The Introduction

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Old 06-21-2003, 09:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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The Introduction

Ay wut up how yall doin. See im new ta hte board and I neva have been good wit givin mahself names. So can yall do me a fava? And gimme one. based on my battle styles? Yes, fa yall wonderin thats mean you gotta keep track of me. But dont worry if yall vote ill be sure ta return ta love ya feel me? I aint go be bogus like dat cuz i know aint nobody got time ta watch some kids process just ta give him a name. But if yall do, ill be sure ta return the fava and vote all ya battles and all that. As for a sample of wut im comin wit hes a quick 16:

Yo, lemme tell em who da sickest man
I was sick befo black people was runnin from da clan
Before Sanford started havin all his heart attacks
I was sick when back when micheal jackson was black
And Im always go remane this sick, or go out wit a fight
Remember me? I was sick when Eminem was still White
i got so many lines, you cant keep track of the tally
I was sick back when LL "Cool" J was "Hot" and goin back ta cali
And i stay frozen, from mah head ta da soles of my feet
I was sick before all Microsoft needed was ctrl, alt, delete
Which means i always been sick, split emcees like *schwing*
ya think verses only 8 lines because i split sixteens
I was sick before Baby's mouth was blingin
I was sick when Ja Rule got jumped on the streets fa singin
when 50 cent was just startin of as nickel,and he STILL aint a G (play on letter g, like $1000)
haha nah tell me, wut cat out there is sicka then me?

just a lil somthin somethin nuttin too fancy, hit me back on the rates yall, thanx, peace out
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Old 06-21-2003, 10:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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its good but i def think i heard that before on a freestyle on soundclick 1 time. u have sum differnt lines added but still....i dont no if u meant to or not just sayin.
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Old 06-21-2003, 11:31 AM   #3 (permalink)
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yea i know, props ta da man mad skillz, i just got done listenin to it. thats why lol, i liked the flow, i just added my own lyrics. Like i said i wasnt tryin to hard. Dont think I bite lyrics and styles, just playin around wit it.
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Old 06-21-2003, 11:49 AM   #4 (permalink)
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nice verse i liked it keep spittin son
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Old 06-21-2003, 11:51 AM   #5 (permalink)
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it was good, although i think you focused to much on how u were sick before whatever...anyways it was a good drop
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Old 06-21-2003, 11:59 AM   #6 (permalink)
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aight in hear ya. Thanx fa da comments, still uppin yall
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Old 06-21-2003, 12:52 PM   #7 (permalink)
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it was pretty nice

when 50 cent was just startin of as nickel,and he STILL aint a G (play on letter g, like $1000)
haha nah tell me, wut cat out there is sicka then me?

you didnt need the thing in parathesis tho
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Old 06-21-2003, 01:24 PM   #8 (permalink)
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yea i see watcha mean bout the parenthesis thing, but then again this is the dojo, lol
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Old 06-22-2003, 05:09 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 06-22-2003, 01:12 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Old 06-22-2003, 02:17 PM   #11 (permalink)
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thanx, fa sho ima work on it. you know this..
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