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Suicidal Rap not literal shit though
ay yo whas up everybody, im new to this forum and shit and posted these two verses in two other threads in this site but aint nobody givin they opinions about it and hopin peeps here can tell me what they think about how i wrote this shit...anyway here it is
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man, what the fuck am i feeling?/
i dont like the cards fate is dealing/
always dealt wit pain and never healing/
as the world turns lessons in life are learned/
for me wit each fucking turn i get burned/
God must have it in for me/
probably wants me left as a memory/
but not by fate or another man/
he must want me dead by my own two hands/
(suicide)
should i give into it?/
should i slit my wrist?/
(suicide)
can you picture me dead?/
or would you radther see me suffer instead?/
you can tell how many times ive had a broken heart/
just let me pull up my sleeves and show you the scars/
if my depression was a physical being/
you wouldnt beleive in the fucking shit you are seeing/
i wanna change the world, i wish my raps could/
fuck stormy wheather my life has flash floods/
all this shit has me feeling ballistic/
im gonna end up just another fucking statistic/
lately my thoughts are 'i wish i would die'/
knife in my hand lookin in the mirror starrin death in the eye/
if i kill myself would you cry?/
please spare me the fucking lies/
when you love people and they dont love you back/
it hurts, you can feel your heart break and crack/
if you look into my eyes and visualize/
you'll feel my pain and see me commit suicide/
to those dummies jumpin out of windows tryin to die, right/
use a gun, its faster, no time to think twice/
as i write these suicidal rhymes in my rhyme pad/
i got the pen in the right, knife in the left hand/
as if ya'll care, im tellin how i feel/
i wanna kill myself, im only bein real/
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