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Old 06-11-2003, 04:09 PM   #1 (permalink)
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see if i need help ok.?.thanks man..

ill drop 3 things i wrote recently there jsut one versus.....the 1sr and last ones are paradys....1st one thugs mansion....3rd pateintly waiting...

For years I was troubled, with now place to ventilate
A kid lost on the streets, his heart fild with hate
What could I do,fleaing with no definet destination
Now im dead in my own mind with no reincarnation
I was scared to go outside because of the pouision
Cause the soundz of gunshotz became firmilar noises
I cant even trust my own dogz,this shyts insane
I take a shot of heneey a day,to delay the pain
willI make it threw the night to see the sunrise
will I be alright? Cause death wouldn’t be a surprise
I just need s pot 2 run 2 when im feelin down
Were all them true thugz roll and girls are thuged out
I need a place to role so I can rest my soul
A place were I can be safe, until I grow old
And in my mind I can picture a place in ghetto fashion
I reside in 845,im alive in thugz mansion

you couldn’t get rid of me, now im back for your hole family
bitch stabbed my chest, come on like you got the best of me
you cant eliminate me my weak points are invisible
tho my life is miserable and conditions get unlivable
I come back stronger and wiser each time
And sounding more intellectual after wrighting every rhyme
I walk threw a graveyard chillen with the paranormal
Cause deaths already excepted me, im waiting by its portal
Just show me the light, god give me the will to fight
And stop these evil demons from plaging my mind 2night
But it dosent look bright, im trying to live right
But satins passing me a blunt and beging me to light
Im trying to stay away from what causes me 2 stray
But temptations alive and well and asking me to play
im going crazy, I feel I cant even bang muh lady
In fear that ill pass this curse, to my 1st born baby
But lately, iv been getting strong and harder to kill
Im like a the hulk lifting weights after a steroid pill
But still, i don’t know if I got what it takes
To erase all of mans hate, but wait
Iv already won, iv conseled ur fait

iv been pateintly waiting, with people hatting debating
my body is shakin, im takin, rap 2 a fusion,im choosin,
cause confusion,im boosin, on 190 best,no less,
fuck all the rest,my chest, contains the heart beat, myfeet,
kickin conrete, like its sheet, my disease with nothing to treat, its heat
changing faces, and places, actrracting all races, my case is
people mistreated, an angles bein defeated,im heated,
iv pleaded, still bleedin, but no ones stop the pain, im insaine
im commin out from the curtain,im certain, I have u flertin
with death,one breath, is all ill take, To concentrate, let me reiterate,
my bx complection, mixed with my mission objection, reflection, my conception
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Old 06-22-2003, 05:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 06-29-2003, 01:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 06-29-2003, 05:16 PM   #4 (permalink)
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