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Da Dime - "Fore-head" line was an ok opener. The flow was nice throughout, the "vegetarian" line was one I was feeling too. All in all a pretty decent verse.
Thuglove - Wasn't really feeling this, some of it didn't rhyme which threw off the flow. The concepts weren't too complex n' just didn't grab my attention. Try adding some wordplay n' like Catz mentioned not so much bragging and violence.
Goodluck to you both. My vote = Dime
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