Some punches...any good?

Serenghetti · 06-22-2003, 02:46 PM

Faggot ²²²²², taking a chance battlin' you isn't costly//
He's the type to go to Charlie Angels and jack off to Bossley//
Lacks skills, bares no resemblance to a killer//
He's a perfectionist on throw away lines; he's an anal filler//
You got a preview of my verse no you don't wnna battle/
You can't handle my flow; like a white water rafter without a paddle//

That's some of my metaphors. I'm more of a personals battler.

Any good? They aren't my best.

Lethal_E · 06-22-2003, 05:22 PM

[gay alarm

Kareem · 06-22-2003, 05:42 PM

^lmao

Serenghetti · 06-22-2003, 06:08 PM

Okay, this is the Lyrical Dojo right? So shouldn't you try and help me elevate as opposed to doing shit like that.

Again, not my best shit.

And Lethal E, if your wack ass line is an example of your skills, I wouldn't talk shit. That's fucking wack.

TonyRome313 · 06-22-2003, 08:15 PM

Don't listen to these cats. To be honest you're better than almost everyone of these cats.
You kept a rhythm and did a good job bein' belittling.
My big key advice is to work more syllables into your style.
example "I'm ill enough to straight up dis you for no reason/ I'm colder than snow season, when it's 40 below freezin'/"- Eminem

Courtland Kid · 06-23-2003, 12:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Serenghetti

Okay, this is the Lyrical Dojo right? So shouldn't you try and help me elevate as opposed to doing shit like that.

Again, not my best shit.

And Lethal E, if your wack ass line is an example of your skills, I wouldn't talk shit. That's fucking wack.

Amen. And Yes, that was fucken whack...

you basically took the "white water rafter without a paddle" out of 8 mile. If you base your skills on that movie, you should sell your computer and quit rapping. Rapping shouldn't be DIRECTLY inspired from a block buster hit.

The "jerk off to Bossely" line...that was just utter stupidity, what about the kids that dunno what your talking bout? You have to make lines more appealing...

Kareem · 06-24-2003, 07:29 AM

kid ur wack

TonyRome313 · 06-25-2003, 05:07 PM

You're better than Kareem... but that's an understatement.

[PS: To let everyone know right off... I often use Em's lines and verses as reference points because no other emcee's lyrics are as commonly known by others.]

DanneRo · 06-26-2003, 04:11 AM

Lmmfao@ Gay Alarm

Emerg-Emcee · 06-26-2003, 10:43 PM

Wack .. But everyone starts out wack, except me..

06-29-2003, 01:06 PM

punches were ill

Hibernation · 06-29-2003, 01:09 PM

Wack, Learn What A Punchline Is

n-thrawl · 06-29-2003, 04:42 PM

06-22-2003, 02:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
Serenghetti Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Chicago Posts: 9	Some punches...any good? Faggot ²²²²², taking a chance battlin' you isn't costly// He's the type to go to Charlie Angels and jack off to Bossley// Lacks skills, bares no resemblance to a killer// He's a perfectionist on throw away lines; he's an anal filler// You got a preview of my verse no you don't wnna battle/ You can't handle my flow; like a white water rafter without a paddle// That's some of my metaphors. I'm more of a personals battler. Any good? They aren't my best.

06-22-2003, 05:22 PM	#2 (permalink)
Lethal_E I.W.M. Join Date: May 2003 Location: downloading a virus to your serve Posts: 86	[gay alarm __________________ Ill leave you burned like a fat Kid on valentine's day// when she laughs at you drops the flowers walks away //[

06-22-2003, 05:42 PM	#3 (permalink)
Kareem Still Ballin Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: New York Posts: 2,952	^lmao __________________ banned for flaming the site The IP Address is: 62.219.127.87. The host name is: bzq-127-87.red.bezeqint.net.

06-22-2003, 08:15 PM	#5 (permalink)
TonyRome313 ROMEssiah Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: 313 Posts: 460	Okay... Don't listen to these cats. To be honest you're better than almost everyone of these cats. You kept a rhythm and did a good job bein' belittling. My big key advice is to work more syllables into your style. example "I'm ill enough to straight up dis you for no reason/ I'm colder than snow season, when it's 40 below freezin'/"- Eminem __________________ "Dogg- I'm at the end of my leash, drownin' in the abyss of wisdom/ Been touched by God so many times, got CSC charges against him/" -Tony Rome #1 Cypher Emcee (July 03)

06-24-2003, 07:29 AM	#7 (permalink)
Kareem Still Ballin Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: New York Posts: 2,952	kid ur wack __________________ banned for flaming the site The IP Address is: 62.219.127.87. The host name is: bzq-127-87.red.bezeqint.net.

06-22-2003, 06:08 PM	#4 (permalink)
Serenghetti Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Chicago Posts: 9	Okay, this is the Lyrical Dojo right? So shouldn't you try and help me elevate as opposed to doing shit like that. Again, not my best shit. And Lethal E, if your wack ass line is an example of your skills, I wouldn't talk shit. That's fucking wack.

06-25-2003, 05:07 PM	#8 (permalink)
TonyRome313 ROMEssiah Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: 313 Posts: 460	You're better than Kareem... but that's an understatement. [PS: To let everyone know right off... I often use Em's lines and verses as reference points because no other emcee's lyrics are as commonly known by others.] __________________ "Dogg- I'm at the end of my leash, drownin' in the abyss of wisdom/ Been touched by God so many times, got CSC charges against him/" -Tony Rome #1 Cypher Emcee (July 03)

06-26-2003, 04:11 AM	#9 (permalink)
DanneRo ... .. . .. ... Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: D.C. Posts: 166	Lmmfao@ Gay Alarm

06-26-2003, 10:43 PM	#10 (permalink)
Emerg-Emcee I'll Put U in The ER. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 260	*Wack .. But everyone starts out wack, except me..*

06-29-2003, 01:06 PM	#11 (permalink)
Jafaar Bond Guest Posts: n/a	punches were ill

06-29-2003, 01:09 PM	#12 (permalink)
Hibernation American Scumbag Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 15,232	Wack, Learn What A Punchline Is

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