yo can sum1 check my shit & tell my how my rhymes can be tighter

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Old 06-01-2003, 08:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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yo can sum1 check my shit & tell my how my rhymes can be tighter

will sum of u vets show luv to a bro & check my shit out & tell me how i can improve my lyrix

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Old 06-01-2003, 08:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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can i get a reply please. thanks
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Old 06-06-2003, 09:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
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the lyrics were good..feelin it...only way to get better is to practice

also this belongs in the audio forums
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