Ego-
your verses got me wishing they made a stop button for keyboards
got guns wit infas - leave you on the d/l, G
cause ya head'll get the red light special like TLC
verse full of disses... not much metaphors or similies... had better concrete disses tho...flow was ok.... i didn't like some stuff u used to rhyme like
you'll be plottin to leave as Im coppin the lead
with your skills,
you should act as IV n just battle in the topical league<< what rhymed.. i'm guessin lead/league...
Smelly Dude-
some of ur lines are really stretched and throws the flow away. You used wack to many times in your verse.
Gay can’t catch a joke,
So u won’t find him throwin’ punches..<< dope concept, but would of been more effective if you reworded it better...
had alot of fillers in there...
vote: Mr. Ego
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