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Old 06-05-2003, 09:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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flow VS reading

Could the way some one reads your post mess up they way they preceive the flow?? I said one of my verses over a beat and it sounds fine...also the people that heard me sat it sounds fine...what do ya'll think??
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Old 06-05-2003, 09:29 AM   #2 (permalink)
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it depends, if its a really complicated flow then only the writer will prolly understand it because he knows wot it shud sound like, but the best way to do it is not have the flow really basic but make it really easy to follow, and put lots of multies in, and never havestreatched lines cos it can fuck up everything. just try and make the flow really easy to grasp but not necciserily basic or simple. and TRY and keep every line nearly the exact same length, and try counting the syllables so u can match the next line. dunno if that helped but i try.
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^^^^ exactly what i try to do an peeps tell me my open mics are ill
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aight, thanks for your help. I'll try n' do the shit you said.

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Matters on the person....not everyone reads and comprehends ya verse at the same speed as you....
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Q:Could the way some one reads your post mess up they way they preceive the flow??

A: Yes, it could and it happens often..if you have tricky flow then thats good..thats what makes you different and stand out from the other MC's

My advice to you is to not focus so much on what you can do text wise focus more on your audio/vocal approach
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thanks for all the shit, Iwill do some audio. I got the program I just need to get a new mic, mines fucked.
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Krysto posted exacly what I was gonna tell ya'. But if you do care what you post on here find a way to write in flow.
I personally write in flow. There's a specific way most professionals write so that one another can read it in flow.
That's why you'll see me with a comma at the main pause or the 1/2 measure of a bar and dashes at semi-pauses that build the flow.

example:
(You ain't shit- Wit' aces, you couldn't take this/)

Obviously a weak line (i'm not wastin' somethin' decent on an example) but you see the format?
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hmmm, tony is there any way I can get your e-mail and we could talk more indepth about this. I would love to learn some more about what you are talking about. You allready tought me a great deal but I feel like there is a lot of vital information that I need ....like I don't know what a main pasue is or a 1/2 messure and what not......peace
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