Tourney: Kill or be Killed: Drinking Sucks VS stickman

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Old 06-22-2003, 03:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Tourney: Kill or be Killed: Drinking Sucks VS stickman


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- Matches will be posted Sunday (6-22-03) night.
- Verses will be due 5pm estern time Tuesday (6-24-03)

- battle verses will be 10 bars, no more no less... 1 bar under or over the limit will activate a DQ.

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This tourney will be ran by me, if i think a vote/votes are not legible they will not count. i make the decisions...
NO SHOWS WILL BE PUNISHED - so if you think u might no show speak now or forever hold you peace. no show punishments will be arranged by me... and trust me the punishment will NOT be nice...

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Old 06-22-2003, 08:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 06-23-2003, 12:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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i'll post tomorrow or tuesday, i got that work
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Old 06-23-2003, 08:00 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Robbed himself, hes his own crook
short bitch..
stand up to me & get of those phone books
if looks could kill, u must be a vampire dood
cant see urself in mirrors
cause ur own reflections scared of you
duke i dont buy it, dont lie now
beat me again?
ur skull must be as thick as ur eyebrows
ur ego dies now, how can he be proud
i heard u rock shows
& by the looks of u, u stage dive in empty crowds
how'd u get so ugly, ur pictures a shame
i only gave u respect
cause ur photo lives up to ur name


try to drop by tonight or tomorrow morning, if you cant its cool, i know how work goes... goodluck
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Old 06-23-2003, 08:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I really hate this geek… on the net tryna fake the heat
he was like “please” n’ “may I?” when I made him take a seat
was gonna take it easy, but I don’t give leeway to fucks
ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks
check the tombstones, ya bout to get ya name engraved duke
‘cause after I ‘rip you’ …Seeny will do the same to you
“RM Champion” that’s not you, little kid …forget it
n’ after I win the belt …I’ma come back to whip you with it
look -> “you suck n’ at this point I’m past tryin” \/
I’ll beat you ‘right down’ …like the arrows in that last line
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Old 06-23-2003, 11:55 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Drinking- punches and personals were nice. flow was kinda off, rhyme scheme was good, although some might say it was hard to read (not me so dont worry) overall a nice drop

Fav Line: ur skull must be as thick as ur eyebrows

bwghahahahahhaah omg


Monster- Niceness, you seemed angrier than usual in this battle, good creativity and original punches.
Fav Line: ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks


Closeness



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Old 06-23-2003, 11:56 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 06-24-2003, 12:06 AM   #8 (permalink)
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good battle...


i thought drinking took this

his verse made me laugh more


stick was dope, but i thought drinking edged this one
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Old 06-24-2003, 10:03 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Good battle.

Drinking - You had me laughing throughout your verse, and that eyebrow line was funny as shit..flow was there, had some multies in the end-bar rhyme scheme with that abb aba style .. that's coo' .. overall, nice verse. disses were there...

Monster - One thing, I know you can come better than you did. Flow was there, had some multies here and there. Disses weren't as strong. You basically said you'll be champion and he's not most of the time. Decent verse. I didn't like your closer tho.

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Old 06-24-2003, 10:28 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Drinkins verse wuz hillarious.... I'm sorry monster..but you didnt try hard enough....thass real..you had 2 lines I really liked..but the rest wuz mediocre...and against someone who wanted your head that bad...you jus lost..
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Old 06-24-2003, 12:32 PM   #11 (permalink)
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i read both verse twice...

and i have to say, monster had a better flow and stronger punches then his opponent..


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Old 06-24-2003, 01:56 PM   #12 (permalink)
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uhhhhhhh..hard to battle to vote on..

but i gotta vote - DS

i was expectin alot more form monster..this is the worst verse i seen from him since i came back..notihn really made me laugh..no real stand out lines..a few decent ones..DS came pretty good..jus a few funny lines made him get my vote..apart from that it was completely equal..the closer was nice..and the eyebrows line..and i was also feelin the stage divin line..funny shit..
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Old 06-24-2003, 03:35 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Vote - Drinking Sucks

His verse had some funny lines and nice personals,, Had me laughing throughout it.. But he seemed like he wanted this match more.. Monster came nice but just not enough to win.. I liked the whip you with the belt line and the opener but those are the only ones I felt stood out.. DS edged this one out.. with more punches that his slightly more..

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Old 06-24-2003, 03:35 PM   #14 (permalink)
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drinkings verse was real personal
i shat myself reading it

monster your verse was good, but i thought youd come way better to tell ya the truth

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Old 06-24-2003, 04:32 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Monster's verse:

I really hate this geek… on the net tryna fake the heat
he was like “please” n’ “may I?” when I made him take a seat(decent opener)
was gonna take it easy, but I don’t give leeway to fucks
ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks(nice)
check the tombstones, ya bout to get ya name engraved duke
‘cause after I ‘rip you’ …Seeny will do the same to you(decent)
“RM Champion” that’s not you, little kid …forget it
n’ after I win the belt …I’ma come back to whip you with it(nice)
look -> “you suck n’ at this point I’m past tryin” \/
I’ll beat you ‘right down’ …like the arrows in that last line
(nice creativity wit the last line)

the verse has sum cool punches and nice creativity..but i wasnt really feelin ur energy..Ive read a few of ur verses and this isnt ur best work..dont get me wrong..this was a decent battle verse..i just expected more from u...
8/10 blood drops

Drinking Sucks:

Robbed himself, hes his own crook
short bitch..
stand up to me & get of those phone books(LMAO!)
if looks could kill, u must be a vampire dood
cant see urself in mirrors
cause ur own reflections scared of you(decent)
duke i dont buy it, dont lie now
beat me again?
ur skull must be as thick as ur eyebrows(lol)
ur ego dies now, how can he be proud
i heard u rock shows
& by the looks of u, u stage dive in empty crowds(hahaha)
how'd u get so ugly, ur pictures a shame
i only gave u respect
cause ur photo lives up to ur name(nice ending)

the punches were straight up direct!..i liked the verse..the phone book line was my fav...also i was feelin the ending..
8.5/10

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Monster:

was gonna take it easy, but I don’t give leeway to fucks//
ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks//

Drinking Sucks:

Robbed himself, hes his own crook//
short bitch, stand up to me & get of those phone books//

vote: drinkin..
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Old 06-24-2003, 04:38 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Both of you came pretty good. I expected monster to come much better but he didn't. I believe if he would have, he could've won. But DS had a nice flow, and nice punches and came out better than Monster.

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Old 06-25-2003, 12:14 AM   #17 (permalink)
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Vote- Monster

he came nicer without the pic, even though DS had some lines, i dont think he would have done as well without the pic. Still an entertaining battle.
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Old 06-25-2003, 12:24 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Old 06-25-2003, 01:50 AM   #19 (permalink)
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Basically, I agree with Vengeance.

Drinking no offense but you woulda got handled if you didn't use the pic, using peeps pictures shouldn't be allowd in the tourny in my opinion, but Monster still had a better flow and some nice punches, both came good....But Monster didnt resort to using a pic, so ima go with Monster on this one

Nice battle fellaz

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Old 06-25-2003, 02:32 AM   #20 (permalink)
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he has my picture, he should hae used it, votes shouldnt count if you are voting against me for using a pic, thats fucked up

kid did this in like 5 of his battles, even went to a different site and got storms pic to use.

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