Painted Picture

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Old 07-06-2003, 11:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Painted Picture

this isnt one of my poems, but i dont know who it's by, but I really like it, you guys might know me at *prncessRekar*, but my name got screwed up...so this is my new one...

I'm gonna paint a picture, a picture with a twist;
i'll paint it with a razor blade, i'll paint it on my wrist
and if i paint this picture a red fountain will appear
and through this gushing fountain my trouble will disapear

at a place where i dwell i met a boy, i love so well
there he took my heart from me, and now he wants to set it free
i went home and cried in bed, not a single word i said
my father came home late last night and looked for me left to right

through my bedroom door he broke to find me hanging from a rope
he took a knife to cut it down and on the floor he found.
'dig my grave dig it deep, marble stone from head to feet
on the stone please place a dove to show the world i died for love'



I know its sad, and depressing, but i like it.
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Old 07-07-2003, 10:20 AM   #2 (permalink)
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thats pretty tight shit right there^
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Old 07-07-2003, 11:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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ahh... brilliant poem. so depressing and i've felt like this before... but lawd... this was a great piece of poetry.
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Old 08-05-2003, 07:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 08-06-2003, 12:45 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Damn yo.... thats a fucked up poem right there! I feel it though. I love its depth and the message that it sent!
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