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Old 06-02-2003, 07:17 AM   #1 (permalink)
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i got a couple STDs that cant be cured and cant endure the future, Its like I dont like life no more, these triflin whores dun got my best, a ²²²²² chase a fluffy breast and want to rest without no condom or no time to test, now problems is what Im left.... my dick burn like urns or crusines from chefs, now I see pure girls thats looking mean in dress. I mean whats left? to kill for a thrill, or stand still and beat my dill... this life aint fun, especially thinking about my unborn son, maybe if i make profits ill cop a clone, and teach him how to shoot hoops and rip a microphone, dont really like alone but thats the life i had to choose, my conversations onesides with nobody but me and booze, deeply in the blues until a geek concocts a cure, whats more, im making money and keeping it offshore, i wish i was more dumb so all my problems could be numb, perhaps if that was fact i wouldnt masterbate with backup from my thumb, im black and then some, i act like ²²²²²² primates in animal kingdom, im not gay im my say im right straight, ok, i admit, i let a faggot suck my dick, and maybe fuck a guy in drag, but fuck it i didnt go back and brag, i keep it real and denied until freestyles i tried, besides they got me with the slow speed homocide, its time to cry but you know what im out of tears, tellin my deepest problems here without a fear, been without a peer since I was in the 12 grade, but yo im out this bitch my new girl hit me wit a page
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Old 06-03-2003, 11:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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extacy tablet habits quickly clear the static and grab chicks with content in conversation that feels like its from another station, my brainwaves behave crazed close to trama, act like wacko jacko without kids and lammahs, D nice the name and lifes the game and rage is the stage, or maybe a book of mazes if so i behind by serveral pages..........
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Old 06-06-2003, 08:34 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Good flow..with meaning full content..some multies too

you could use some meta's and complexity an it would be a sick read

nice drop 8/10
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