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Zeitgeist · 09-26-2003, 05:28 AM

Vote=Wordage

Wordage
The "time warner" line was nice..and i kinda liked the "throwin matchies" ish..
The rest was average IMO.

Smoke
Nothing stood out for me in this verse at all..not one line grabbed my attention..punchies were weak..and switching from 2 bar rhymes to 4 bar rhymes,and the back again,didnt really help the flow of the verse..

Word took it..

pz.

09-26-2003, 05:28 AM	#9 (permalink)
Zeitgeist DARK Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 96	Vote=Wordage Wordage The "time warner" line was nice..and i kinda liked the "throwin matchies" ish.. The rest was average IMO. Smoke Nothing stood out for me in this verse at all..not one line grabbed my attention..punchies were weak..and switching from 2 bar rhymes to 4 bar rhymes,and the back again,didnt really help the flow of the verse.. Word took it.. pz.