summer tourney RD 2: 07- insanity V 32- liquidlife

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Old 07-13-2003, 12:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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summer tourney RD 2: 07- insanity V 32- liquidlife



WELCOME TO ROUND 2 OF THE
VERN & LOJAK
SUMMER TOPICAL TOURNEY


verses are due THURSDAY @ 9pm eastern
votes are due SUNDAY @ 12pm eastern

each participant must vote on atleast 6 battles

:: TOPICS ::

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...hreadid=602095

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01- drug abuse
02- casual sex
03- club life
04- beach week
05- insomnia
06- war
07- teen pregnancy
08- heaven & hell
09- rapmusic.com
10- guilty conscience



couldnt decide on one....so i'll use them all





No need for an introduction...we already know eachother well
Through papers, needles and nostrils...we've been to heaven and hell
We've had our fair share of hoe's...look at all the victims
We use to pimp so many bitches...fuck em' and never kiss them
I lost count how many girls...maybe those drugs were a factor
There is one that sticks out...that we met at that club "Disaster"
I believe it was spring break...with many hoes to choose from
Her leather skirt was tighter than rubber....to bad i didnt use one
We clicked instantly after a casual fuck along the water
Then it clicked...how this story now involves our daughter
And theres a war going on inside...and my body is losing
But you dont care...you just like to get high and fuck im assuming
You like to fuck chicks and joke about it on message boards
Ha...dont get scared now kid....whats the weapon for?
I've been telling you all along man...you did this to ya self
Now the most deadly disease known to man is attacking ya health
But dont listen to me...your the one that did this
"Share the news" with your girl....you know, the one you "clicked with"
All those times your were lost up in pussy and so addicted
I was the voice in ya head giving oppertunity kid...but u missed it
Im your conscience man...and this suicide note is twisted
How do you feel about AIDS...the disease your wife and kid live with??
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casual sex

Another late night at the studio, wrappin up tracks
Skies overcast; moon light can barely pass in the cracks
I glance at a lamp, as it flickers shadows dance in its cast
Strapped for cash, so there’s no chance at catchin a cab
I happen to pass, that bad path where fiends come and find
Crack and Amphetamines through means of guns and knives
The alley’s dangerous but the streets seem numb to crime
I should be fine, I’ve made this walk at least a dozen times
Head straight forward, too scared to look at my left
I hear muffled screams and pleads, but yet I’m actin deaf
Two men huddling, don’t wanna see what happens next
As they touch subtly, an undressed girls ass and breasts
I snapped I guess, she was too young to be depraved this way
I made my way, towards the rape I had to save the day
As I drew closer, I could hear her tryin to strain and pray
Hearin her say, “Dear God, why? I embraced the faith”
“Take this pain…”
that’s when he stuck his dick in her mouth
He was equipped to turn out, any chick who spit the sperm out
He was a full-sized dude, prolly played the o-line in high school
Blocked the nickel and the dime too, now used to get high to
And his scrawny accomplice, wasn’t quite starting on offense
More like the waterboy, who sat warming the knots-in
The bench, cocky responses from behind his big friend
From the dumpster he watches, her slob his tip end
Couldn’t wait to dig in, that’s when I made my emergence
From shadowed curtains, I surfaced, and gave a disturbance
The scrawny kid just ran, while I was punchin and kickin his man
There I was hittin this man, who still had his dick in his hand
The fight ensued, and of course the big dude’s gonna lose
If the bad guy wins, boo… what’s that end gonna prove??
The end of the scene this, lean chick curled like a fetus
Turns 16 in a week-it’s, a tragedy to see-this
Queen bruisded and beaten, wounds seepin wit semen
One dude’s knocked out sleepin, the others no where to be seen-when
She looks at me screamin, “What the fuck were you thinkin?
Things where so sweet-then, for some reason you came out swingin!!
I need cream to eat-and, it’s plain that I need
The Franklins paid when, I play in, his rape fantasy”

Stunned and appalled-it’s, my fault-this bitch is bust for cash??
So I stole a hundred from his wallet… and fucked her ass
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how gay is that?....and your late too homie....its way past 9pm
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how gay is that?....and your late too homie....its way past 9pm
verses are due THURSDAY @ 9pm eastern


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he posted at 8:54

no he didn't....he posted later than that....
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hmmm.....my shit says he posted @ 954....yikes....let me throw a verse 2gether
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liquidlife - nice verse... good imagery.. and vocab, nice twist at the end...

insanity - very nice, the imagery was great, i could see what was happenin in my head, and i didnt care to read all of it... nice twist at the end too

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i just want to bring to Vern's attention that Insanitys verse is over the bar limit
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im going with insanity on this one, i like how liquid incorporated every topic but it threw away the effect on your verse, maybe if you kept one and went with that it may have been diff, dont get me wrong, the verse was nice, but i had nothing to go off of, on the other hand insanity your verse was nice, the imagery was great, pretty vivid, and it had a nice flow, everything fit together perfectly, props to both , but my vote goes to...


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the line limit for the tourney is...


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i just want to bring to Vern's attention that Insanitys verse is over the bar limit
your verse was edited AFTER the past due limit...

Vern's rules... 9 PM Eastern

your original verse was:

1bar
2 bars
3 bars
4 bars...

so either Vern can DQ us both or in the spirit of good competition let peeps vote
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J Emcee-
Had a nice verse, especially the rhyme scheme and flow. You didn't pick a topic, which hurt a little, but the way you did it was nice. But since you did pick ALL of them, you didn't use all of them. I didn't see insomnia or rapmusic.com in there.

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Had some very nice imagery. Stayed on topic well. Could've used more vocab but you got ya point across pretty well. Nice job on the topic.

Vote-Insanity, had a nice verse as said above. J emcee's was nice but it lacked in topic, so it didn't have the imagery or anything that Insanity's did.
 
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since you both did actually post, i let the voting continue, i didn't want another DQ, regardless of bar limit, and seeing that he did post on time there's no reason really for me to DQ anyone, so the person with the most votes advances and that's insanity


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