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Old 05-27-2003, 03:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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read and rate, tell me how to improve plz
sometimes I..
find it hard to be a.... child of god
but when faced upon the obstacles I look inside my heart.
nothin can stop me, even if you suckas would pop me,
fulla lead ta drop me, too late he's already got me..
on a path of righteousness, born in his likeness kid.
so wether you bite this shit, I'ma be writin it,
cause I'm fulla soul. the only way you holy,
is fulla these bullet holes,
I suggest you sit and listen, scripts are reminiscant
of somethin above your level before it was even written
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Old 06-21-2003, 01:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 06-21-2003, 02:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 06-21-2003, 10:10 PM   #4 (permalink)
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its not too bad.....work on flow and have someone teach you rap elemnts...like multis,imargy..ect........... jsut preactice
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Old 06-22-2003, 01:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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