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Old 06-27-2003, 08:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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too long, too strong
i need a little help. i can write as good as anyone else but once i start i can't stp, and i end up with these verses that are pages long. i'd like tips if anyone can give em too me. iceheart2021@hotmail.com
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Old 06-27-2003, 11:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Find a good ending line. Try and edit your verse so that it has the message you wanna convey, and find a good way to end it... like putting something that puts the verse in perspective and adding *oomph* to it as well.
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Old 06-28-2003, 09:26 PM   #3 (permalink)
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