49. Wordage 2-1 vs 50. Smoke Trail 2-1

Serge dot T · 09-23-2003, 09:15 AM

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Smoke Trail · 09-23-2003, 04:19 PM

checkin in, goin like 14-18 lines

Wordage · 09-24-2003, 07:14 AM

Checkity check. 14-18 sounds good to me Smoke.

1. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642322-95-fatal-words-0-1-vs-96-awe-post7345336.html
2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...ostid=73453433.
3. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642304-61-klobb-sixteen-2-0-vs-62-muti-5-6-a-post7353527.html
4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7353544
5. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7353836
6. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642306-65-stony-1-1-vs-66-zeitgeist-1-1-a.html#post7360355

Wordage · 09-25-2003, 06:58 AM

IV, schmivy..
²²²²² dont try me..

Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
only reason your hot....
is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'

here to get off on the right foot, ²²²²² pay attention
Word'll put on brass knucks n' leave a good impression
toss ya up into the air, let tha remains..fall to pieces
forget head of ya class, Word is yo mutha-fuckin teacher
don't get it twisted...it's ya neck I mean
what goes around comes around, like an exorcist scene
360 or 1,2,3...whatever check ya datebook
your days are numbered...
ya turned right, but that's the opposite direction 'great' took
leave you lookin lost, like some kinda foreigner
you ain't fit for the title...
Word'll drop ya like the AOL from Time Warner

Smoke Trail · 09-25-2003, 04:14 PM

nice begining, but every1 gets good nameplay aint u seen
but this is your end dawg, nuthin can save u, not even IV//

yea you should have picked the no show option
you aint hot, pop your color, casue your record is droppin//
i rip out your heart and shoove it down your throat
you expeirenced, your 'words' have age' only way u recive votes//
dawg it time to turn you off, hand me the remote
after this battle youll have my lines in your sig as your quote//
so you think you rep our culture
you almost dead dawg check out my vultures//
flyin over your head, ready to rip off your legs
oh well, smoke came to knock you down a few pegs//
on these rap boards, but your picked to win ofcourse
you stiff as a board and ligts as a feather, but bkus i made u a corpse//
get shyt straight, casue you message is kinda unclear
i know you scared of me, but its good you tryin to face your fears//
i went 18, 9 to you lower and 9 to your upper
other MC's are appitizers, im eatin you bitch for my supper//

g/luck, did this kinda on the moment when i just got home, so whatever not complainin thiou, 1, g/luck

Smoke Trail · 09-25-2003, 08:17 PM

http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642318-87-da-dime-0-2-vs-88-thuglove-0-2-a-post7357393.html

heres 1

Smoke Trail · 09-25-2003, 11:16 PM

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7358746

heres 2

EnMity · 09-25-2003, 11:34 PM

Wordage- Openin line wasnt too good, Teacher line ..ight ....excersist line ..eh, OK ....And the Time warner , Pretty good, landed solid .

6/10

Smoke Trail - Blah, Filler all the way thru ...Only line i liked is face ya fears and thats a lil played,

4/10

Vote- Wordage

Zeitgeist · 09-26-2003, 04:28 AM

Vote=Wordage

Wordage
The "time warner" line was nice..and i kinda liked the "throwin matchies" ish..
The rest was average IMO.

Smoke
Nothing stood out for me in this verse at all..not one line grabbed my attention..punchies were weak..and switching from 2 bar rhymes to 4 bar rhymes,and the back again,didnt really help the flow of the verse..

Word took it..

pz.

Tony Elbow · 09-26-2003, 09:52 AM

word took it mostly coz smoke was terrible flow was shit punches were shit the lot

Word had a couple of nice lines:
Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
only reason your hot....
is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'
^^was ya best

Vote: Wordage

NoShit Sherlock · 09-26-2003, 01:40 PM

vote = Wordage

His punches are better, and more hard hitting, even though he should slack some times, Smoke didnt appeal too much at all

yall both can work on the multi's, na mean but overall decent battle

Best line to me

Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
only reason your hot....
is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'

.........Sherlock.........

Desenut§ · 09-26-2003, 04:52 PM

Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
only reason your hot....
is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'

360 or 1,2,3...whatever check ya datebook
your days are numbered...
ya turned right, but that's the opposite direction 'great' took

decent if played concepts..

Trail had all poor concepts.. and they weren't flipped well...

Vote- Wordage

R.A.M. · 09-26-2003, 05:34 PM

word smashed this ²²²²² in this battle. some fuckin hard lines real fresh shit good to see. closer was dopeness. some other ill stuff..

Word'll put on brass knucks n' leave a good impression
toss ya up into the air, let tha remains..fall to pieces
forget head of ya class, Word is yo mutha-fuckin teacher
don't get it twisted...it's ya neck I mean
what goes around comes around, like an exorcist scene

that shit was raw man.

next man WAS mostly filler. gotta come with some nice punches man. thats what seems to win nowadays..

vote: wordage

Cryogen · 09-26-2003, 06:03 PM

Smokes shit was bad.....up ya game dawg.....wordage had some coo shit..

My vote - wordage.

Lackadayz · 09-26-2003, 06:13 PM

smoke still on that old style tip.
switch it up a little homie..and focus more on multis and punches.

Wordage took this withoutta doubt.
alot word's shit was 'meh' .

vote : wordage

Diphtheria · 09-27-2003, 12:27 PM

up over noshows

Wordage · 09-28-2003, 10:51 AM

Using my one post to thank everyone who voted and critiqued the battle so far. Appreciate it.

props to Smoke as well.

Diphtheria · 09-29-2003, 04:58 PM

Wordage wins

Wordage 3-1
Smoke Trail 2-2

09-23-2003, 09:15 AM	#1 (permalink)
Serge dot T You're in Serge country. Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 22,129	49. Wordage 2-1 vs 50. Smoke Trail 2-1 ..The RBL Rules & Regulations.. RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time RBL Votes Due By Sunday, 11 o’clock PM: Eastern Time Each battler is entitled to up their thread ONCE. Upping includes counting votes, discussing votes, or replying period. Each time you up your thread more than once you'll lose 1 vote. You must vote on at least six battles EVERY week.. For every vote that you are missing, you will be deducted that number. Make sure to edit the links of the battles in your check-in post. If there is enough evidence or reason to suspect favoritism (dickriding) the person accused will be eliminated from the RBL. There are no crew or outside votes, meaning you must be in the RBL. An for the vote to count you must VOTE under your League name. NO ALIAS VOTING PEOPLE!! 4 Lines: Minimum; 30 Lines: Maximum, and the bar range, or amount must be agreed on by both battlers. You may edit your verse, ONLY if you’re the first cat to post ya verse and The 2nd guy hasn’t posted his shit yet. Word of the Week!!!! IV Any head caught biting will be banned from the League or any RBL Tournaments. All questions go to: rapmusicnovel@yahoo.com __________________ Mike Tyson "He was screaming like my wife." - On Tyrell Biggs “[He] called me a ‘rapist’ and a ‘recluse.’ I’m not a recluse.”- Defending his character "I can sell out Madison Square Garden masturbating."- Being real

09-23-2003, 04:19 PM	#2 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,925	checkin in, goin like 14-18 lines __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-24-2003, 07:14 AM	#3 (permalink)
Wordage The Coming of Age.... Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 288	Checkity check. 14-18 sounds good to me Smoke. 1. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642322-95-fatal-words-0-1-vs-96-awe-post7345336.html 2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...ostid=73453433. 3. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642304-61-klobb-sixteen-2-0-vs-62-muti-5-6-a-post7353527.html 4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7353544 5. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7353836 6. http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642306-65-stony-1-1-vs-66-zeitgeist-1-1-a.html#post7360355 Last edited by Wordage; 09-26-2003 at 08:16 AM.

09-25-2003, 04:14 PM	#5 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,925	nice begining, but every1 gets good nameplay aint u seen but this is your end dawg, nuthin can save u, not even IV// yea you should have picked the no show option you aint hot, pop your color, casue your record is droppin// i rip out your heart and shoove it down your throat you expeirenced, your 'words' have age' only way u recive votes// dawg it time to turn you off, hand me the remote after this battle youll have my lines in your sig as your quote// so you think you rep our culture you almost dead dawg check out my vultures// flyin over your head, ready to rip off your legs oh well, smoke came to knock you down a few pegs// on these rap boards, but your picked to win ofcourse you stiff as a board and ligts as a feather, but bkus i made u a corpse// get shyt straight, casue you message is kinda unclear i know you scared of me, but its good you tryin to face your fears// i went 18, 9 to you lower and 9 to your upper other MC's are appitizers, im eatin you bitch for my supper// g/luck, did this kinda on the moment when i just got home, so whatever not complainin thiou, 1, g/luck __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-25-2003, 08:17 PM	#6 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,925	http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-com-battle-league/642318-87-da-dime-0-2-vs-88-thuglove-0-2-a-post7357393.html heres 1 __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-25-2003, 06:58 AM	#4 (permalink)
Wordage The Coming of Age.... Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 288	IV, schmivy.. ²²²²² dont try me.. Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes only reason your hot.... is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches' here to get off on the right foot, ²²²²² pay attention Word'll put on brass knucks n' leave a good impression toss ya up into the air, let tha remains..fall to pieces forget head of ya class, Word is yo mutha-fuckin teacher don't get it twisted...it's ya neck I mean what goes around comes around, like an exorcist scene 360 or 1,2,3...whatever check ya datebook your days are numbered... ya turned right, but that's the opposite direction 'great' took leave you lookin lost, like some kinda foreigner you ain't fit for the title... Word'll drop ya like the AOL from Time Warner

09-25-2003, 11:16 PM	#7 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,925	http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7358746 heres 2 __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-25-2003, 11:34 PM	#8 (permalink)
EnMity Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Philly Posts: 10	Wordage- Openin line wasnt too good, Teacher line ..ight ....excersist line ..eh, OK ....And the Time warner , Pretty good, landed solid . 6/10 Smoke Trail - Blah, Filler all the way thru ...Only line i liked is face ya fears and thats a lil played, 4/10 Vote- Wordage __________________ RM Record 0-0

09-26-2003, 04:28 AM	#9 (permalink)
Zeitgeist DARK Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 96	Vote=Wordage Wordage The "time warner" line was nice..and i kinda liked the "throwin matchies" ish.. The rest was average IMO. Smoke Nothing stood out for me in this verse at all..not one line grabbed my attention..punchies were weak..and switching from 2 bar rhymes to 4 bar rhymes,and the back again,didnt really help the flow of the verse.. Word took it.. pz.

09-26-2003, 09:52 AM	#10 (permalink)
Tony Elbow >><< Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Blah Posts: 2,079	word took it mostly coz smoke was terrible flow was shit punches were shit the lot Word had a couple of nice lines: Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes only reason your hot.... is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches' ^^was ya best Vote: Wordage __________________ Want Albums? http://twarez.org

09-26-2003, 01:40 PM	#11 (permalink)
NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: FLA Posts: 837	vote = Wordage His punches are better, and more hard hitting, even though he should slack some times, Smoke didnt appeal too much at all yall both can work on the multi's, na mean but overall decent battle Best line to me Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes only reason your hot.... is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches' .........Sherlock.........

09-26-2003, 04:52 PM	#12 (permalink)
Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: H-Town Posts: 739	Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes only reason your hot.... is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches' 360 or 1,2,3...whatever check ya datebook your days are numbered... ya turned right, but that's the opposite direction 'great' took decent if played concepts.. Trail had all poor concepts.. and they weren't flipped well... Vote- Wordage __________________ Fuckin a sig since the 80's

09-26-2003, 05:34 PM	#13 (permalink)
R.A.M. Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: bigO Posts: 435	word smashed this ²²²²² in this battle. some fuckin hard lines real fresh shit good to see. closer was dopeness. some other ill stuff.. Word'll put on brass knucks n' leave a good impression toss ya up into the air, let tha remains..fall to pieces forget head of ya class, Word is yo mutha-fuckin teacher don't get it twisted...it's ya neck I mean what goes around comes around, like an exorcist scene that shit was raw man. next man WAS mostly filler. gotta come with some nice punches man. thats what seems to win nowadays.. vote: wordage

09-26-2003, 06:03 PM	#14 (permalink)
Cryogen Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,120	Smokes shit was bad.....up ya game dawg.....wordage had some coo shit.. My vote - wordage.

09-26-2003, 06:13 PM	#15 (permalink)
Lackadayz ..zyadakcaL Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 8	smoke still on that old style tip. switch it up a little homie..and focus more on multis and punches. Wordage took this withoutta doubt. alot word's shit was 'meh' . vote : wordage

09-27-2003, 12:27 PM	#16 (permalink)
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09-29-2003, 04:58 PM	#18 (permalink)
Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U" Join Date: May 2002 Location: Baltimore Posts: 12,254	Wordage wins Wordage 3-1 Smoke Trail 2-2 __________________ º\|-\|ýbrìd Åñgël§º Nebulotic \| Ferocious Fists \| Eulogy \| Mizzery \| NumSkull Espionage \| Such-N-Such \| Metheus \| Tempest II \| MetaSin A.O.D \| Ebbenflow \| Freefall \| Warren Worthington III malus \| Transcript \| 9th Wonder \| Conflict \| Diphtheria Young Dip - Why.. NEW NEW SHIT

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09-28-2003, 10:51 AM	#17 (permalink)
Wordage The Coming of Age.... Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 288	Using my one post to thank everyone who voted and critiqued the battle so far. Appreciate it. props to Smoke as well.

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