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Old 05-29-2003, 01:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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what do ya'll rate this...*haters stay da fuck out*

your not good, your dreaming, and of course you misunderstood / your misplace so let your place be took with pace / your nothing but a fraud, on stage the audience gives you "no-applause" / take ya' head outta ya' ass, you michael jackson loving fag / u disgrace rap, all you do is talk crap, you better of hosting a commerical show to make us LAUGH



^ rate that 1-10 overall..
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Old 05-29-2003, 01:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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6, u've been here for 2 years tho, why do u need advice... judging by your profile...
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Old 05-29-2003, 02:10 AM   #3 (permalink)
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6, u've been here for 2 years tho, why do u need advice... judging by your profile...
blah.. i was just practicing on how to battle for the past 2weeks, for the fuck of it ... i like doing it for fun...



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Old 05-29-2003, 06:10 AM   #4 (permalink)
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6.4 n hate verb but stick to audio
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Old 05-30-2003, 02:17 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Yeah man, that verse was like a little boy in Brazil... werd

No hating tho, u just need to work on it...
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Old 05-31-2003, 02:15 AM   #6 (permalink)
Text is Far 2 Easy...
 
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Keep practicing Verb, you'll get the hang of it...
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Old 05-31-2003, 02:34 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Keep practicing Verb, you'll get the hang of it...
yo verb check out my battle ta see some hott shit
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Old 05-31-2003, 03:01 AM   #8 (permalink)
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you should write like


blah blah blah blah bnlah abl/
na;a;;a;am;alma;laml;aml;/
aml;am;am;lml;aml;aml;/

it's easier to read
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6/10 some points was there but coulda used more elements in it an i think u already know that
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