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Old 10-03-2003, 09:49 AM   #7 (permalink)
Wordage
The Coming of Age....
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Canada
Posts: 288
Wordage takes it up the butt!
Phrenic

i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
8/10
smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
7.5/10
believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
7.5/10
u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
8/10
spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
7.5/10
nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
8.5/10
toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
7/10
imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
7.5/10

total= 61.5/80


Toil

your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
7.5/10
hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
7/10
when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
7.5/10
radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
8/10
ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
7.5/10
i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
7/10
no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
7.5/10
ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
7/10

total= 59/80

vote= Phrenic. Both came with some funny lines, good flow and interesting concepts. Blackhole and Fruit of the Loom lines were hilarious. Toil had the cell phone line I thought was pretty good but other than that the rest was just decent. Goodluck to both of you.
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