rate dis #2

MaliciousChic · 06-13-2003, 11:59 AM

Cut from a newly sliced bear
leading through mostly technical layers//
proficiently// dominating//mountains and terrains
tough like medium rare steak//
eatin chicken from shake n bake//
gauranteed to get a ••••• rate// my mistake//

I'll smack a bitch w/ a used tampon
run home and saw off her left arm
have no use for dick sucka's
neva loved them// y should i trust them

Hack a bitch or a ²²²²²// who's first??//
coulda did ••••• ²²²²²// wanna ride ina hearse??//
create a pain// in between ya legs//
then use w/e 's left ova as fish bate

walkin a lil slated// lil overrated//
my rhymes stay candy plated
~~~~done~~~~

Resilient. · 06-13-2003, 02:22 PM

Look, in your other piece I peeped, I had some hope for you. This went against it. Sorry to be so mean girl, but really. You had no flow, nothing in your piece was nice. There was no concept in your lines, it was incoherant rhyming. I told you, work on your shit. Even before posting your writtens, work on them. You had a poor example of rhymescheme.

I don't want to be mean, but stick to country music or something. Rap ain't ya thing.

-Weez

Idol Dot Z · 06-13-2003, 05:03 PM

shut up weezy, dont gotta be so hard, you posted rhymes like that for a year str8.

Komikz · 06-13-2003, 05:07 PM

Yo mami, ya flow wasn't there, but it was good, u just gosta work on bar structure iight....and for Weez, nucca let me see u spit, since u always talkin shit bout her, and if u think u can murk me, come battle me ²²²²².....

4gotten · 06-14-2003, 09:21 AM

i agree wit them work on tha flow ma

Resilient. · 06-14-2003, 10:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Idol Dot Z
shut up weezy, dont gotta be so hard, you posted rhymes like that for a year str8.

No i didn't..LOL

I admit, I was bad. But i never was thatttttt bad.

MaliciousChic · 06-14-2003, 10:26 AM

Thank yall...........Weez u can suck a dick b/c I know I'm not that damn bad.........and if u think I'm that bad just wait, u only give me more fuel to get goin, i feed off ppl like u. U see the s/n right?? Just watch out, cause just for that comment about " stick to country music " I'm comin afta ya ass, and I haven't lost a battle yet.........so be prepared.

Yall otha dudes, much love.........and stay tuned cause i ain't stoppin my rhymin cause of one stupid dude.

krisp · 06-14-2003, 11:14 AM

lol sounds like a challenge weeman.....

Resilient. · 06-15-2003, 10:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MaliciousChic

Thank yall...........Weez u can suck a dick b/c I know I'm not that damn bad.........and if u think I'm that bad just wait, u only give me more fuel to get goin, i feed off ppl like u. U see the s/n right?? Just watch out, cause just for that comment about " stick to country music " I'm comin afta ya ass, and I haven't lost a battle yet.........so be prepared.

Yall otha dudes, much love.........and stay tuned cause i ain't stoppin my rhymin cause of one stupid dude.

Girl. You said "Rate This" and it was WACK. You have no talent. If you want, I'll battle you. I don't care. Never lost a battle? Did you battle 3yr olds?

Quiet Hoe.

Resilient. · 06-15-2003, 10:30 PM

And please don't text me to death!!

-Cao- · 06-22-2003, 01:20 PM

not bad not bad...

Budget Nudist · 06-29-2003, 01:06 PM

ehhhhh 4

06-13-2003, 11:59 AM	#1 (permalink)
MaliciousChic Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: philly ya heard Posts: 8	rate dis #2 Cut from a newly sliced bear leading through mostly technical layers// proficiently// dominating//mountains and terrains tough like medium rare steak// eatin chicken from shake n bake// gauranteed to get a ••••• rate// my mistake// I'll smack a bitch w/ a used tampon run home and saw off her left arm have no use for dick sucka's neva loved them// y should i trust them Hack a bitch or a ²²²²²// who's first??// coulda did ••••• ²²²²²// wanna ride ina hearse??// create a pain// in between ya legs// then use w/e 's left ova as fish bate walkin a lil slated// lil overrated// my rhymes stay candy plated ~~~~done~~~~

06-13-2003, 02:22 PM	#2 (permalink)
Resilient. ILLWEEMAN Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: En-Why Sucka Posts: 23,774	Look, in your other piece I peeped, I had some hope for you. This went against it. Sorry to be so mean girl, but really. You had no flow, nothing in your piece was nice. There was no concept in your lines, it was incoherant rhyming. I told you, work on your shit. Even before posting your writtens, work on them. You had a poor example of rhymescheme. I don't want to be mean, but stick to country music or something. Rap ain't ya thing. -Weez __________________ I'M JUST A H O O L I G A N OF CYBER RAP (What The Shit is a Textmaster?) ------------------------- iLLWeeZGoD Baby! My RBL Battle Vs. Linesman

06-13-2003, 05:03 PM	#3 (permalink)
Idol Dot Z Capo Status Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: paterson,nj Posts: 4,034	shut up weezy, dont gotta be so hard, you posted rhymes like that for a year str8. __________________ shake, bake, skate, vroom vroom...i'm getting money nigguuuuhhhh Certified Gangstas E-UNIT Blood IN...Blood Out

06-13-2003, 05:07 PM	#4 (permalink)
Komikz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Jerzey Posts: 3	Yo mami, ya flow wasn't there, but it was good, u just gosta work on bar structure iight....and for Weez, nucca let me see u spit, since u always talkin shit bout her, and if u think u can murk me, come battle me ²²²²²..... __________________ I love me some pink pussy, nmeccuh.....

06-14-2003, 09:21 AM	#5 (permalink)
4gotten Lryical Genius Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Bang Bang Pow Pow... I'm in Columbus and ain't never seen Bow Wow Posts: 1,768	i agree wit them work on tha flow ma __________________ *GUZZ* - Lyrical Prophet-

06-14-2003, 10:26 AM	#7 (permalink)
MaliciousChic Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: philly ya heard Posts: 8	Thank yall...........Weez u can suck a dick b/c I know I'm not that damn bad.........and if u think I'm that bad just wait, u only give me more fuel to get goin, i feed off ppl like u. U see the s/n right?? Just watch out, cause just for that comment about " stick to country music " I'm comin afta ya ass, and I haven't lost a battle yet.........so be prepared. Yall otha dudes, much love.........and stay tuned cause i ain't stoppin my rhymin cause of one stupid dude.

06-14-2003, 11:14 AM	#8 (permalink)
krisp you knowwwwwww Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 5,018	lol sounds like a challenge weeman..... __________________ THE RM POLICE: Locking up homo Posters since 2007. Currently in homo posting jail: On homo posting probation:

06-15-2003, 10:30 PM	#10 (permalink)
Resilient. ILLWEEMAN Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: En-Why Sucka Posts: 23,774	And please don't text me to death!! __________________ I'M JUST A H O O L I G A N OF CYBER RAP (What The Shit is a Textmaster?) ------------------------- iLLWeeZGoD Baby! My RBL Battle Vs. Linesman

06-22-2003, 01:20 PM	#11 (permalink)
-Cao- A Tru Visionary Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: So.California Posts: 261	not bad not bad...

06-29-2003, 01:06 PM	#12 (permalink)
Budget Nudist :cock: Join Date: May 2001 Location: None of your business Posts: 0	ehhhhh 4 __________________ quit freeposting

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