73. Storm Bringa 1-0 vs 74. Access Denied 1-0

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[Storm Bringa]

In

Im doin 8-12

might be droppin tomorrow

g'luck

[Access Denied]

8-12 sounds good. Good luck SB.. I have alot of respect for ya, but i gotta beat ya

[Access Denied]

u could never beat me, stop lyin, u been warned once
heads aint gotta peep the weather channel to see storm fronts
leave u torn cunt, IV on ya arm and shit is worn proud
since AD reigned on u'r parade then sprayed ya storm cloud
when I rip kids crowds get sick from blood & brain decay
while this Storm at the most, only Bringa rain delay
wit my SKILL y'all know i'm the show stopper, made star
u couldn't even see storms wit the use of doppler radar
its that small, now the skys windy, but dry and its warm
fuck shootin the breeze, i'm buckin shots thru the eye of this storm

I went in between and stuck with 10. i trust you'll match. pz

[Storm Bringa]

Originally Posted by Access Denied

u couldn't even see storms wit the use of doppler radar

Originally Posted by µ·Equation·µ

storms so weak he doesnt even show up on the doplar radar...

*mimicks Busta Rhymes*
hmmmm......


anyway, on with the verse



Access a old-fashioned bitch . . . call him a hussy
not even worth a men-shun, too busy gettin dissed by pussies
Access Denied? Now that's a punchline in itself
thought he was Champion material and put elastic in his belt
this kid's ignored around the boards; not even acknowledged
hasn't got a vote since he signed in & dont think Im bein dishonest
who would actually think he has the skill to test me
he's too busy flippin concepts already used against me
a Vice City spectator, the fakest thug that I've seen
dont even pop shots from ya bed, you jus run soda through ya IV

[The Grimm One]

VOTE=StormBringa

REASON:
Need i state a reason? This n!gga came hard as fuck...i don't care what none of y'all say. I liked this verse, it was the better of the 2 that you posted so far. I'm tellin truth, y'all!


Access came hard as well....just not as hard.

>>Grimm<<

[NoShit Sherlock]

vote= Storm Bringa

He used more personals, and the links for a edge

A D, shit is dope no doubt, all name plays he used had been flip ova and ova again, that made his personals stronger to me

.......Sherlock..............

[Noggah]

shit was close... I think Access Denied woulda got this shit with overall punches n shit, but storm brought in those personals and they just hit harder...

Vote = Storm

[Desenut§]

Access.. you focussed on the name too much... you gotta vary your modes of attack..

Storm.. - good stuff. simple and to the point.. not a lot of beauty to it.. just bludgeoned him with personals.. liked the men-shun line too.. though it was a bit of a stretch

[R.A.M.]

storm took this one, man flippin concepts its been done.

he had the personal edge here, and the links really do help. haha.

and some overall decent shit, good structure. etc

vote storm

[Narsil]

well if acces woulda kept on the road he started he might have taken it...but jus like island did versus dough..overusin a concept will fuck you up...

soo vote storm

[Cryogen]

Ha...yeah, what they said....more than one concept 'n u woulda took this....but Storm came wit mad personals..coo battle.

My vote - Storm

[Huginn]

Vote - Storm.

[iLL Nyce AKA ReTard]

vote - access denied.

i like his name plays on storm's name a lot, and overall just liked his punches.. storm came hard with lines like that ''men-shun'' one, but i feel his verse started to get wack when he went with the played concept or using links and shit..

[Access Denied]

this voting is wack as fuck. and that was gay as hell u showed me some other wack kids line like i ever seen him in my life, ya fuckin nerd.

[WWIII]

I need to stick up for my little brother here. Battles are about personals. This is a real sad display of voting, that mention line was tired. A poor attempt at wordplay. Also I know for a fact D just started coming on this board. (Since dukes my brother and all) and never would have seen that other line. Hell I've never seen that kid post in my life and I've been here since '99. So a real weak move on Storm's part. The rbl disgusts me, that's why I'll never sign in.

[Storm Bringa]

Regardless of whether he saw the specific line or not, Ive been here since 2000 and the entire weather concept has been done to death over the past 3 years. (hell, headless versman used the "front" concept in our battle a couple weeks ago). So like I said, regardless of whether he saw the line or not, the concept is GROSSLY PLAYED.

8-1 me

up

[The Royal Penis]

u could never beat me, stop lyin, u been warned once
heads aint gotta peep the weather channel to see storm fronts

this was dope.. i don't think this concept is played myself.. the rest of the verse is a contradiction, played through and through

now if you want to know what a personal is

this kid's ignored around the boards; not even acknowledged
hasn't got a vote since he signed in & dont think Im bein dishonest
who would actually think he has the skill to test me
he's too busy flippin concepts already used against me

that's a personal...

flipping someone's name is not a personal AT ALL... it's basically a punch used against a specific person.. but seriously, all those storm lines could be used against Storm G.. so that's not personal at all.....


vote-Storm Bringa... sorry access, i understand where your coming from, and your thinking of how your shit was coo, but it's been done, you might not have seen it but we have... also i will point out, you kept up the same idea, of just using his name over and over again... while storm had 1 line about your name, and it wasn't that good i might add... but still do you get it?


well good battle

peace

[X sample]

well, penis boys vote sums this up quite nicely i think =)

access - you will be a dope head i can tell, and im thinking u might be quite young being warrens lil' bro...shit was good anyway, i like your verse, you came with some witty shit, but unfortuantely, what has been said is true, you stuck with the same concept and it got old, and some lines were played
BUT STILL, good job, you got mad potential

storm - good consistent verse, pretty nice, though u could make your punches harder hitting, the filppin conepts line was nice though..

i think experience JUST won this, but keep at it access..

vote = storm bringa

and oh, we cant get any votes in our battle so if u could we would really appreciate if u could vote here

53. X Sample 2-1 vs 54. Yuno Alwin 2-1

thanks

[AniMatiX]

vote-storm


battle was close in my eyes....just access...didnt come as hard...as i thought he would....