Future

[icedemond666]

Just thinkin'

hard to find as my words bend your mind

Seemingly difficult as my verbs are of a stimulating kind

Its a sign that what i speak is a vortex cyclone

that i use my pen and paper as a shield and sword

To hide whats "behind the mask" witch may seem horid

but in re-ality its just a preposterous illusion

the blood that runs thru my brain is acid fussion

I can see thru your rhymes and designs like blind fury

I dont preach all i do is speak.. to whoever listens

I'm a new design of poetry

My version is called floetry

[TuNed RooT]

"Its a sign that what i speak is a vortex cyclone

that i use my pen and paper as a shield and sword

To hide whats "behind the mask" witch may seem horid

but in re-ality its just a preposterous illusion"

Nice use of words and nice twist to make them work in what you wanted to say. Feeling the last line tremendously. I thought that this was a better Poem than your last one, which I dropped knowledge on. Other than that, nice simile with the "Blind fury" line, as well as the metaphorical trait within the line of "Pen and paper as a shield and sword" < very smooth. My blessings..

[icedemond666]

Thanx for the werds =D lol peace