Keystyle by Misskey....."Not So Gray"

MISSKEYdaQUEEN · 05-26-2003, 10:20 AM

I sat in the corner thinking of you
grieving for you..
missing you.
Fresh tears flowed over all ready evaporated trails of despair.
I sat in the corner enveloped in darkness
A blanket of depression covering me
A blanket so warm and inviting
and hiding me of potential realities of hope.
I sat in the corner against the cold drafty room wall
stared at the gray walls
Not really gray..
but my tears and sorrow had washed away all true color
So gray is the color of choice
The gray walls
the gray bed
the gray tears
the gray fingers that wiped away the tears..
the gray coldness that cradled my in this gray bassinet of sadness
I sat in the corner thinking of you
but was interrupted by warmth
Warmth interrupted my comforting coldness...
My gray cold blanket was being pulled away
I pulled it back..
but then it disappeared
Where is my cold?
Where is my gray?
My gray window that was once cold and uninviting betrayed me..
I sat in the corner and gazed at yellow sunrays
the yellow
the yellow sunrays

I just did this...I think doing keystyles helps bring things out of me...any type of critique(sp?) would be appreciated.

I hope you all enjoy!

TuNed RooT · 05-26-2003, 10:27 AM

When you miss this man you love and cherish or whatever you feel for him, everything becomes sad and lost for you, it seems. Without him, their is no brightness within your day or life and all you say is grey and all objects colorless. Yet, when you think of him and think postive when he's on your mind. Now, you may begin seeing colors, because once you think of him and feel him in your heart, it reassures you that he is with you mentally. This is what I believe the meaning is, just what I got from it. Correct me if I'm wrong, but overall, very extravagant piece that you've created. My blessings..

MISSKEYdaQUEEN · 05-26-2003, 10:53 AM

You are partly right. You see...when you see what you want to see in an individual and it isn't what it is, you can put yourself in a place that is non-conducive to good things for yourself..DEPRESSION.

When you start seeing him..or anything for what it really is...and stop dwelling on the "grayness" then color comes back..it may be uncomfortable at first but..it will be better!

UFO the Phoenix · 05-26-2003, 12:21 PM

oooooh love this right here

I like the word-play on the colors you talked about

mixing colors with emotions and objects...very deep stuff

Interesting poem right here no doubt

this was a keystyle...wow

Much props

stay up

PEACE AND GODBLESS

TuNed RooT · 05-26-2003, 03:03 PM

Thanks for the correction, boo. Did my mind right, heh. Uppin' for her..

MISSKEYdaQUEEN · 05-26-2003, 03:26 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by TuNed RooT
Thanks for the correction, boo. Did my mind right, heh. Uppin' for her..

nah..you got what you got from it...I wouldn't say you are wrong though!

koban4max · 06-08-2005, 02:33 PM

that was tight ..haha

MISSKEYdaQUEEN · 06-08-2005, 03:19 PM

Wow...blast from the past...lol

goodness..I forgot about this,lol

Bhitiah · 06-08-2005, 05:59 PM

Wow, How did I miss this?????

This was way cool girl ...Damn, You on some weird shit lately...lol

illpoetical · 06-08-2005, 10:28 PM

yo queen, first off thanks for replying to my poem and my baby is most likely gonna be alright, i appreciate you extending yourself out like that if i get a chance ill call, my baby could still be sick just not as bad as the doctors thought but i have to wait and see, i will let you know, again thanks for caring and being there, your heart is so big

tight piece as usual

stay up

RealMS · 06-12-2005, 12:25 PM

Yall sometimes amaze me with these "keystyles." Shouldn't be any excuse for writers to somehow not write. I like how you turned it around. Funny how you say you don't wanna feel better about the situation ("pulling it back" line) because I think I do the same thing sometimes.

-Much Love

MISSKEYdaQUEEN · 06-13-2005, 03:27 PM

I would actually appreciate someone closing this piece so my piece on the 2nd page can be upped for comments..

mods please..this peace is 2 yrs old,lol.

05-26-2003, 10:20 AM	#1 (permalink)
MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther.. Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Glenville REPPIN BIYAAAATCHES!! Posts: 17,637	Keystyle by Misskey....."Not So Gray" I sat in the corner thinking of you grieving for you.. missing you. Fresh tears flowed over all ready evaporated trails of despair. I sat in the corner enveloped in darkness A blanket of depression covering me A blanket so warm and inviting and hiding me of potential realities of hope. I sat in the corner against the cold drafty room wall stared at the gray walls Not really gray.. but my tears and sorrow had washed away all true color So gray is the color of choice The gray walls the gray bed the gray tears the gray fingers that wiped away the tears.. the gray coldness that cradled my in this gray bassinet of sadness I sat in the corner thinking of you but was interrupted by warmth Warmth interrupted my comforting coldness... My gray cold blanket was being pulled away I pulled it back.. but then it disappeared Where is my cold? Where is my gray? My gray window that was once cold and uninviting betrayed me.. I sat in the corner and gazed at yellow sunrays the yellow the yellow sunrays I just did this...I think doing keystyles helps bring things out of me...any type of critique(sp?) would be appreciated. I hope you all enjoy! __________________ Queen's MySpace Page Queen's Other Myspace Page biaaatches *********************** The battles that count aren't the ones for gold medals. The struggles within yourself—the invisible, inevitable battles inside all of us—that's where it's at.~Jesse Owens (1913-1980)

05-26-2003, 10:53 AM	#3 (permalink)
MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther.. Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Glenville REPPIN BIYAAAATCHES!! Posts: 17,637	You are partly right. You see...when you see what you want to see in an individual and it isn't what it is, you can put yourself in a place that is non-conducive to good things for yourself..DEPRESSION. When you start seeing him..or anything for what it really is...and stop dwelling on the "grayness" then color comes back..it may be uncomfortable at first but..it will be better! __________________ Queen's MySpace Page Queen's Other Myspace Page biaaatches *********************** The battles that count aren't the ones for gold medals. The struggles within yourself—the invisible, inevitable battles inside all of us—that's where it's at.~Jesse Owens (1913-1980)

05-26-2003, 12:21 PM	#4 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS! Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: Oceanside CA USA Posts: 2,965	oooooh love this right here I like the word-play on the colors you talked about mixing colors with emotions and objects...very deep stuff Interesting poem right here no doubt this was a keystyle...wow Much props stay up PEACE AND GODBLESS __________________ *The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:* JESUS CHRIST Oddie Sloan

05-26-2003, 03:03 PM	#5 (permalink)
TuNed RooT Love is introduction .. Join Date: May 2003 Location: Within the womb... Posts: 869	Thanks for the correction, boo. Did my mind right, heh. Uppin' for her.. Last edited by TuNed RooT; 05-26-2003 at 03:05 PM.

06-08-2005, 03:19 PM	#8 (permalink)
MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther.. Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Glenville REPPIN BIYAAAATCHES!! Posts: 17,637	Wow...blast from the past...lol goodness..I forgot about this,lol __________________ Queen's MySpace Page Queen's Other Myspace Page biaaatches *********************** The battles that count aren't the ones for gold medals. The struggles within yourself—the invisible, inevitable battles inside all of us—that's where it's at.~Jesse Owens (1913-1980)

05-26-2003, 10:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
TuNed RooT Love is introduction .. Join Date: May 2003 Location: Within the womb... Posts: 869	When you miss this man you love and cherish or whatever you feel for him, everything becomes sad and lost for you, it seems. Without him, their is no brightness within your day or life and all you say is grey and all objects colorless. Yet, when you think of him and think postive when he's on your mind. Now, you may begin seeing colors, because once you think of him and feel him in your heart, it reassures you that he is with you mentally. This is what I believe the meaning is, just what I got from it. Correct me if I'm wrong, but overall, very extravagant piece that you've created. My blessings..

06-08-2005, 02:33 PM	#7 (permalink)
koban4max Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 428	that was tight ..haha

06-08-2005, 05:59 PM	#9 (permalink)
Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,168	Wow, How did I miss this????? This was way cool girl ...Damn, You on some weird shit lately...lol __________________ You can bomb the world to peices, but cant bomb into peace

06-08-2005, 10:28 PM	#10 (permalink)
illpoetical raising the bar everyday Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Long Island Posts: 1,533	yo queen, first off thanks for replying to my poem and my baby is most likely gonna be alright, i appreciate you extending yourself out like that if i get a chance ill call, my baby could still be sick just not as bad as the doctors thought but i have to wait and see, i will let you know, again thanks for caring and being there, your heart is so big tight piece as usual stay up __________________ How vain it is to sit down and write when you have not stood up to live. The skill of writing is to create a context in which other people can think.

06-12-2005, 12:25 PM	#11 (permalink)
RealMS LaLa Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: SW Louisiana Posts: 3,973	Yall sometimes amaze me with these "keystyles." Shouldn't be any excuse for writers to somehow not write. I like how you turned it around. Funny how you say you don't wanna feel better about the situation ("pulling it back" line) because I think I do the same thing sometimes. -Much Love

06-13-2005, 03:27 PM	#12 (permalink)
MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther.. Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Glenville REPPIN BIYAAAATCHES!! Posts: 17,637	I would actually appreciate someone closing this piece so my piece on the 2nd page can be upped for comments.. mods please..this peace is 2 yrs old,lol. __________________ Queen's MySpace Page Queen's Other Myspace Page biaaatches *********************** The battles that count aren't the ones for gold medals. The struggles within yourself—the invisible, inevitable battles inside all of us—that's where it's at.~Jesse Owens (1913-1980)

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