rate this

ATHEN · 06-22-2003, 09:14 AM

on such a low key I swell how does it feel
when I catch wreck at a jam u ask is it real?
to all u people I'm D.L. I keep em eager to listen
when I release I blow minds like a tube of nitro-glycerine
lyric assasin I'm all about rappin see now I'm the
one who made u turn and haul butt cheeks
to the rhyme I'm addicted I snap like a button
people stop look and listen like I'm E.F. Hutton
call me the live one the son of my mother
thinking about taking me on don't go there brother
the style like my game is quite effective even accapella
I'll have u bop your head like the next fella
then after that grab my pooch then I'm swayze maybe
grab a chic so I can do da oochie cooch

-Cao- · 06-22-2003, 01:10 PM

Lethal_E · 06-22-2003, 05:43 PM

not bad not good

Kareem · 06-23-2003, 02:40 AM

thats was alright

TonyRome313 · 06-27-2003, 01:30 AM

Normally I'd tell someone to find their rhythm 1st but not in this case. You seem to still be in the phase of gettin' your better thoughts into the verse still. Recognize that their is no cutting you down in this. The point is for you to recognize where you stand in your quest for greatness. Right now you should be writing everyday, coming back to what you wrote, and then recognizing what you should've said/ what didn't need to be there/etc. etc. your next step will be rhythm but you have several years ahead of you to work that into play gradually.

VerbIsGoingDown · 06-29-2003, 03:44 AM

it was so so

Nimrod · 06-29-2003, 01:03 PM

aiight

Hibernation · 06-29-2003, 01:04 PM

Its AIight

Budget Nudist · 06-29-2003, 01:04 PM

06-22-2003, 09:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
ATHEN Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: live in the AK. alaska Posts: 6	rate this on such a low key I swell how does it feel when I catch wreck at a jam u ask is it real? to all u people I'm D.L. I keep em eager to listen when I release I blow minds like a tube of nitro-glycerine lyric assasin I'm all about rappin see now I'm the one who made u turn and haul butt cheeks to the rhyme I'm addicted I snap like a button people stop look and listen like I'm E.F. Hutton call me the live one the son of my mother thinking about taking me on don't go there brother the style like my game is quite effective even accapella I'll have u bop your head like the next fella then after that grab my pooch then I'm swayze maybe grab a chic so I can do da oochie cooch

06-22-2003, 01:10 PM	#2 (permalink)
-Cao- A Tru Visionary Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: So.California Posts: 261	eh..

06-22-2003, 05:43 PM	#3 (permalink)
Lethal_E I.W.M. Join Date: May 2003 Location: downloading a virus to your serve Posts: 86	not bad not good __________________ Ill leave you burned like a fat Kid on valentine's day// when she laughs at you drops the flowers walks away //[ Last edited by Lethal_E; 06-22-2003 at 05:44 PM.

06-23-2003, 02:40 AM	#4 (permalink)
Kareem Still Ballin Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: New York Posts: 2,952	thats was alright __________________ banned for flaming the site The IP Address is: 62.219.127.87. The host name is: bzq-127-87.red.bezeqint.net.

06-27-2003, 01:30 AM	#5 (permalink)
TonyRome313 ROMEssiah Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: 313 Posts: 460	Normally I'd tell someone to find their rhythm 1st but not in this case. You seem to still be in the phase of gettin' your better thoughts into the verse still. Recognize that their is no cutting you down in this. The point is for you to recognize where you stand in your quest for greatness. Right now you should be writing everyday, coming back to what you wrote, and then recognizing what you should've said/ what didn't need to be there/etc. etc. your next step will be rhythm but you have several years ahead of you to work that into play gradually. __________________ "Dogg- I'm at the end of my leash, drownin' in the abyss of wisdom/ Been touched by God so many times, got CSC charges against him/" -Tony Rome #1 Cypher Emcee (July 03)

06-29-2003, 03:44 AM	#6 (permalink)
VerbIsGoingDown Banned Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,022	it was so so __________________ 1000 posts in 22 hours......fuck a Verb

06-29-2003, 01:03 PM	#7 (permalink)
Nimrod Nimi Hendrix Join Date: Dec 1999 Location: The Foundation Posts: 53,687	aiight __________________ <--- The Rise of Nimi Hendrix ---> is Here Listen to Album Sampler and Purchase here www.myspace.com/nimrodmusic https://www.paypal.com/us/cgi-bin/we...7d42731da209a2

06-29-2003, 01:04 PM	#8 (permalink)
Hibernation American Scumbag Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 15,343	Its AIight

06-29-2003, 01:04 PM	#9 (permalink)
Budget Nudist :cock: Join Date: May 2001 Location: None of your business Posts: 0	hot __________________ quit freeposting

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