Tourney: Kill or be Killed: Ninth Wonder VS Dis-Honour

[Un-SeeN]

Verses:

- Matches will be posted Sunday (6-22-03) night.
- Verses will be due 5pm estern time Tuesday (6-24-03)

- battle verses will be 10 bars, no more no less... 1 bar under or over the limit will activate a DQ.

Originally Posted by Un-SeeN

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[Ninth Wonder]

Checkin In

[castro'DAMUS]

Im here...

[castro'DAMUS]

Shit, im destroying him dead
especially when,
his verses are the first fuckin word that I said
He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment
RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
no matter how hard you try,
battling me, kid your outta league like IV
‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
but im like naw,
he just likes peepin the other dudes pic
Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall


Stay at your level aka dont play off my verse, thanks ever so much

[9th Wonder]

Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
The reason?
Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self
Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
When claimin you bang with thugs…
……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely
On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
………………………it was one of your favorite moments
I’ll win this fast,
So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle
And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms

[Drinking Sucks]

vote 9th..

shit was clear that 9th wanted this, came harder at DH and more creative punches and word play with cool flow.

DH had a good verse, i didnt think 9th would top it till he dropped, he lacked alittle bit in his verse which was the downfall

vote on me vs monster

[Strike2]

well I actualy saw it different...iono if this ell count..cuz me and diss is fam...but I am pretty coo with both... let me break it down..



Shit, im destroying him dead
especially when,
his verses are the first fuckin word that I said

pretty creative..nice..

He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment


concernin the first line..makin a real verse pretty nice


RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
no matter how hard you try,
battling me, kid your outta league like IV

ok line..

‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead

kinda played concept..

Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
but im like naw,
he just likes peepin the other dudes pic

lol nice line...

Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall

pretty coo line..

Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
The reason?
Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self

hmmm ionooo

Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
When claimin you bang with thugs…
……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely

lol ok line...

On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
………………………it was one of your favorite moments

coo line

I’ll win this fast,
So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle

naw...

And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms

pretty coo line...

I jus felt dissy came harder..not that much better...

[RAW CLOWN]

DH's verse:

Shit, im destroying him dead
especially when,
his verses are the first fuckin word that I said(nice)
He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment(coo)
RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
no matter how hard you try,
battling me, kid your outta league like IV(nice)
‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,(nice)
but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
but im like naw,
he just likes peepin the other dudes pic(lol)
Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall
(decent ending)

your verse didnt have all the flow that I was expecting outta u DH but it had sum cool punches and mos def creativity..
7.5/10 blood drops


9th Wonder's verse:

Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
The reason?
Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self(cool)
Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
When claimin you bang with thugs…
……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely(HAHA)
On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
………………………it was one of your favorite moments(whoa!)
I’ll win this fast,
So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle(nice)
And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms
(decent ending)

the flow was a bit better than DH's verse..but also I was feelin the punches of ur verse 9th..mos def a better overall verse..
8.5/10

Flow: 9th
Creativity: DH
Punches: 9th
Personals: 9th

vote: 9th

**u all get reps!** nice verses by both..I hate when i read a battle and both verses suck..and I have to vote..I like giving breakdown votes when there is compitition...

1

[solution!]

uhhh..i got dissy winnin this at the moment..but i dunno if its jus coz im dissapointed with ninth for comin weaker than normal...so ima read the verses again later on..then vote..

[storm-g]

Ð!§-HðñðuR


Shit, im destroying him dead
especially when,
his verses are the first fuckin word that I said
shit.. funny

He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment
hittin him with the combo.. cool


RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
no matter how hard you try,
battling me, kid your outta league like IV
hah

‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
alright

Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
but im like naw,
he just likes peepin the other dudes pic
hahaha.. nice

Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall
good

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overall im really impressed by this verse.. it was strong all the way through

it seems you've gotten better after i destroyed you.. taught you a lesson maybe... heh

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Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
The reason?
Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self
second line.. nice

Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
When claimin you bang with thugs…
……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely
aright


On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
………………………it was one of your favorite moments
haha.. u used it in your verse.. maybe its one of ur favorite moments


I’ll win this fast,
So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle
no

And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms
didnt like it

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good verse.. fresh read here as well..



overall dishonour was better... he ripped shit


just wittier


VOTE- DISHONOUR

[castro'DAMUS]

Should be 3-2, Shock's thing was basically a vote for me....but hey 2-2 I guess.....I hope Shock votes Ninth now, LOL


uppin

[Omen]

Ð!§-HðñðuR


Shit, im destroying him dead
especially when,
his verses are the first fuckin word that I said
lol.. good opener

He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment
liked the relation with the opener..


RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
no matter how hard you try,
battling me, kid your outta league like IV
lol funny but not really to effective I felt

‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
Sorry Dissy but played like Strike commented on earlier

Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
but im like naw,
he just likes peepin the other dudes pic
lol. best part in the verse..

Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall
decent.. these gravestone lines were expected with that graph above..

Your verse was nice.. few good punches.. flow was ok.. I can't catch i to well with this new style everyone is doing.. but you came good.. some creative lines in there



Ninth Wonder

Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
The reason?
Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self
lol@ 2nd line.. enjoyed

Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
When claimin you bang with thugs…
……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely
decent


On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
………………………it was one of your favorite moments
lol I remember when he said that shit.. lol..


I’ll win this fast,
So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle
Played puzzle line

And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms
good closer

you cam consistent with punches like DH.. I caught your flow a little easier.. overall some good content.. and nice lines..

Both verses got some laugh out of me.. but none really stood out in my opinion.. I think both could of possibly came better.. this was a good match.. evenly done in my opinion.. but honestly.. I felt 9th was alittle more consistent.. thats what is the deciding facotr on my part.. DH I liked your verse.. you opened up nicely and then it seemd as if you started to trail just a tad.. I felt 9th was just a little more consitent with his verse.. but to me this battle could go either way I had a touch time deciding and read each verse more than once.. G'Luck to whoever wins..

[castro'DAMUS]

3-3

uppin

[LeeHarveyOswald]

Mr. Dissy

Shit, im destroying him dead
especially when,
his verses are the first fuckin word that I said

lmao

He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment

nice

RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
no matter how hard you try,
battling me, kid your outta league like IV

decent i spose

‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead

wonder....and bread...who didnt see that coming?

Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
but im like naw,
he just likes peepin the other dudes pic

lmao@peepin the dudes pic...that was funny

Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall

the sloser was killer dammmmnnn


Mr. Ninth

Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
The reason?
Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self

it's ok.....bragging lines arent my fav.....

Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
When claimin you bang with thugs…
……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely

lmao...this was good

On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
………………………it was one of your favorite moments

storm punches lol....

I’ll win this fast,
So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle

funny....

And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms

closer was decent


Diss: nice flow and just funny shit all the way through, nicely planned punches, originality, just could work on the personals...i mean, hes been here since 01....you gotta know sumthin

Ninth- funny, ill give you that, there just seems to be a couple lines of filler, not alot, just the bragging lines an shit, nice all the way through, good drop

Vote= Dis Honour

[Honey Boo]

this was pretty close...

dissy, not your best effort here, ive see u come alot harder(ie rbl tourney...lol)...this was an average verse, but u had a few nice punches...

9th, u as well ive seen hit alot harder, u only had a couple of nice lines, tha rest was a bit blah...decent though...your thugs line was proly ya best...

close...but i go with..

vote = dissy

[Un-SeeN]

Final Votes.

Ninth Wonder = 3 Votes
Ð!§-HðñðuR = 4 Votes

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Ð!§-HðñðuR Advances to next round.


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