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Old 06-18-2003, 05:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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my freestyle
south side g'z
fuckin yo freak'z
makin my chese
u bette than me ΛΛΛΛΛ please
this rap shit iz to easy
my style is cool like a breeze
im hotta than hell durin summa
i aint wit baby but i'm da # 1 stunna
so watch out cause im getin yo girlz #
then fuck her & split after she suck my dick
shit i'll take yo money & yo honey
big pimpin bitch it aint that funny
big justin b my name da yongest
ΛΛΛΛΛ in da game but still da best
ΛΛΛΛΛ dont trip cause im da shit
& my flow got u tripin but fuck it
im finished so all u ΛΛΛΛΛs rate my shit

wut u think
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Old 06-18-2003, 06:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 06-18-2003, 08:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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no offence but it was pritty bad. and its not a freestyle if you text it either..keep rhyming and practacing tho..peace
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Old 06-19-2003, 06:43 AM   #4 (permalink)
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If that took more than 5 sec, that is horrible. I could come up with that in my sleep.

A rough start, a horrible start, but keep at it. Trust me you will get better, you have a lot of room for improvment.
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Old 06-19-2003, 11:18 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 06-19-2003, 11:38 AM   #6 (permalink)
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thanx i new it wasn't good it really was afreestyle cause i wrote it off tha top of my head
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Old 06-19-2003, 04:08 PM   #7 (permalink)
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If that took more than 5 sec, that is horrible. I could come up with that in my sleep.

A rough start, a horrible start, but keep at it. Trust me you will get better, you have a lot of room for improvment.


i know i'm only 14 so i have alot of time
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Old 06-19-2003, 11:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 06-22-2003, 01:16 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 06-29-2003, 01:11 PM   #10 (permalink)
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