so you obviously know Im dope
......cool.. nice little more grill slap type shit, i thought this was cool.. if your going to rhyme shit like hoak and dope you really should have a multi supporting it though, in my opinion man..

My punches are ill, I got mad skills when Im rappin bars
So at least we got one thing in common…… no avatars
........lol, sorta funny.. i normally hate avatar punches, those hits never impress me, but this was simple and NOT stretched (while alot of avatar punches are) lol, so i feel it..

His punches aint hot, when voters rate Lokk…
He only gets A 1.. like people addicted to their steak sauce
.........lol i think you could have flipped this even nicer if you made it more complex than just 'people addicted to steak sauce' and worded it better.. cool tho

Youre neva hittin high, ya gettin knocked out for sure
Ya punches are more ‘low key’ than the lock on a mouse’s door
.........haha, that was dope i thought..to be honest with you i think some of your hits have sounded elementary but ur pulling them off very witty.. cool shit

Ive heard ya beats.. you need some fuckin practice
But whats the point of havin a beat.. when you suck at rappin
......haha, i thought that was pretty nice too..

Lokk wore a suit.. thinkin hed be more of a threat
So I strangled him wit his tie.. to give him a formal death
...........naaahh, i wasnt feeling this one seemed stretched
not really the best thing for their closer, yuno? but nice verse as a whole man, u had me laughing too. lol


vote-warlock


why? dope battle i thought.. i think warlock built up from his opener getting nicer and nicer and then nailed it with that show me your verse line boom. but definately a nice read fella's, keep it comming


could ya'll peep my battle in the other thread if u get a minute.. kick me some knowledge

[afraid knot.]

damn.. setups for both were fuckin on point.
vote = warlokk
.. his verse was soo much hard hitting, imperial came dope too though

[.Archive.]

v\Warlokk

liked

Imp is known to lose, critics say you suck & you gay
Warlokk wont win by a hair.. shit - more like a fuckin toupee
You underated man? Shit just aint set in fairly
..but your only the underdog.. in a fuckin pet cemetary

the most

imperial had the a1 line and his opener

was a good battle but wars flow appealed 2 me more and his 2 opening couplets were Harddd

[IgloS]

vote-lokk

Imp, not bad dawg, I think your running out of steam though.. i liked most of your shit.. mouse line was good and creative.. but your flow is pretty weak

lokk.. nice punches, better word play and flow also

[The Royal Penis]

Fuck name disses.. all war ‘lock’ lines are played
If you dont understand that, ill repeat.. all Warlokk’s lines are played


personally i think this line beat all of warlokk's verse... well no that's an exxageration.. but yea, Warlokk didn't appeal to me with the way he words his verse.. it's like the same approach to each line... no real suprise.. and alot of the concepts he was flipping are used at least once a week



Hes predictable, ill explain how much Warlokk sucks
Hell probly take my name out his sig.. and use that for a punch
Dont even try to say im wack.. thas a lie and a hoax
You recruited me.. so you obviously know Im dope
My punches are ill, I got mad skills when Im rappin bars
So at least we got one thing in common…… no avatars
His punches aint hot, when voters rate Lokk…
He only gets A 1.. like people addicted to their steak sauce

see this is all original.. and some fat personals in there.. i don't think warlokk had an answer for this


We’ll get to the matter at hand, okey dokey? but first..
..how come this is the only week you didn’t show me ya verse?
I coulda revised it, but instead you just put in some shit
..you’ll always be below Warlokk – hell, just look at my sig

this is what i really liked from lokk otherwise it's just the same ol' same ol'.......


vote-Imperial

[Warlokk.]

You dont think I had an answer for that? He said we dont have any avatars.. what the fuck do you want me to say to that?!?!? You find any bullshit excuse to vote against me..

..anyways 9-1 = Warlokk

[toil]

ooooooo nice battle

imperial: opener was nicely done. low-key line was also a stand out, i was gonna do something similar with a mini-me flip. however you also had a few lame-ish lines, such as the blet line (played mayne!) and the no avatars one. overall it was a cool verse, and it clear you can write dope punches..just there was definately a few lines you shudve cut, nahmean?

warlokk: k, your AIM virus opener was gay..dont do that again lol. but after that there were some flames! you use the 'exagerrate-a-phrase' style..and i have to say youre one of the best ive seen at using it. 'touppe', ' pet cemetary' and 'oil-paint' punches were all dope examples. the 'settin the table' line was niceness too. your verse fell off at the end, with lines either over my head (like the Albert line) or just played (like the 'resort' line)..but youd already done just about ehough to take this match.

daps to both of ya, so far this is the best battle ive seen (besides mine obviously). but theres only one winner

vote=warlokk

[GlassEye]

vote - Warlokk

won this hands down in my opinion.... Imperial had some good ideas but his verse was hard to read.... like he just thru it together and rhymed one syllable at the end throughout most of the verse

[X Mc HoTT SaLIvA X]

i got lokk killin it

toupe line was cooooooooooo.

pet cemetary line was fire. hot shit