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Full breakdown.
Dime
You can diss on my name to score-threads , but can't call Dime a homo...cuz ya moms give me more 'dome' than 'fore-heads'//1
Elementary but a decent diss.
mistaken a Dyme for Dime?? get tha word-right , how i'm a chick when my name fills tha 'father slot' on ya birth-right//2
Same as before but a solid diss.
suckin a dick wit tha rubber on is tha only time you spit-text(laytex condem) , on this site yah gonna 'C'(see) me , like join'in a 'crip-set'//3
Don't explauin stuff in parenthesis. Should just put C there and don't do stuff like Laytex=text. It'll never score points.
Dogz...you a faggot and i'm tha type to abuse-dikes , this homo done 'tossed his salad' worst than 'vegaterian food-fights'//4
That was hot. Lose the ' marks though. Dope flow.
me droppin these flows is equal to lava and magma-fills , you a thug?? pleaseee!!! you only 'hard' from a lotta 'viagra-pills'//5
Again. Dope flow. Punch is kinda elementary here with hard. But it has a rawness to it. Works.
got 2 losses cuz Dime had to handle beef in tha pro's , while this fake thug only handles his beef on tha stove//6
Beef is starting to get played. But this has a little rawness to it.
Dahm!!! all these MC battlez i'm glad to read , cuz i proves yah 'couldn't smoke Dime' if i was a 'bag of weed'//7
Fire right there. Great brag line.
its alwayz me BITCH hype'in the track , wit punchlines so hard...you would think Tyson could rap//8
Coo. Kinda simple but effective.
Dime a player...its easy I jus let tha mac get-them , ask ya girl..how my nut 'blessed her forehead' like 'Baptism'//9
Dope flow. Funny diss to his girl.
But to top it off...this little n.igg.a is still involved in school-grades , while Dime's give'in 'hard-punches' like 'pourin liquor in Kool-aid'//10
This is horrible only because you used a "punch" punch 2 lines ago. Decent as a closer.
Thuglove
Put the Snub to Your Mug, And Watch your Face Aviate//
Decapitate you and use your remains for shark bait//
Decent flow. No real diss.
If your Looking for the Next Kevorkian im the perfect candidate//
Decent brag line. Nothing spectacular.
You've seen me in battle you gotta admit my works impressive//
Pull out the "Rocket" launcher so i keep the mood Fesitive//
Nothing special here. How does a rocket launcher keep stuff festive?
Find your Neck Fractured, You Liver torn out by a pack of Hungry Raptors//
Naw on your Neck, till your blood vessels rupture//
You gonna diss him or eat him?
Watch the Buzzards and Vultures Circle around this rappers Cadaver//
This Mc's Is a Square, Take that Dick Out your Ear so you can Hear My Clear//
This doesn't work. What are you doing?
Im tha Pharoh of tha desert, call me Annibus, My blows will be all over you so call me the tatooist//
Your Rhymes is Irrelevent, Put the Canon To your dome so i could give you spacial intelligence//
None of this even rhymes.
Rip out your wind pipe, With swiss knife, Wrap a Rubber Band Around it so you can Flow (Blood Circulation) Tight//
This doesn't work.
Dime took this blindfolded. Thug, you got a lot of work to do. Need to focus more on dissing your opponent instead of braggadocio and violence...that stuff is only good for like 4-8 lines.
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