99. Starsen vs 100. J-Nyce

[Serge dot T]

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IV

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[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

i'm in..

i'm droppin' 12 lines too.

[starsen]

im in i shall alSO DROP XII

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642304-61-klobb-sixteen-2-0-vs-62-muti-5-6-a-post7364066.html
http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642310-73-storm-bringa-1-0-vs-74-access-denied-1-0-a-post7364093.html
http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/643112-rbl-championship-1-island-8-1-vs-2-dough-jordan-7-1-a-post7364118.html
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7364153
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7365719
http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642325-101-dotsmith-vs-102-adversary-vs-103-animatix-post7368042.html

[starsen]

friday pimp

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

i drop bars.. watch this kid'll get knocked far..
you should be a singer,
cuz i'm known to pop stars..
ya verse jarred,.. and i'm aimin' at ya soul with guns..
might as well just be a golfer..
..cuz i'm puttin' a hole in one..
it's over, son!.. i drop scriptures like the bible..
and..
..i'm wavin' your verse off, so be expectin' a tidal!
i'll crack ya spinal.. it's obvious your beat with bars..
punch you with a name play..
..just to leave you se-n stars!..
you wack bum.. every line that you drop is funny..
..it's obvious ya Po',
and i'm talkin' the Teletubbie..
ya steez is crummy!.. your fucked.. cuz i'm evil with whores..
to leave you more jacked than the roman numeral IV.

edited to format verse..

[starsen]

we're in rap country and im the dictator/
so bow down to me or meet ur creator/
i dont feel too well, so just call me "ILL"/
sit back and relax while i take my pill/
eat motion sickness pills till i can hardely see clearly/
look out the window and see a "star" rising,its not a window its the mirror G/
im the king of this court and ur my jester/
when im done wit you, ull be mentally fucked like im a molester/
yep there u are standing, hangin just by a thread/
after my thread u fall, stand up face full of tread/
im the 1-2 punch like Jordan and Pippen/
i duno "How its Goin Down", but ur dmx bitch, "slippin"






here u go ..........

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

the voting may now commence..

[X sample]

hmm, a little lop-sided here..

star-sen - it was obvious that your new to this shit, just by the way u wrote your verse and the concepts that u used, and im not being critical, everyone must start somewhere...
your lines were very forced and stuff like that ill line are very old, its just been done to many times..
but that said, u have plenty of potential i think and u can elevate alot, keep working on ya stuff

j-nyce - im not a fan of that style, but u dropped an ok verse and had a few good punches, flipped some concepts well and had some decent originality...u got the win

vote = j-nyce

if u could drop an honest vote on my battle me and my opponent would apprecite it

53. X Sample 2-1 vs 54. Yuno Alwin 2-1

thanks

[AniMatiX]

wow....this is either the runner up-weakest battle of weak or the weakest battle of the weak...but j nyce had one line that if worded better it would have outshined stars whole verse....but his verse was still better..alot less whack lines in it

vote=j nyce

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

shut the fuck up, animatix.

i've sonned you so many times on ²²²²²²²²²²²'s forums, that it's not even funny.

= carter.

show respect do some one who's much better than you'll ever be.

and i voted for some of you kids battles, so why don't you show respect and stop viewing the fuckin thread, and actually drop a vote.

and last i checked, reviewing everyone's verses not in top 30, i think i outshined many of the wack ass verses dropped, including yours, and should get picked out for some lines of the week.

i don't really give a fuck though.. that key was enough to make me 1-0 in the league.

[AniMatiX]

but..you cant beat me now...fuckin homo...blah your horrible at text..stick to audio carter...

look at your verse fucking homo...change your style back to the way it was where punches were actually thought out and made people say ohh..hes actually "decent"...thats all you'll ever be...and my key for this rbl week.... even one of the best in the league..toil said my shit was hott...suck a dick....and we will meet in rbl...

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

Originally Posted by AniMatiX

but..you cant beat me now...fuckin homo...blah your horrible at text..stick to audio carter...

look at your verse fucking homo...change your style back to the way it was where punches were actually thought out and made people say ohh..hes actually "decent"...thats all you'll ever be...and my key for this rbl week.... even one of the best in the league..toil said my shit was hott...suck a dick....and we will meet in rbl...

you fuckin moron.. nothing has changed.. i'll still rip your wack ass to shreds.

and as far as punches.. you obviously cannot read, or understand what a punchline is, or you'd see many of my lines consisted of punches to his name that haven't been used before, because he barely arrived here.. plus a variety of others.. you kids are just hating on my format, when it's not even the format that makes a verse good..

but we'll see.. i'm going to rip your wack ass apart.

[AniMatiX]

lmao...your style is horrible...and how can a 6 word line be a punch??? thats not even enough for a setup line for a punch.......but i'll see you next week...until then...lets stop this un-neccesary beef......

you still won...anyways....your opponent is the worst in the league i've seen...


101. Dotsmith vs 102. Adversary vs 103. Animatix

return the favor

[ARIZCATZ]

J-Nyce
i drop bars.. watch this kid'll get knocked far..
you should be a singer,
cuz i'm known to pop stars..
Coo open no real diss.
ya verse jarred,.. and i'm aimin' at ya soul with guns..
might as well just be a golfer..
..cuz i'm puttin' a hole in one..
Coo line, but been done before.
it's over, son!.. i drop scriptures like the bible..
and..
..i'm wavin' your verse off, so be expectin' a tidal!
Not any type of diss.
i'll crack ya spinal.. it's obvious your beat with bars..
punch you with a name play..
..just to leave you se-n stars!..
Not any type of diss.
you wack bum.. every line that you drop is funny..
..it's obvious ya Po',
and i'm talkin' the Teletubbie..
Half a diss. Funny.
ya steez is crummy!.. your fucked.. cuz i'm evil with whores..
to leave you more jacked than the roman numeral IV.
Not any type of diss.

Starsen
we're in rap country and im the dictator/
so bow down to me or meet ur creator/
Eh
i dont feel too well, so just call me "ILL"/
sit back and relax while i take my pill/
...
eat motion sickness pills till i can hardely see clearly/
look out the window and see a "star" rising,its not a window its the mirror G/
Oh really?
im the king of this court and ur my jester/
when im done wit you, ull be mentally fucked like im a molester/
Brainfuck him eh? Not bad.
yep there u are standing, hangin just by a thread/
after my thread u fall, stand up face full of tread/
Not really hard.
im the 1-2 punch like Jordan and Pippen/
i duno "How its Goin Down", but ur dmx bitch, "slippin"
Not hard hittin. Coo though.


J takes this. But both need serious work on disses if they are going to get to the top of this league.

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

Originally Posted by ARIZCATZ

J-Nyce
i drop bars.. watch this kid'll get knocked far..
you should be a singer,
cuz i'm known to pop stars..
Coo open no real diss.
ya verse jarred,.. and i'm aimin' at ya soul with guns..
might as well just be a golfer..
..cuz i'm puttin' a hole in one..
Coo line, but been done before.
it's over, son!.. i drop scriptures like the bible..
and..
..i'm wavin' your verse off, so be expectin' a tidal!
Not any type of diss.
i'll crack ya spinal.. it's obvious your beat with bars..
punch you with a name play..
..just to leave you se-n stars!..
Not any type of diss.
you wack bum.. every line that you drop is funny..
..it's obvious ya Po',
and i'm talkin' the Teletubbie..
Half a diss. Funny.
ya steez is crummy!.. your fucked.. cuz i'm evil with whores..
to leave you more jacked than the roman numeral IV.
Not any type of diss.

Starsen
we're in rap country and im the dictator/
so bow down to me or meet ur creator/
Eh
i dont feel too well, so just call me "ILL"/
sit back and relax while i take my pill/
...
eat motion sickness pills till i can hardely see clearly/
look out the window and see a "star" rising,its not a window its the mirror G/
Oh really?
im the king of this court and ur my jester/
when im done wit you, ull be mentally fucked like im a molester/
Brainfuck him eh? Not bad.
yep there u are standing, hangin just by a thread/
after my thread u fall, stand up face full of tread/
Not really hard.
im the 1-2 punch like Jordan and Pippen/
i duno "How its Goin Down", but ur dmx bitch, "slippin"
Not hard hittin. Coo though.


J takes this. But both need serious work on disses if they are going to get to the top of this league.

i guarantee if i was so behind in ranks, you wouldn't be poppin' off at the mouth with any of that type of bullshit.

rofl.. those aren't disses..

let's get some real voters, please.

[Tilted Saga]

Nyce came much nicer, he took this pretty easily, although I did like the star rising line, but it was more of a flexing type thing, Nyce just came harder w/ nameplay, and se'n stars was pretty ill

Vote J-Nyce

[Diphtheria]

J Nyce wins

J Nyse 1-0
Starsen 0-1